SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
: S& j' x3 B  uTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
6 t( U5 s2 U( m- ]Power windows
7 a: y( x& C9 g9 o2 i4 x3 A  kChild safety locks
, a8 v& \% E& M9 j; ]* hRear window defroster
( T) d& P+ I4 y% X5 nBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
5 u' j) v; |, I6 V% mAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
0 A$ c9 Y4 n) ?Alarm
0 U) d2 l5 m& V- K, y  dFog lights
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  E& \$ ?" B. Z) z- T**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
  Z% X! B8 q0 sIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

. c9 h3 ]+ j: e$ ADue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

4 [0 ]. T# E; T! s5 X$ k( jIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

- w1 p. N6 O& oIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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1 k( Y. V3 g2 A9 }; h" z8 i/ a. oDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# n) M$ W7 e1 `8 O) y# H这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

% a8 U% H% n: V( m9 YBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
& B+ h  e. z8 L1 l. O7 C这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

' ?% F* g8 J% `% Y2 p  y  P哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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4 @; f1 {5 _% D! X& w7 F' RDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ C* I% B* P& Q9 u# M! q9 jFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
/ [! V, l1 Z$ GThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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& M. b3 R* x9 z; B( |% GLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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2 l4 Y1 x+ h1 f6 L/ n, h"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

( m/ ^2 a- P: k7 L8 g: O6 ]3 RSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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