SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
* u4 G9 V' [/ B$ ]0 X! pAutomatic transmission
+ U, O9 ]; d! Q( \5 d/ ISilver
  z- t# I, L0 q6 WRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
- u) _9 b% s4 P; S! g/ R$ R3 q7 qFour additional tires with rims
5 b  T5 e3 g+ y+ b) W: p/ T1 OAir Conditioning
9 ?$ v" f$ P$ B" p, vABS Operation
: f9 ~6 X( a" O8 GTire pressure monitor system
; z+ }! U8 f. M* s8 nInformation system
* Z+ C4 n% |5 aCentral control locks,doors,windows
8 T$ n$ J7 H" d. N! |2 G$ @Power locks
Power mirrors
7 @: u0 T" |2 r& ^+ n6 N9 c4 FPower doors
5 V) {) Q2 j" ~, w) _" uPower windows
$ y( e3 A: ?) |7 oChild safety locks
- l7 _* v. J" R# }, J$ IRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
7 @& `6 h" D0 L+ V# iRadio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

, J, p6 A/ b1 M5 W+ t0 [/ _**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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8 d# G- K$ s6 m3 A- V* fPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
  M% }/ y9 ~& xPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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% K0 I- C) Y+ R  K' [, mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

/ j4 Q/ E  x# A! EIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

% Y: P$ G( ~$ H/ H2 b4 ZIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
0 W8 e& ^8 E: Q8 e IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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8 g# h$ Z( s; f* s. N* [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

, i. c1 g( N6 _5 i& O/ V+ X, s这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
0 S/ d$ x9 A, Q% P% i/ E这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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/ J- Q, L( h! |0 ]# QDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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7 X8 l$ j; J6 U% M( G  h8 I+ O; }Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

: f% o* \; J4 E1 `% xLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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  i) F' N7 z( I$ I. D6 O7 k' uSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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