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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪5 ?: z4 ^& {; C
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SNOW
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                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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                                       February 1936
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  North country scene:  }: n' }$ q2 U& T3 U# V1 O
                                                                                               
$ A$ Y! I' ~& u& b, j+ H  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.9 z- C  }! c7 V! ^+ R
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  Both sides of the Great Wall
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  One single white immensity.. H4 f7 l$ t" R: c

6 u( _+ Z; Q' i0 U# t$ [  The Yellow River"s swift current
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  Is stilled from end to end.% \  P, f- j' }% @
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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' z% H5 y2 }. F$ o  H  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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  Vying with heaven in stature.
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  On a fine day, the land,1 r6 r% U3 o2 }* U3 G( B% n# ~
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  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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  Grows more enchanting.% T% ?% z% C: w

8 ?: p8 d' j6 u4 ]6 w+ H# E  This land so rich in beauty
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.! [8 W# H- o- \- ]) r5 ?

% X& |$ r8 Z) ]  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti
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7 p& c% n% U- C! c' Y; P( r) v) @  Were lacking in literary grace,% Y1 c, e' ^) {8 N3 ]8 W9 k5 r7 J
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  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu$ S8 v9 @0 W4 Y7 z6 X( I

: J) P- T0 z8 g  Had little poetry in their souls;
2 {5 S. `1 `  \9 L! Q  And Genghis Khan,+ ^2 f+ }# F. U  _& a; b# N

' E8 B" r1 n; m8 p( k  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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+ K! R" f8 O- ?2 J4 R  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
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  All are past and gone!2 `  g) Z" A! X2 j

; @( a  M9 m% D1 ?0 t" ]* t4 n9 D  For truly great men) _# ?: X4 B2 n/ p" q, I
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  Look to this age alone.
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2 {* |% f" P* x, N  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.
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  沁园春 雪
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2 S: g. ]4 i/ |5 t! j7 r/ J  一九三六年二月
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   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽* ^; L* }4 h3 e% o6 Z6 T- f
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高9 V, `( |' k9 F" s" \
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  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆& z5 q: `  E% z: \

  o' y1 F$ `) j  q8 A% v* a  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
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0 w9 f) p2 ~3 h/ m: J  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝7 ^1 ~' c4 ?# B& T' P, K2 q' z

4 A& o$ Y9 O8 `$ p[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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