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Love the following translation very much:
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"what did i do to you? 扪心自问4 K* _0 X# y# t, T q* H' w
Wish i knew 未曾犯君
& X8 q& H* _- j" F Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存$ U& P3 M5 l# V7 j
We are all born the same 你我同根3 a! {9 B" l( N$ p/ m+ _
Then we seperate 世起纷争 4 T# h0 {$ u( v
Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分9 F1 v2 |- A1 j$ i5 b. d
and blame turns to hate 争执不休
2 j3 q- p. W/ K* I" b we must not contemplate 日久生恨
7 e: ?7 N: q6 A, q0 { how far apart we are 不必担忧- u Y) z* L' a. X2 N
there is always a way 仇大恨深
' r/ z- {% E* P6 P3 I5 y to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线
1 S D2 s5 s# p8 |& ] 可通君心"
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except these two spots are relatively not as precise:
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"Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"
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, k& i) Z/ ]' O& ?. a; D6 e9 k' h同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"
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As a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.
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Just be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.# t/ W% E* ?& H: c- q* D
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楼主: 九月
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发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
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发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。' G9 s0 p6 U2 Y! c, _! k2 D$ H# g
