SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

" z  U* `; r- w! rVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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  u' X. W! b1 V# f) ^+ b5 aRemote starter and heat blocker
, ?( Z& S( E& h' X3 D8 x8 d2 hTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
! `) V: A. [, o$ J& P5 f; eAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
% \4 o" {3 i) ]9 S( G' o6 p: |# y, UPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: passenger
8 h. Q* L  O6 }Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

! F+ b0 S5 w% H+ R+ J% b**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 J! |% @, ~7 [" x+ @  {, S- WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

/ I, f7 f+ Y0 A0 B& sPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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7 W/ Z. _* I" v6 sDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
4 O2 j' G- v/ N+ m' f8 ]' c, ^7 I" j IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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) E0 H% ?2 F+ E( Z+ dDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
+ C2 @. t4 S2 |$ [4 x2 r4 v! c这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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, _: d: O( o; d6 i- K! Y0 ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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* X# S% K. {5 ~0 F/ S+ t1 a"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

: F6 s" t& C: P$ _There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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8 S& z! n3 B  X  p) p9 O6 [8 U4 BSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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