我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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* N) i3 W5 F3 L# d7 WFollowing the summer's step,
' |3 ]+ W' t  `. ?: T! lLet myself go ---
0 v4 w4 {: w' d1 B9 UGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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6 g# E, [% \* `5 H1 QGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
( i" I: w$ Y- k5 BMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了