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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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$ z- K1 @0 D' g6 r     One day I always remember
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( H4 }4 ]( M, G! S. E  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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% ]9 R( e. [' q& Cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to7 B, g; R& U- E9 z7 n) S$ P6 e  S+ F
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my. k1 ^3 _2 j6 I, d  G4 j3 S
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid* k* P7 t# }8 B" v
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 3 Z# k7 X/ j) N: @: p$ y+ H

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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing" u1 ^. B, L# \5 x# }0 @

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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 4 |) t  J" K8 y1 s

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will7 m/ G- \$ w$ g
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.! t+ G) I3 i% a: ]

0 E% ^: A, Q% n0 q# x[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!3 g7 ?  I' ^3 w+ L
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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