我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

$ g7 \+ d2 p0 \3 T1 B4 i2 {Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
$ n1 [4 V% e2 B7 ^From the colorful nature
; g, L7 y1 L% c' ]To my life and dream.

  L. P  g/ X/ L1 z$ `8 ]) b, L6 T4 QFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
) {8 t! x5 A# VGo to the wild rain
( ~. e- Z6 p( b7 ]Washing my heart and soul.

" w7 b+ @; H* r3 P5 cGood-bye, my happy spring;
/ Q+ E, u; \$ T- B$ M3 z0 [$ M/ I( ^Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

/ v* I' \3 @2 i( y- F% M7 w一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
9 M! z5 o0 n! H. D, n1 |( b5 Ibut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了