我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
* ~4 J# W( c1 \7 s9 c3 i+ NSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
$ F. u) N/ c# R" n: A. BSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
+ b/ q% `* [" |) I( t3 [$ v$ L) wFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
: {( U- N, L4 Y6 X) w% S# p
Following the summer's step,
* L7 X* V! x( i5 fLet myself go ---
7 q1 U0 `( \! C4 z/ eGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
9 Z) G6 e2 F, z9 tGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

5 L# [3 G' Q* m一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
; N$ n2 }- K" l$ X" zIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了