SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
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' n7 O7 G. S' _: s- [5 dFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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  ]4 d& }1 f3 eTire pressure monitor system
5 T7 a/ F7 R, KInformation system
  U7 u) v& k# c& d% l' g: [& |Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
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' Z8 h) F( P3 ?9 o8 j* J) wAirbag: side
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Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
2 a7 T% x, ^! UIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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1 n9 v3 A! A  V0 J, i# a4 xDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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' F& T; D& B2 l9 H; K8 q* _IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# ^  E2 R  E7 P3 @2 j) G& o这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

* O9 W  h  d" s4 O& g' u哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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! B+ X) Z3 |" sDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

6 C, n5 s+ W, O  c* x9 E5 RFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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, s( B4 T2 D; X" z. v  USorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
% M2 R" s+ ^: ^7 I& f" ^You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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: y+ t( s/ Y, mLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

: {# }: _  _4 ~' A7 o"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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; }+ F. i" O% s% J- q2 OThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

$ |  M; e8 G) cSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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