我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
# u: k/ [5 I' \6 p6 k3 L$ @$ QSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
/ a* c# i- @5 @: F' qFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
' Q( v; L1 s7 e2 s$ i" yGo to the wild rain
: h, K2 j8 Y/ k! d8 [Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
1 w4 O7 f1 b0 j  T. gMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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/ `" R0 p3 g" n2 n一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
( m; y. w6 o1 e* i4 p* s! QIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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