SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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1 _2 |2 a5 r* vAutomatic transmission
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Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
9 z" R  E4 n4 HABS Operation
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8 R3 j/ s! M" v' _Information system
- W4 Y- G# m2 M, q% I' h: mCentral control locks,doors,windows
) O; `2 p8 I, m3 w+ TPower locks
& I, C' G! J, h! E. P! W* H4 ]Power mirrors
2 r/ d, a& n0 a1 |4 c, ^2 MPower doors
Power windows
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$ b* T& U. a1 A4 i6 F! wRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
4 u! ~: j% }& n, {; xAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
9 ^" A- G/ k( a' [9 lAirbag: side
Alarm
, b8 _, H! r. Z8 q+ u* U5 ^Fog lights
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; Y. J8 h% x4 q! G**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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$ n1 z+ z8 U$ WPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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1 G* X6 M/ S3 f: q4 l. lDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

* _% A1 k0 s1 z4 _' c" X) e' TIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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; ^8 g. }$ |& _' ZIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

4 ]  L( L( b  T& F& M- U$ gDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

' g+ X8 H% n, r" {By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
/ r' P& R% a: z+ J' y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

2 z4 L5 D8 d, }6 s: h+ M( C& C* `哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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$ U0 L0 y9 O4 d, oDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# K, t7 z9 u" r/ eFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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8 H+ U/ a. g) T8 K( zLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

( Y' v" i  A* D! H- E"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

7 S- r: ~. B, `5 F$ W$ ?1 ZSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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