SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

. O- H: ]+ l6 W3 k+ K9 g& hVEICHLE OPTIONS:
. u2 l6 E1 K- kAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
0 W* p3 A1 T. C, C( LAir Conditioning
' F) p, A  L% o# R) G+ O5 b, iABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
* Q/ v# p& W2 G2 O2 F* C  m* D. kInformation system
5 u) ~' O" t# e5 ICentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
# |; {/ G1 H, {% L1 }$ }Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
1 S; D! [6 X! q  qBluetooth hands-free operation
* x$ r$ ]% N7 ORadio
  V, e- s! q+ m, ^. IAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
1 A9 ]! g% w8 H6 G6 @- ]# X/ _9 gAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
" w' g' I+ R% i& a$ K1 ^7 ^, V# ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

! H. X- V* l6 N/ R) r" _Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
' `+ P' N5 `' O& P- {$ a+ h0 aPick up on March 18-22.
9 X( W% c& p( D" g4 X* MCash only please :)

兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

" |9 H& u! s5 b) XIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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+ E0 u$ a  i6 t8 lIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
: H$ j+ Y, \# \& B' U5 u* y IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

' e  P* ?# \' j# }) H# E# G' O3 o7 hDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

9 |7 g( `/ |+ {& r哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

* n! I+ W4 V/ o! jDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
) l6 l7 Y, a# p, l$ sYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

5 c8 r8 h! @0 A& s" K" @( pLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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) L- p* `/ {) `; T$ g"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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6 p4 {: y5 m  N( tThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.