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大家首先要注意,时态上一定要用过去时,然后想一想什么样的chang是positive change呢?比如一次basketball game队友们让你意识到自己技术上的问题,从此球技突飞猛进;比如一次家人生病了,有生以来第一次照顾父母;比如你学开车考驾照的经历;比如你第一次离开家到外地求学。。。只要不紧张,认准了话题往下讲其实不会太难说。不过有一些套话是描述change的时候可以用的,比如:) X M. ^& {1 g0 t
+ l" ^% a9 ^8 L7 N! HThis experience altered the course of my life---这次经历改变了我的人生道路;
; }- O' p4 U$ \, ~At first,I was really bewildered and frustrated.刚开始我感到很沮丧也很困惑;
" q4 D3 t% u% g2 c9 jMy teammates encouraging words really cheered me up.队友们的鼓励话语让我振作起来;
( ^9 e# {" I5 `+ N2 a+ YMy driving instructor's sound advice made quite a change in my performance.驾车教练的好建议让我的表现提高了很多;
1 C3 Q/ ^. e" f/ U7 BIt not only improved my skills,it also solved my attitude problem.这不仅仅提高了我的技术,也让我改变了自己态度上的问题;
5 a0 w9 p8 l( l# Z2 _: UFor the first time in my time,I found my father so vulnerable and so helpless.有生以来第一次,我感到父亲这么弱小这么无助;
$ p/ i& V, J1 U6 U, bThis episode had profound influence on my later life.这段经历对我后来的人生有深远的影响;/ Y* ^% s; Z2 \/ {5 E' {
I became a more caring and loving son/daughter after that incident.这件事情以后我变成了一个更关心家长的孩子;, A8 x0 p% j2 g3 m$ g& |# q+ B
It prompted me to start working on my agility and team spirit.这促使我改进我的灵活性和团队精神;' d2 S' ?6 M* A3 H. w
This experience was pretty much a milestone in my life.这段经历可以说是我人生道路上一个新的里程碑;
* D. U0 Z$ B9 I3 G4 b4 x$ oIt made me tougher and more tenacious.这让我变得更坚强,更有毅力。 |
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