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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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7 d+ Y9 f- l8 |2 F5 ]1 Q( U　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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8 P4 i1 s7 U  l) U. M8 ~, I little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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, p1 r7 l* P1 C9 m& V- Jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.

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# J+ _' N% X6 K- \After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

: r7 X. ?9 P. H  x2 o* S* e never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

" d( e! k) Z# j[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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; _% X: _- U0 h8 x4 nwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

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