SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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3 ~6 m) P- G! q9 H4 x- Q) H! `Automatic transmission
Silver
: z8 v, ^+ u2 r* `" jRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
  a4 q6 p; J, y3 E# z( m: `Four additional tires with rims
# q, n( P1 o+ U- d0 A( [/ }6 W6 B! _Air Conditioning
+ P5 G- o  s5 H- o" UABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
7 j& e& O7 I" k9 p: Z/ tCentral control locks,doors,windows
9 l+ i" B! r9 O) H, oPower locks
: ~4 [! |; D. pPower mirrors
) B7 l" m+ V$ ^9 \1 H1 |Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
& u% W8 D2 t. N: XRear window defroster
& R) Z9 O" k/ L) a# O7 e4 d, qBluetooth hands-free operation
$ j7 l! I6 l: ^! V2 ]. _% hRadio
  \: o$ J* ]6 _% h/ w2 IAirbag: driver
% H9 L8 t/ I; k5 gAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
9 [9 ]8 U) ]- S& [+ V3 cAlarm
$ [3 V. w& \7 H1 [; ]- l& w% CFog lights

: k' _) S, Z- G. P/ |$ i**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
- ?. v1 N7 j) w2 L; HIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

+ C1 W1 c8 o: [* Z- `9 @4 CPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

4 n/ J5 g8 Y, ]If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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1 s; n7 X, }- \6 N/ k% X* iIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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. u+ P1 Z) k8 [3 X" h# e4 k: J3 e, IDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

: Y9 Y9 X0 v$ h, T+ X! ]这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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5 r; R% ~8 J9 h$ O1 lBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
  Y9 J% S1 `) M3 A! B) _- j这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

. E% P9 p+ Q! \& b2 u- |: JFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
- W: j/ f" ~' h9 h( Y4 hThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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0 Z# N6 [" t; Z  W0 Y4 f. QSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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7 S9 F( Z/ b$ J( i/ ?4 h( x"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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) T0 B0 y" M& |% d. d; D$ FThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.