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Love the following translation very much:
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$ k% I1 v/ ?8 `+ Z8 ?- Y8 K, N9 U, N "what did i do to you? 扪心自问( L$ o" q2 b$ r' ]0 ]
Wish i knew 未曾犯君 " {1 c0 V/ Q7 f( M6 L: \
Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存5 f8 e; ^* U) A; j0 y* m* t# l
We are all born the same 你我同根
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Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分
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we must not contemplate 日久生恨
+ z% N. E7 o8 T how far apart we are 不必担忧, _- {% o* T2 C4 h
there is always a way 仇大恨深, w5 W4 e4 q$ {+ p) Y2 u! G
to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线
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except these two spots are relatively not as precise:
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) ~* r2 R8 v5 C ` ^ "Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分" I( j8 ?2 u% u1 M6 q5 ]- t
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同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"
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As a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.
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Just be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.
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楼主: 九月
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发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
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发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。. D J/ E/ c7 }+ e3 J
