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Love the following translation very much:
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"what did i do to you? 扪心自问; g. p" I8 c6 N! U" V3 m
Wish i knew 未曾犯君
, \/ T! q, K0 c1 ] Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存4 {' R' \* S* r s7 y
We are all born the same 你我同根# z7 C {* X/ i7 t" l7 g
Then we seperate 世起纷争 % R! Z0 p, v" Y
Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分! T' \; L, A, U5 J4 {, Z4 Y9 R
and blame turns to hate 争执不休
+ A1 r7 u4 q4 U0 S( Q- `: l we must not contemplate 日久生恨- J7 O2 W/ L7 p6 W* U3 w0 T
how far apart we are 不必担忧
6 s/ C" I: R7 x8 Z. f there is always a way 仇大恨深
, S: b* \$ s& S7 e1 M8 h to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线) H/ O# M, n( i
可通君心"- ~! k& y# E% i2 }9 h4 F8 N
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except these two spots are relatively not as precise:
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' R3 Y) p# E N6 B& a% x) i( u "Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"
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$ F3 E! ~7 W) l. \' d9 T* b& u同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"( S3 p+ \) W, X# F
* O d! u$ j" E! \As a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.
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6 y4 |# V; q& O8 `( `, [# xJust be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.9 c* g, B% |9 ^# _
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楼主: 九月
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发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
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发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。. |3 m. t) ?: P- y, s- a
