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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, # m( P  h5 Q9 W- [  O
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
- R# ~& |, O2 J+ e, p; z5 @Dreamers
. }& R3 ?+ \2 X/ YSavages- R" J( R" s8 M6 D; m4 @
Poets0 w$ ?" X0 X0 z/ u+ O! y, w
Builders of canoes,  T5 \% `6 @. S
Black smiths
# |3 D8 ~, U% E5 j) S& oMurderers,
# H. ^6 u7 G# ~% p) i( g: bRisk takers,
9 ]4 y( g4 s5 m2 P# z6 u' x. ]& GMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 T8 P: J  K, V( m
As I think of what could be.
8 R1 U6 s- a. S* c/ [  lThe world is so big to me
  X# [4 A, \' z/ b* n1 tI wonder what it means to be
) W% z  r* j* H/ RI looked up at the star and smiled
5 H* ]3 G3 E3 v; OThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。5 u5 V, I/ ]* n8 q: |4 @9 T+ l3 T/ N
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。8 }: z7 A' N# R
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,. U) B4 `9 `8 `& u0 x1 n; o
A poor old Guy;) v4 z5 v& O, |  J0 o
Legs in a bonfire,: r% f% b8 Z0 E. X- q/ D
Head in the sky
; ?. X4 n( G" B& G* yLonely, with the feel of betray
9 Z( T* c4 Y# |1 \0 {Heart empty and hollow3 L$ J# Q& }7 G& N" H
Alone I stand
$ |& f8 R' x: b  a5 D$ U) g2 EI am useless to all
2 ]4 {6 ]& N: q* j* d' dBut I wish I were a dove
! C- T1 m% @( ~9 G: t' mGiving myself to the world, to the fire
0 B# p8 U* Z/ \) `I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind" V& y7 \3 D& x- J% h  p  K
I sent prayers to my god
: I. x3 \* P  HThough he does not answer
0 s& C! \% {% {6 EHe bless me with the gift of hope ) n9 l9 u' m) C& L

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; ?) g1 D. p0 N
加油加油,经常写写!
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