我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
3 c" V, v; H8 S: e
/ H- w2 Q) s3 d4 DFaster, hotter and sweater,
3 L# K3 T% E6 `5 [& ]/ fSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
% f# `: X' t) s' MGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
5 C& H: M) Z* O/ g+ l
( b/ t9 d7 v' M6 G: k, s' DGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
5 n( Z  ?! q2 V+ Y) eI can prepare nothing;
: t% `& C. k3 c9 y+ F: l; HMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
* L  ^' C. n' k" l
[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了