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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was, f, Y! h' J- ?3 v  ^

* m& p! b1 M5 Y% fexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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; n! s' W$ z5 ?4 ` little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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+ w& J3 D1 _9 l every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 \3 k  K+ R7 u2 w0 b
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since + @7 f' A$ m% V3 e3 i

! c+ }- x: L+ E3 jthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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( f( D% }2 m1 o6 T' |0 H on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 4 u. _6 p+ I: `

. ~  W$ G& k5 ifor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.4 Z6 ~/ r" z! [
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, P7 n; y' i& UAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will9 [4 {. c) U# y6 `5 L
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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( A8 P9 ~0 E' q* b- f3 E& ^; J[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!7 a% [7 g0 b0 b' ~7 q: t7 H
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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