我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
& |2 h* E7 k, G  S是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
+ I6 j' U2 P) h( b; z1 bSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
! f& O) }+ e5 q* ?From the colorful nature
% ^) d. u8 w1 W! oTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
- m  y" E1 u0 ~7 b! \0 ]9 wLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

1 _- d& ~7 b  p# ?6 T9 y6 Y' ^7 PGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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7 h. ]8 p, J8 m4 s: F  A一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
3 n% L, M' B$ Z% IIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

+ l) C% h, f8 j% ~$ c8 P8 X[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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