SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
7 J& T% `) e3 ~9 |Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
3 X6 ?' Q. X3 i# A) B7 kFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
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1 w. Q; O% M+ O1 N5 D) ACentral control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
Power doors
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Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
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Airbag: driver
7 F: a9 L; v% |$ y  kAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights

9 O' D8 k7 x$ d**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

. ^" w' \9 {: v. d+ `" wPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
* {" M& L- ?" p& p* E3 e& \Pick up on March 18-22.
% M# m: W6 ^' ?' r% e. eCash only please :)

兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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. k0 Z! k9 s  D8 k: @If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

! @) J# t) t" h: Z9 P4 \! UIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
+ x' i  n0 ^9 r6 z8 ? IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

- L2 J: ^8 \+ H; B) V' ?" s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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( I5 M$ B1 u1 b3 s: mBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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  p7 N5 T2 \) y! a9 @- G2 ADue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% A1 w$ T4 V; ~) D2 vFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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4 I3 o: u9 n6 iSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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5 N6 y& H& {! L  G0 f. KLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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+ R7 ]7 W5 n% h( W9 l# sSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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