SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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/ |& t+ A, [+ bVEICHLE OPTIONS:
, w* E) H# t0 V2 {" _5 A+ d& uAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
" A/ P5 M% M/ u) P, T5 p  Z( C* mAir Conditioning
. z  ~' }# U# \7 iABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
, a* V' O( n& d( W* R% ]2 XInformation system
. Y9 N) e, Q2 T9 {7 vCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
, O+ p$ t3 a  h6 \2 e8 PPower doors
, Q/ W' f" D1 dPower windows
# f& x2 ~- F+ x3 K* d. A) OChild safety locks
' k, p1 c; ~1 L# q# W8 ~$ m0 sRear window defroster
) L( P/ k# U. p: D# Y5 r- Y1 b+ w$ uBluetooth hands-free operation
" m& G# b/ o' v3 M9 @5 L6 \: QRadio
7 d3 m% a! _: NAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

9 w# G) }* W" v! l  h  \2 TPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
8 B, W1 f! |) P# I" {# x5 m* fPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
; F  z$ ^, B" C* Q4 O IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* j0 |3 J# w2 R/ o5 ?这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
) h  Y: r4 ]$ J' R这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

4 I; `3 V0 ]: x) \9 c" Y0 Q6 t% MFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
( t3 ?3 B3 H- R" @7 G* r& V8 ^- OThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

" y4 o2 M6 @! v' {1 OLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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0 ~4 T, n+ r' M$ r( cThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.