儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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* t/ h* Z. f8 |6 T/ L儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
( c; `% _8 @+ D) `& I, h2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

% H1 T; f9 |" wHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
. [5 L: s6 n# ~- \0 k2 t2 X& uI have written you this message because:

9 L. c% Y' Z# Y1 s  V4 qI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

2 |' f/ X& D4 gYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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: Y; ^2 D- |' N3 K3 d' i. FYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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+ l$ U1 V% n$ ?. c% t# I# cI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

+ V8 S$ X% g8 o! nI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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7 B5 P$ M- H$ l; \You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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) c4 n' ^1 J: }% u9 JI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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9 }" ?/ Z! q. [! [9 rI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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! q! H9 F. ^- ~  M) PThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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8 S0 P3 `" L  f0 |; ~2 H$ r/ |Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。