SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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7 t6 n3 j) d/ ?! a+ d4 QAutomatic transmission
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% i1 P2 e! m" m9 C4 |+ o$ S! r, uRemote starter and heat blocker
9 v7 G7 V5 o# m: }% ATwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
" P2 h/ S: H& Z! yAir Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
4 W1 b; c2 z5 n' h5 c& SCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
; V, Q8 D! T+ j% O" b" W- ePower mirrors
1 _, ?* C8 a: \Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
  ~0 |/ c9 y: X& A. ?& p5 |0 oAirbag: driver
/ U; J  I% y9 i! n! @Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
! o$ V, s5 j( S7 AAlarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
' n- P! I2 J$ W4 Q+ W1 ZIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

) N, Z* C  w; [. P# m3 j3 v4 YPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
8 p5 w9 U. D/ F; o; s/ `Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

; @, [% }$ v/ g' S+ g5 m( G' nIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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0 A+ W- n# @* N' E" ?' \IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
% ?3 e+ h, e) @1 }+ Y' G IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 _. t5 e, w1 Q8 V3 a( S这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

, Q+ s) E4 q. Z! w# U% D哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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# O! }$ d; E8 o6 cDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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: c  T: n5 ?  W2 y, x& |2 DLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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4 ?. B; x4 M+ S0 x, e2 A"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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0 ~3 y7 @" D6 SThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

1 @: I! ^. `' u4 vSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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