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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' A0 Y4 p1 r/ O( ^2 @7 W: R
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
( _0 S3 j5 |8 V& o3 jDreamers1 P1 C* d! I; V* V+ C7 O
Savages( t/ u' C# K& b. d
Poets
0 |/ E$ J; R8 s& ]3 |Builders of canoes,7 }+ [( p9 r3 [. i- ~. c' Q
Black smiths
3 E2 r  f: h+ O9 |: a) QMurderers,- A! s& \, |' ]. z
Risk takers,. Q2 f4 a: A2 G" ]. v5 r6 H" @9 g
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder ! d! I8 y1 o% Q8 q( c3 ~
As I think of what could be. 2 E  O# S% \3 t$ U  E+ W( i, [0 ]
The world is so big to me 5 S9 ]. Z9 ~" z: e- [" k( M7 w6 `
I wonder what it means to be
1 l, `! N8 d3 L5 v1 G  aI looked up at the star and smiled
6 k: U$ g8 q0 j8 ^: t4 ^' q& vThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。( J' T3 Y6 x3 n& [4 H3 y9 v' Y
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
/ E0 B  e& A( R8 T顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,( s( y( x6 F  v
A poor old Guy;
; R  S' ^/ t' v7 ^, h- `  |Legs in a bonfire,
3 _9 a! y0 S8 M3 K; f* KHead in the sky
0 M) m) r, [( j% nLonely, with the feel of betray
1 w& T# M7 D' ?Heart empty and hollow
/ v  d/ A( K$ NAlone I stand" T7 W" Y& N- C. h
I am useless to all 3 O0 y7 S" m% ~5 T( a* |
But I wish I were a dove
2 Z9 P5 U5 j  ?; g# F4 eGiving myself to the world, to the fire$ G6 }! ~* Y# n9 m9 |1 j
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind" g$ i' z/ v" n$ p0 q; q0 P
I sent prayers to my god
& |" a+ [' m& A& a6 m* z: v1 yThough he does not answer( J3 i# B3 A) M! [0 S
He bless me with the gift of hope 2 h* n6 P* v) A$ _3 Y3 Q
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。& m8 F# A0 M2 I' |& Q
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