SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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  ]% v7 n1 Q) hVEICHLE OPTIONS:
2 @' p1 _# O  t/ e; s6 j3 ]/ kAutomatic transmission
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1 v7 R2 u) j* ]Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
8 ?( c0 Z5 S2 k1 ]1 p8 LFour additional tires with rims
3 l; e: w" H8 x5 j- @Air Conditioning
- g/ z* @0 D# ?2 d5 IABS Operation
4 j: H# U8 K6 l$ G) cTire pressure monitor system
/ }, K  k& X; Y2 EInformation system
, l6 g4 _4 K* r0 E  S( zCentral control locks,doors,windows
! z- s. G6 M+ E( U2 l. s5 VPower locks
Power mirrors
! @. Y" e5 _! `& e4 Z% jPower doors
! Y) o: t2 u7 y* M7 R& l) i) q1 F' QPower windows
Child safety locks
3 R1 T1 ?& z9 ?* _% Q5 W6 ORear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
+ }8 F0 f4 L$ B( cAirbag: passenger
) j5 H) L& n5 i& J# O4 d! zAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
! I! K7 P  ^% I5 k$ R4 SIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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/ K* V$ l& S4 U) }' h' U( tPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
+ P. G4 s$ X4 ^; \, T) k. hPick up on March 18-22.
( a* p& j# B) JCash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

' u8 @( L8 a6 |4 g  n" \If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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; j  W. @0 v* K! ?By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% k7 X# }: W/ wFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

! ?- s/ C7 Z  \6 M7 c$ `, LLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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