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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  v" L4 l1 t) @  T+ l, w% OI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
4 ?( G! h# \% L) o& M; j" A7 D$ yDreamers
( Q( N& X4 f5 a/ rSavages/ z$ ~3 W( f$ h" o' g) W
Poets
3 u2 j; r! y8 T' NBuilders of canoes,
* t+ d& _" A7 u! I+ ZBlack smiths' D2 g2 H  ]( S9 C1 w: J* z8 B
Murderers,
: x$ E4 }2 y) u1 N5 q7 G* J/ ^9 @$ XRisk takers,
! G: K2 K1 J8 `1 J8 ?My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
# `* C; I. g" G# wAs I think of what could be. : H/ _/ P$ ?" G
The world is so big to me
; t9 U6 p& g! @5 u! Y& pI wonder what it means to be  R4 o6 n6 W7 D4 c
I looked up at the star and smiled
. v: {+ l: y6 U/ cThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。4 X& h/ j* B* I  ^
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。7 ~+ t1 |& P' ~
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
* o! _: X) \8 ~1 X5 C7 ~A poor old Guy;
1 k* B( ^8 L- Z  qLegs in a bonfire,
8 a! H2 x1 I5 `3 j1 T1 lHead in the sky3 K3 L& J2 J* `" e) Y& R
Lonely, with the feel of betray* x+ v( X  f: n# |- z
Heart empty and hollow
$ k3 w9 u! P( i+ }5 `/ X! f; ~Alone I stand
7 ?+ o0 g9 B" ]& fI am useless to all
! i' B1 P8 T5 `/ p. S, @) ?$ UBut I wish I were a dove
: }. I4 s' q/ Q( dGiving myself to the world, to the fire
. f9 o3 K, F$ w% |& NI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
& n2 \8 b8 Q1 `. u2 AI sent prayers to my god
5 P- _# A+ i% s* @4 ]' NThough he does not answer
+ P3 [. n, l9 {* f$ S* b# h, QHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
# B. j/ ]" U& I* x8 j+ C( \加油加油,经常写写!
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