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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
/ b3 y3 `4 ~3 v' g; e,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 6 [4 l. L4 i" `( @: e3 Z' Q! t
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
( z$ ? m- A) D3 N( ?0 W/ P! L8 g1 t现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.% B* \$ r8 w* X: z, T9 {
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking./ G9 D! b" ]! P, n
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
# V- E' h8 v4 ~- w夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.6 {$ J! f, D! H$ W: m+ W% c
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
7 R; O0 W" X+ t" J4 ]3 g0 r就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
& C; x6 |' p/ M- w我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及1 i3 D- ?. B( r- C
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
8 p3 b8 c& V3 l Y( G4 L$ j世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.2 x4 u5 }9 k3 F2 |! U
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
) O! M7 M5 s6 ]$ B! J3 A想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
% N4 J, u; Y* |- J5 Q* x- H* r' q3 `最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 5 V" x n' R* P" C' E' M3 Q
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?$ M$ q$ v2 ?( l2 J: V
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.6 x6 ^* n8 Y4 }
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
! ?# M* ?5 F7 O最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
3 P& R* J5 w8 j! @; C- p% O多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
5 z7 o6 s, z5 G/ Q2 v/ {1 R5 ~8 WWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
, M& z0 c6 Z4 ^+ R% t9 X多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
" M- a& {; N+ a; o2 L4 J不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
5 Z; s: A; P- d' F1 L多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ! x+ Q' @; Y6 Z) B# e
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
' B* P* c) z% c" z3 F多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!2 p1 W6 I9 E. Y6 q* o1 r
永难平息的泪8 o/ _; F+ V4 L3 f: i
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
6 C2 L4 \7 Q% V( }9 @~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.+ V0 U+ U4 q/ H8 O1 ?9 Y1 M b1 i
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.- f3 ]& H7 y4 v b, e2 {
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
9 P8 h( k: g% F- g9 }9 h你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul - e# b; [2 ?& ^& l$ |+ C( O
一抹微笑；2 L! X+ _. S4 R4 W
一个手势；
1 w8 R& m) g1 {$ X) d H) |5 f" F一片话语，4 U n7 d( u- u7 i8 l0 k! n
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
' S: A0 d0 W5 U# }) F0 N明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner3 t( Q) P9 c9 w* r* e2 r7 }
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
' c3 X$ F2 r; }; ]$ J) |' m( }# F( X6 l7 S这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling& b ?: N, t* ]% O
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.., H: a7 W; t$ V3 V4 ^1 y
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
( F: \1 A1 T6 L2 R: \3 a我并不以为然。
$ |% Y4 u. v i& `5 |可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
7 H7 { } |% Z5 d7 p慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .0 V+ x" p9 ?& j9 Q6 W
被一种情绪所左右，
' I0 ?5 a1 G/ f5 y4 n总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .5 S) Q- o- b8 }; _5 J$ g/ w# ~1 @
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you# P$ d& S: k' H/ z
也不问我是否喜欢你，& N8 F& K2 J( ~! E
对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.$ x0 e5 X: M) Z* }! V; X( @! w
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you3 v8 t% X$ @; A: v
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you* f0 ~# o( O" `6 I" m
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil0 T |; T3 ~6 m5 m8 [6 I/ F/ I
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 3 X9 i, G+ l. J* H% ^, v
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
( n& i# W* ~4 M0 I; c! R记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
* p# V+ N+ j' U; x$ y- O( P1 Z你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
' Q2 N- u; ~5 B- Z! f. m随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
, ^2 A8 z) I, ?$ `' T, H+ a哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
% `, v2 Q6 h7 P3 b3 r* L一种声音，and your voice
. X1 [, ]" J& Z) ]- _, w也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.$ q f2 v9 ^7 k7 n! d
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
' D3 z) g3 Q! d$ ~与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
7 H) Y, s9 X* @" u B3 a* G1 G象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
0 I4 [: n9 G6 R5 y% n+ P6 `倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you." R+ G5 ^& X* ?& {
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。$ a6 y/ t. ^: K9 |" q+ |
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
, b/ T- H! E; q E3 [) H有一个能够让思念的人，7 x9 o7 M- `; k. {2 C, w
其实也是一种幸福。- K$ {0 B' D. S+ k% F3 ?- V3 ]
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
, Z7 w( U' S) j柔柔的海风，
+ u6 P' q+ Y% ~4 O; _! Q甜甜的夏天。5 r0 r3 Y- X, t* j: }6 W* X
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
) e& g" l1 [ H# V6 R2 B; u只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.0 |9 v4 j: Q! v4 E; p3 m G$ O; s
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.9 P' H1 l; A/ t) S7 b% l, ^/ L
想和你有共同的情结，
' Q: {3 S/ q+ g# Z2 S6 y共同的心愿。& ^0 Q# Q5 m( `- s8 R1 y% [
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1 |% H8 A" a: N$ M1 M好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you/ p, S+ l s7 n) {
一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together8 s9 {& u$ P H. b+ e
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
# X k; `6 }% h5 l或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.! R" D; S+ @4 q# N
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?: j' K+ \( y$ C# c$ f+ r9 z$ i
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
( ~9 v) ^1 z% o) b浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
, T7 D2 `# N/ i: W9 p7 m- Q. t或是轻轻的一吻，& [, x8 L2 L+ p( n0 H( m
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』6 M' ?% f# m( Z- u) p" |! r9 q
就足够了. That is enough.
) P% @1 p B" a$ w: O# _% K0 `这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
& n7 s6 u% M: v! Q: L终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.9 e, b8 g" `- U. r& ^
萌出了芽，
' r! N+ j/ E$ f一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
' |! V0 `& t+ M9 B# k浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
) e" a8 k$ |7 |4 {2 e如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand% h0 B, h ^4 n( G; T+ b
能够牵著你的手,/ G. v+ S2 ~2 p' c
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.# b7 x; A& V* i w d$ ?
让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. ' o1 n/ U& Z0 [( m
慢慢地细读，- S. J1 R5 }: T! \
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. - _2 ?! N% M+ y1 D, ]8 K
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
/ }, k" N5 s# D j" o+ }4 u我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor 0 Y% W/ t, S0 L! B& B" d* w2 e5 {% m0 y
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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