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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, $ ^2 I3 T) f( Z6 b! \1 d& H
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
- m" d& U7 `3 KDreamers# C& ^: x4 T: Z: F# Q
Savages. E$ n& b5 ^  Q& H$ m, q0 V
Poets
. o1 h# T' M) j- }$ ^# FBuilders of canoes,' n& }( ]) I/ ?2 ^$ _* E3 I' S. t
Black smiths
- x+ {( i' C0 }6 z2 s, pMurderers,
  c3 M: K! F( _, T' {9 \7 W$ v2 TRisk takers,
+ Y% o1 N" j; }5 SMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
  J5 i' H( G' I* s8 s1 u/ [As I think of what could be. ) g' F/ e2 e8 g% o- _7 u
The world is so big to me + d6 i5 ?" Z$ ~' h" U/ y  _2 E3 G
I wonder what it means to be$ @7 V4 a. c9 K/ z
I looked up at the star and smiled
% o+ `1 }. i1 ^" S1 ^0 _% x( I6 zThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. # W0 t: e1 Z# ?  X
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。2 l2 R& n, M' L3 q: N1 s; s& d
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。" H9 L- I- N; l1 u
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,' @. T8 ?+ n. S; ]) {* G
A poor old Guy;
: O- H! k  M8 t/ u3 J; M; {Legs in a bonfire,
0 U! G* I/ i5 m( C1 z) x) dHead in the sky3 n& C) ?3 c* L1 _0 l% H$ X
Lonely, with the feel of betray
& E' e2 h$ c& p$ |3 N5 BHeart empty and hollow
# H: R! w& P3 q/ H, y7 QAlone I stand
; y% H0 L6 I! l+ j% u9 N" N- ^I am useless to all
% _) `: g/ T# v" n0 r9 i: j' yBut I wish I were a dove
. k+ S, D8 n. zGiving myself to the world, to the fire4 O  S) z3 i9 U) K, B% S$ T
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
4 D2 u! z4 {- A, S/ I% |I sent prayers to my god( n" n1 e( }. d: r- Z
Though he does not answer
3 o4 x  o  l7 P9 v2 E& z, S+ rHe bless me with the gift of hope 2 D& C& w& i4 z

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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。" X) ]7 U, [! F8 P$ x' o, U
加油加油,经常写写!
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