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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一). m- y" z( M( p) ^- V# A0 c3 j

$ O2 ?& r, E2 e/ N& u4 ^     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was3 J4 S* s+ H5 d! K% J$ D/ }6 a

. h/ C  \- o/ E( a# ~: Z% gexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to' l% O0 L. L9 _
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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/ }& e6 S0 _: U/ s little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,. y- p( i, T6 K* o, Y
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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* [  w) s- W4 g- d- \# W7 Utrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 4 x% t; }6 d$ P# P, a
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 1 `  w* r; T2 x7 ?9 ~7 B2 g: B/ f
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 0 H; a" R- W$ @8 ~
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deaest daughter.8 O- x1 B6 }  V! P4 j

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; R# |2 x+ L4 A  i$ V( F0 rAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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8 M2 E% p3 s1 h$ Y7 I/ S never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.6 B- O$ Y! |) V! }# w( A2 ?9 s

& U5 U5 A' }7 A[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
9 X( R" f+ [4 n& l0 c" c. h. C8 jwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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