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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' T: h7 J6 v  _7 |2 I. S
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
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Savages8 w: Y% f5 t/ h  R: Y; _
Poets( K8 [2 P( S% k7 [0 i- S
Builders of canoes,
, l# p+ W" X2 GBlack smiths
: b5 r1 g8 M( U. y, M$ B) U1 TMurderers,2 j7 n* l1 o. Y+ m* F" m
Risk takers,9 K: |/ X1 |- L
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 2 v- J4 c7 ~. W; D$ Q' R! }% N
As I think of what could be.
+ ]. @! t+ |6 D# CThe world is so big to me " u( u( m# N3 H' U
I wonder what it means to be$ }. h7 D4 u% L5 C/ k( s
I looked up at the star and smiled
, [! S; a9 P' K& J1 Q3 OThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
: U; U" n0 \( _2 w评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
( T. M% r4 [! z- j: x顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
* h: K# Q' Z" {; z. L8 PA poor old Guy;
% S; ]* u; x# ^" S6 ?Legs in a bonfire,3 Y  M1 y8 @0 R9 E# H& L
Head in the sky
# I: v( D: S# r! O: L& nLonely, with the feel of betray
% |2 J' s3 N$ P0 r' ?8 ZHeart empty and hollow
8 _, U* F9 `6 g! z( z4 _* Y  L5 Q4 @$ uAlone I stand' O1 |; V& S. D4 p
I am useless to all 9 {1 O+ J0 H$ Y: ~$ l: p
But I wish I were a dove
$ Y6 r; j7 x. W$ u; \7 e: SGiving myself to the world, to the fire$ w9 r0 Y# {) O. X
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
7 {8 L$ ^- b4 z+ fI sent prayers to my god6 r2 S1 S: {$ D9 ]4 h2 F# a
Though he does not answer8 M$ s9 t2 r0 k7 v' t9 U) M
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 o6 s0 V5 t4 @: I0 Y0 W加油加油,经常写写!
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