SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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  J- u5 x" |2 V5 B' r  Q* s1 j: s* bAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
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5 h5 j4 p9 B& HAir Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
! Z9 \7 z: ]& S0 f+ m7 B5 nInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
9 |: X6 a/ Q4 t; x# p% n6 z2 u) {% UPower locks
0 \7 P& Q$ v5 P0 NPower mirrors
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Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
8 @9 U8 Q5 L8 h! RBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
+ g4 c' ?2 w6 c- ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)

兰君子

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8 G  I% M; c  c% H+ HDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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! M9 }- d% y0 Z5 {- m! X6 D9 ODue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
4 R- d: W6 h+ Z3 n7 W6 [: @这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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+ N! d1 S# V' C# NDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

( A6 ]; b2 T: i; |! nFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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" F# {) G) P% \! E' F3 TSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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+ U. N7 q6 F* l, rLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 c( B0 I4 h" [" y+ B0 l"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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( z$ x1 b' U: V) a2 o( B  ~+ qSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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