SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
$ e% c- h+ b" Y  L* STwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
6 s5 K- e+ m6 S5 E0 n! i: g0 aFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
5 S, s" d# E0 }2 |8 u' tInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
3 V! F) x0 E1 A9 Z5 t7 G, ~3 aPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
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# G+ `' F* q+ G* J, Q; wAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

. ?  v# A+ S+ O' d3 a**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
! ~0 v- d+ {* PIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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3 A! c# {* o9 h* M+ Z! M' {4 tPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
, Y; j! c8 {2 b3 [Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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( D9 i, }% D% s( CDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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. d7 ~% a! X  g0 q- K" C; mIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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' o0 s: }; `: u8 d0 ^IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
2 u3 G  v! N: w) v* ]% { IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

  ?1 g% I) m" A: |6 ~: r" c  f这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

( r' h5 J: ]; \+ i" I2 z- A; vBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

4 I2 z* S. {" B哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
0 e+ E' F4 n% `* U- n# NThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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7 z/ L. d/ v5 ?! o6 rSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
; Y& L( B, U- w$ q& O5 h. x* R8 c# Z7 {You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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* F& X5 g" v  D% `4 D% ^( |Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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$ [3 c1 l) M3 {. ]& z"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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