SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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# h* d9 r5 P# l) t0 E7 ~9 DAutomatic transmission
, _7 k- W  }( w+ CSilver
5 u) M; z2 `3 A$ hRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
8 O3 v2 X4 ~: }: Q# a$ MFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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# R0 t# l+ p* N/ cTire pressure monitor system
Information system
4 L9 e5 W1 q$ Q, d6 v1 `Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
3 e( q6 T: w/ m( MPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
) Y# `/ C: m( P. D, T2 I2 ZBluetooth hands-free operation
5 D3 u5 j+ r. M3 M5 W+ KRadio
& {9 z0 M& i( D3 ?* H, u: w+ W# A# oAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

# o( P1 y1 Z! Q( F" f. A**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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, x- _) I2 ^( D" ?; z% ]8 dIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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6 J" `! v' Q% [0 U. V7 U$ HIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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" u+ z3 ^/ y5 S3 Y/ y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

% ?2 V& Q! S) j0 O# H' O9 @' w" aBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
5 Y0 L+ }! z6 a/ G) G9 z. ^1 l这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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9 o5 P  T% Y* j/ S, U) ~! |. }Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
3 r) L% F: p: J% A6 G! aThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

% @2 a1 B" h/ T/ e* ^0 kLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

8 I- X( y3 [% G: x- G  [% i+ I"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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