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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
( @( m$ N, c5 @, I4 j. JI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ; z, m6 \8 [/ o* r
Dreamers. h/ b8 R" A! ?- {' k  I9 i
Savages7 }6 A1 }) s8 `
Poets# r/ e+ l( f- s% N6 g- c. y
Builders of canoes,
/ H: @4 [8 B- PBlack smiths2 K# P5 E, {) l2 I3 U4 G' o
Murderers,7 r+ m1 J4 B* n  x3 O4 P( J
Risk takers,
$ Q% C. ^5 N/ p4 v: ~- oMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ D1 M5 }& _7 Q( g# }9 d+ |+ E
As I think of what could be.
, ?. R- ^% f* S+ H# _The world is so big to me + T; p/ m* }; Q8 ?6 P8 V
I wonder what it means to be& V' n9 S! {) Y6 j
I looked up at the star and smiled / a3 p7 B: a0 F& r
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
; i( Q) |' J% J" w6 H2 K评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
  M9 ?- `) V2 W6 w, R1 ]: M顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,! v- ]) R: i; a& }! A5 S* C  {9 _
A poor old Guy;
: M9 F( I# b" N# m2 \. ]Legs in a bonfire,) Z  x+ H4 i+ y
Head in the sky" i4 M. A; s! a& e4 Y
Lonely, with the feel of betray: I$ _% h# n- J( u& P3 x  R; ~
Heart empty and hollow2 W" Z7 e9 w9 G/ V; P3 ~3 o( g( H
Alone I stand) g: P9 W) H  _% G* ^- I( c
I am useless to all
. J% h2 c& z  vBut I wish I were a dove
/ r3 n2 p' C6 X7 t; ]& pGiving myself to the world, to the fire, b' ^. ^% m' |
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind$ z# v) C/ W7 a: b, u
I sent prayers to my god! b  A- O3 I  T* [- j' t! b
Though he does not answer
$ r3 |5 n2 S# S! @2 Y: Y, hHe bless me with the gift of hope $ B& ?  Q6 X! d4 V6 B% V# V9 X
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
& b1 \  F* \: g9 @9 k加油加油,经常写写!
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