SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
4 l2 O) E* D7 j/ i' u/ qAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
9 ?! D9 L8 J3 vTire pressure monitor system
" n  C3 b  V  y( I( R; oInformation system
; C' w" F# L' D0 q: I2 OCentral control locks,doors,windows
0 `8 ^- o* ?6 A3 fPower locks
7 [* i" Q/ f& \4 MPower mirrors
. q& M8 b- O2 A) `4 [# UPower doors
* W- r  t* b9 o8 B% C  u) T- PPower windows
$ o3 H; j* Y1 h  i5 \2 AChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
* L9 f( r. `, cBluetooth hands-free operation
8 m$ p9 f  ^& {* [8 ERadio
  E1 Z$ S' c% l+ t% i9 NAirbag: driver
' O3 [$ F: R8 Z. K5 FAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

% o* R% Z& T$ A! G**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
7 p% X! {6 L9 ~5 J) R3 }If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
  E' q/ R% `/ oCash only please :)

兰君子

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8 K2 K7 }1 C( r& MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

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1 q5 A. R8 ?% R) o. T( HIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
, r& @9 z7 R4 ^+ Y IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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' D( l& {2 ?$ j7 F: GBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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: Z" X# ^& u2 A, P/ qDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

/ Y2 `" j5 e" K. J7 [# K2 RFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
/ |* N; q7 R3 u; l# V0 ]You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

4 w& f, v1 D* B) Z# USorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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