SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
  i' L" Q, a% l% v2 Q5 u" B0 gRemote starter and heat blocker
9 C( i' w. Y' |6 ]Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
2 L4 E" o+ [3 i0 ?: b# |) PFour additional tires with rims
# A; E/ A4 G) u( Y7 ZAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
8 ~4 g1 n; b, P/ L7 E7 v& KIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

; C6 t' R0 \) U4 f- CPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
; [6 X/ P% z" T# j; E8 ]Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

4 ^. F6 ^# G* A# J: jDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

+ c  j% X( c, tIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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1 s/ ^, p( s' Z8 N8 H  Z9 CIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

; Q' x; Y& m- g  J这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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; l$ ?3 s- H# o) B6 S( zBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
0 K. B7 `. r4 ]: e这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

- S1 M9 w0 }4 `$ U! v1 d) o; C哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ A" E9 J: }, @Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
* J( ?$ f( x4 w# N0 A( I3 IYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

6 w4 L3 h3 W/ e' aLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

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