SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
# o$ n( j0 d# S2 h& H* Z5 L" F) ATwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
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ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
. Q) _: _4 ]0 m" T% h8 }$ M  j# HCentral control locks,doors,windows
5 i3 B# o. h& `5 G* |: v; w9 r/ qPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
- ?) w8 G4 o/ t( |  sBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
! W) r+ f0 D% F! T( u( h  o& wAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
! _6 W. h/ [# J. iIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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1 w4 q# h- d' s. o- wPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
6 q8 h6 [: X2 x' K' ]7 G) O  CPick up on March 18-22.
8 ?, {: [+ {% y0 o; G& t7 g, mCash only please :)

兰君子

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2 g4 s$ w) j9 k; m9 O! }# uDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

9 j  N2 x: l# L/ M# X' c  WIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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; j/ s) V3 }: X" Q  Q6 mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# X7 s6 }7 y/ ^; ~# e. W7 ^- w这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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0 M' M& [7 F3 [0 qDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
$ ]7 ]$ `4 V/ zThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

0 a" z+ T" u" L& j1 E/ R7 a8 J1 wSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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0 N* e8 A# j( ^" B+ m& fLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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& @7 B# n' C" o) F: t2 m"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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; }6 I9 G/ ?$ |Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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