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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)5 [* W( D2 b3 g& w( N& x' U3 F8 ^! d
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     One day I always remember: @; ~: k! b# J3 l& t
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to! F1 z* F/ W2 X0 I+ i

. z" H' g% Z0 I% y7 hput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my( J: c# u8 e, u5 E! a9 n
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,; x# \1 _+ A; B- P% |2 x& W
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid4 `: y) i. e- z7 ?5 x( }) c* R

) h4 \5 H) ~# |! x. E was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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( q: K% N3 |) @/ W+ h& gthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing( a; Z2 N* |2 {# Y" \

/ J! n- h" m" J on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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4 o: P7 j  M! K; t  ], ]for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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, h0 O. e9 ]1 u$ W6 i9 q* @2 q  Fdeaest daughter.
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6 `$ O1 F& D1 b' `; \& x, H+ AAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will- g  H4 K8 V5 A# o

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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
# W* R' O# X& f3 mwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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