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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% k; J( w( T, x8 C: o7 v4 X
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     One day I always remember- F3 g0 C0 z* {

6 P2 a  e- ~% f/ E" W5 p  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was; O/ g$ }$ z& n

7 U  ?% i3 J- C4 T4 j2 cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to: b/ w" F3 C! i: O
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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# {4 A& I+ a- g5 f little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,: e- h0 V/ C5 y, `) ]9 n1 d$ L# b

. [  z, ?4 w6 _9 v every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid" I+ B: T4 J/ x# Y9 p  p
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 7 d( z! K( m: L) z

4 }( Q9 a" e: r" [* Etrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ( n" Q2 f8 a9 m( S/ a9 h
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!9 o- X" ~$ _  Z( X
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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