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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
0 F& r# M5 ]6 h) P* I5 LI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
% c3 n) W* ~0 mDreamers
/ X$ n& L: n8 e$ H/ |! L1 J9 [Savages
4 T! m: A+ w; L4 O+ c0 A/ dPoets4 [" {; Q2 ^! L0 v9 C/ x
Builders of canoes,
& n' y; \' L: p2 t1 XBlack smiths, ?) ^- K% `# C/ C, u3 U
Murderers,
2 U' r+ s) S* O% Z; a* Z; F3 JRisk takers,
* B% ~7 r% V* X+ ~My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
) a8 U. g0 |! F7 [2 V6 _2 g& \As I think of what could be. & Z7 G. t# N+ @8 n
The world is so big to me   @6 }, U( w. p. y+ c$ J' K) Z
I wonder what it means to be
( u6 W! l5 w  v$ s1 jI looked up at the star and smiled ( t! T9 @! ~" k( i. g
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. - l2 S( i7 w( \/ ?
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% G1 _/ f3 a" x6 v# j# [评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
! U& s& q7 X* U6 M! B顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
7 r5 s7 a. ]2 d5 J, P; ^) \! LA poor old Guy;
3 ?* o' q/ |$ J& PLegs in a bonfire,
7 X; y! S7 o% QHead in the sky( D  U" @$ G) e/ z! Q. b
Lonely, with the feel of betray
$ h' v- n; G0 g! o& v6 V: @Heart empty and hollow8 B, \3 q3 P1 [1 t1 J2 G
Alone I stand1 w3 i$ Z* l9 D7 k4 J
I am useless to all ! F: |% B/ }9 q; u" o, Z
But I wish I were a dove
8 d$ V+ u& z1 P( y6 y: PGiving myself to the world, to the fire
9 s7 |9 v( o; m. hI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind5 ~9 ]/ J; s2 ^! C  g% Q) T! `$ ^% K
I sent prayers to my god- e7 G- j0 X- ~1 |+ ^* y3 H
Though he does not answer
" C, {! s9 m* G6 i# \' V1 O4 rHe bless me with the gift of hope 3 Z$ A0 i7 J9 g1 w

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。0 s; ]* g6 v" i0 Q' w
加油加油,经常写写!
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