我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
) ?( g0 P" }# F1 G+ l2 u是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

* V* q% ~/ D" Q2 h* _Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
/ r/ [2 g& I( z# H1 T. D, N1 e* @From the colorful nature
9 E- C4 F0 [. t+ r$ ~- n0 c7 ~2 xTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
4 d" t9 y/ [! z! S! T& K. h8 fLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
: S0 h7 T1 R. i6 E. P, G" }5 cI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
/ C. o$ ]6 j  C! TIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

2 }' |/ j5 |) @" g. |7 q[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了