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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)$ A; O- [& I* `$ ]. u$ F2 Q
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     One day I always remember
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9 S& Z9 ?3 S( ]# n% Z8 a& f2 Q  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was1 r1 G) L0 L/ n8 f8 g9 j" i) R

: L6 @% s$ t( Qexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to+ Q$ U1 e* d, l& ^5 z8 y
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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4 l7 x3 ^! j4 K& U6 {8 y& n3 T was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since : f. V" G$ O% a. g) Z

8 U( t+ J. B! o- ~that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard # D/ u' Q/ h2 q! g5 Q' A

! a9 N, T6 b0 {. |$ L1 n" nfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my - g2 J, w: I9 i

% n, W: J4 ]; H1 d" X. zdeaest daughter.' S' a: _8 }- q& j# H5 O
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will( X  C7 k/ ^9 W  t

" f- O+ c. _4 {9 \! }* _+ d never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!0 p1 {$ T' F; T7 V9 z
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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