爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love
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I fell in love with you
! s/ ?5 D; u8 w4 r$ J6 m# ^At the first week we met

You have charm, you have looks
. ?# w' ^' b7 M$ H3 m6 Bwith full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars
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% y% K* b. ?! U. N# ^Your lip is so big
3 S, `0 S5 t9 i% m1 ~9 b7 v( qAnd that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
! J  ?5 D! `1 KAnd that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
You blame me everything and everyday
8 Z5 i5 K/ @: C4 W# ~And I think all girls sound like
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You could not stand my eating
2 S) f1 A! f2 m6 W5 S' }/ O. |Saying no good for making funny sound
( [. V9 i" W8 f# V- K2 ]5 GI think you are perfectly right
Eating with sound is a pig
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$ }* H' M. n1 {, i  E1 dI fell in love with you
Become a fool to think
2 c2 f( ?4 p- E  R7 tAll trouble things you did
: v" G8 e4 ]2 X( D/ K  [And that is the price for love
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! [3 o3 }: f) x5 d: V4 JYou slash my heart
1 @9 B7 N. H" X# ~8 rand I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
If my heart can be fixed
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[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
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湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
& U  t/ `9 x. {$ \  S" K+ ~, TFalling in love

  M2 k( v* O3 r+ h+ C3 P- h" nI fell in love with you
7 ^9 g2 W* N/ E; O" \: I  [At the first week we met

2 I  U3 [9 ^# V& v. R6 ^- RYou have charm, you have looks
0 `( @; x+ K2 D# awith full of pimples in face
* J3 {5 @* A5 Z& }' j1 j! ZAs spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars

4 ^/ v0 g. q9 @" f1 hYour lip is so big
! ~3 R, X) y1 h2 r+ U7 vAnd that’s good for a kiss
9 W; w8 ~4 x" RYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex
) E# s- _4 D2 S) q3 G- b2 Z
) g7 c7 |% I7 ]# w  A, ^  @I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
% ]2 d: e# m' d# r- F/ o. UYou blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like

You could not stand my eating
% b. J5 c! I# `: fSaying no good for making funny sound
1 G3 q- X6 A4 m- CI think you are perfectly right
: j, @" \5 T- A8 I  n5 aEating with sound is a pig

I fell in love with you
! @2 Y# G( ~' i& w, u" R+ r6 vBecome a fool to think
All trouble things you did
  X! y; j4 ?, h! p2 e: D6 @, ?9 zAnd that is the price for love

5 ]5 |; h7 N* s3 ]; \( s$ Eyou are deeply in love
& h" U5 e4 M/ B0 D' d6 \Everything from me is negative
/ X3 j" j7 f, `# D& u6 o"My man should like this,
and I am helping you to improve'

8 O. w% a& D7 o; h4 j1 VYou are loving me
) z  ^! m! J3 p0 E# ?3 Gor that one in your mind?
My mind is like a mud
6 C: N8 k! y3 t4 ^) `can be shaped whatevery you want
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( g. j: G0 X7 W" ]unfortunalety not my heart
4 l# m1 K' |* w5 n) NIt is slashed by you
/ T+ H( H3 V9 g' Vand I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
' B1 K7 d) ?' [  j1 X再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

8 t6 e) r# C+ T; v1 L湿人啊....

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你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
- H1 x# N# y1 a6 `哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
1 f' j0 U3 L/ _7 p8 v* |啊?还没整完哪?
# Q) G9 m( g( ?* W* P" i' a- _够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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. @) ~/ ?$ S- m1 C该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表

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. e% P/ Z! t& Q% U# n5 v1 \该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

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鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
9 e  T% A+ ]3 ]- T* D哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.
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& r( f9 E$ g3 RP.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
4 b" T, d) k& g1 L, u! S9 ?看的我毛骨耸然

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有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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2 u) D( Y' D3 L) c2 v; s4 B$ u听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声