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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪  o( M$ b: Q' o/ @5 B
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- i3 l% Q, ^# m9 J                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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- N% V. n7 ^0 D7 H" A0 `% ^                                       February 1936+ v$ r8 P. L3 b7 E0 L* @
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8 s: [: `: @& B  North country scene:/ I4 Q- Q# [/ t/ v/ a
                                                                                               
/ a) R  Y- C1 v! [  A hundred leagues locked in ice,- G% c' f- K. p8 I/ m; E) m4 u
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.. c# ]/ a' Z$ A) W* C5 \

* A: A7 s; x9 r7 p9 ?, ]9 P  Both sides of the Great Wall3 z+ s% c! W3 f: U4 H2 F: L# d: [( u

8 [7 `1 Q1 l! t- n' ~- F5 D  One single white immensity.
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6 b4 M( C6 H2 v1 y' L9 y* H, E  The Yellow River"s swift current) \6 h. Y3 U# k/ @6 C
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  Is stilled from end to end.
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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1 P" B  @8 @, Q- C  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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  Vying with heaven in stature.: d1 ]+ a8 H; h9 l: ]/ _- H# e+ J, A4 D

/ d8 h! a$ D6 V* ?( B. v3 p  On a fine day, the land,: N) [* l- Q: J' m) x- q9 \. d
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  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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  Grows more enchanting.
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8 L" d8 ]6 X% ?8 g: Z  This land so rich in beauty
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.  ?4 S9 ^9 O- Y& X  Y. j- V

% x/ b* o  ]- W; b! ?! |  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti2 J; z. E3 g% s; a& d1 @# \
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  Were lacking in literary grace,
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, g. ~* `7 Z) E3 m4 A7 ?- R  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
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, u6 ^0 w2 G9 L% S4 a) L8 f0 F  Had little poetry in their souls;! F' V( H% u' U# F) O# L
  And Genghis Khan,
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  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched8 v' p  a5 b$ M" o$ }& y" T: O
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  All are past and gone!
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6 c; s( J! G7 o7 ^  For truly great men+ z3 ~+ L. @3 e3 R. Y
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  Look to this age alone./ a; Q) v# s6 C

) Y7 P! b- |7 @7 n( D  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.. V  c! W# q) u1 I
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  沁园春 雪
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   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽& H5 p* y# V8 V( f  l' b3 w
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高1 ]) p* x  z3 }4 |, W

2 x0 a# T' L* A  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆
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$ y* M. V7 s$ @0 F5 e  E& o7 @  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采% X  q- Z1 T" v3 t
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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