作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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+ l: P. c% A9 B! \3 m5 S1 D! I/ B　　　　　One day I always remember

: |/ R& k+ _) z　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

9 G! c; {; D; L- {exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

) O# L- k1 w$ ?  y  D every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

) P. i7 l" n6 T6 B was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

7 b( |2 E  J  T! d8 W7 l/ Ktrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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8 ^7 N; R, I" @% u+ [7 n- Qthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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% r2 b: N" m! C4 {) M5 S$ X5 p  f% Ffor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.

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- {& j  W! [6 E1 f! Q! E$ BAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！