SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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4 R. ~) W1 |9 w& \3 o' mAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
2 _& b: Z7 `5 v1 p) l5 c- h8 o( vFour additional tires with rims
/ N) V. s" ?0 g. R& oAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
6 W  c. `' S  i5 V1 RChild safety locks
  H+ e3 `5 W- m" URear window defroster
+ Q5 x* l) X6 _  k: cBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
: F0 p# S+ n5 s' s  \8 G$ l$ }Airbag: driver
1 z, b: X4 w7 MAirbag: passenger
: J% }2 B( p2 Z* tAirbag: side
7 I$ T! ^0 `2 VAlarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
3 W0 S$ q7 u8 Y2 d9 _: }5 F  DIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
! s9 N8 k/ x8 cPick up on March 18-22.
) D: q$ J/ L3 x% eCash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
# k" v% O- m8 N IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* g. C3 H. v% V+ S) C' l4 s) D) T这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

* o& o. d& l4 p* }9 \) q5 r& `, wBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

2 `7 Y, v9 S9 u9 K哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

6 X7 m/ j# Z9 H( L* LDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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2 F; Z8 r1 [; J: a  oSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
, i- P! X7 W+ L# X9 b: y& rYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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& I0 [# G3 R' B+ K4 N; b. U" ?Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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0 l/ J1 J$ `, ^& JThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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