SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
- S/ g0 f* M( v6 f/ VAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
$ J2 i3 S$ G" P8 [8 QTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
& Q* {* J4 N) I8 \, {3 _7 \! SABS Operation
" g& F* B: U+ {6 o3 ?Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
7 S# V3 B- b1 u9 T) Z( [: uPower locks
Power mirrors
) \5 ^5 c# J  r* ]* z/ y7 bPower doors
( K8 U; q, |* T: s) q3 ZPower windows
Child safety locks
' V. S7 g4 h7 I; ?1 }6 b: x4 x' p3 JRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
7 H2 i) f, ^, i- jAirbag: side
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Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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& {( y# N2 S) q$ ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

+ D0 s7 J1 V; G1 [/ b4 A6 ~IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
; M9 o9 k$ v/ [$ W* K0 i" w* y IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

/ }0 k: T1 a0 O% v0 s6 o+ `Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
1 @# n! B* }, [这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

+ }# I. _1 ~" x1 E哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 c0 j. a1 k! D& LThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
4 S$ s6 Q0 k4 f' tYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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$ T$ W: g, n+ w9 Z/ iLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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+ r: ?& d0 c/ w. G* _. R6 \4 D"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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3 Q2 g8 t" I4 n$ ?1 r: A. KThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

. V$ u! a4 A7 rSorry to give you "HARSH" again.