SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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2 J  e1 S  e. ?: I8 O$ YAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
! c7 u' q6 t0 a6 m  J' MFour additional tires with rims
% ~7 Q& }$ L: ^; G5 ]/ iAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
' C7 Z1 B2 |7 E3 [Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
: `( g3 S& W( X$ _# RBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
1 e$ ^$ c0 s5 ^! a# r  l  y0 LAirbag: driver
' q- Z2 \8 z4 I/ VAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights

+ e) Q0 ^0 a5 V* \. v**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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8 d+ A* p! B1 w1 cPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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0 k# x; m. @! \3 SDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

1 m" p, v( X. l$ K" R+ |  hIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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1 M( j9 j, i% s7 x+ PDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# N2 T: f6 t8 E/ e4 x这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
* p( \5 n) g! p1 b% p$ b& ^+ U# d这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

  K8 R1 N! X, t8 r; O, J哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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+ P/ O& B* K  @7 p- G. Z8 H$ Q: TDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

: p, l2 v( h! E; @8 Q' X# Q7 B9 YFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
4 K% K4 V  I4 oThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

" Q5 E; p, P% \! }Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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5 m! l- o: f4 `Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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