锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

, J$ S, r. m" o, s- a　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

4 T  N. a1 b+ b& r$ d6 ?　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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  W" m  {" r/ m5 x! L$ \" C* [$ A　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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- |5 O- i' w& M' @. k　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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: P8 X: i% x  ^6 r# L% n　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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* Y6 K8 S2 R  J( J, c: L, @　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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8 T0 p, H$ ^1 Z% L0 c' a; j　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

2 n+ K# x; b7 m( @8 X/ n　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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) p0 Q, ~1 `1 m, P* b% B8 K　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

" z% W1 i( L2 d　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

# u7 r' p! b" I4 i1 n　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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2 Z% I' G( }$ E　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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! f3 B7 h) x7 X  z3 P) p　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

% d2 G9 z" o7 y% b' I　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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% X  p3 g* n) A6 g1 v- m! C　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

3 X& Z& ?+ z4 X& b. [  Y  s6 i　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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0 M+ T$ X5 @: E9 n+ [( S. l　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

6 M) z! n9 w9 W  o　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

( S6 h/ J$ M' N0 s( ]# z0 E　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

: G! y; f$ x* B% W　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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* w) g1 G2 ?' ]　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

( f: g  V/ k. E; v1 Z. m0 z　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

! l) p; w6 P0 @+ e: b0 A" T0 B7 G　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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5 G% e9 I* u8 i' S　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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. |5 f3 ^3 q! }% y! _& I$ X2 g　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

2 |) O: J/ |" b! v9 A7 F; ~　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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! O7 b# X  W8 c) n* J　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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( `2 c% u( m; Q! Z, a8 K　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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; ^' g5 D5 [/ s  I* ]% x3 }+ ?　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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+ h% L" S9 f7 _1 P% z　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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- r7 b# m4 |0 Z( }+ ?; i5 {3 U　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

$ M, R9 L  q- r* Y( c　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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0 O* ^- q6 e5 G1 d( W( a　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

6 u6 W  \8 A' S* ?0 {　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

* F% Y) [' h6 E& {3 \* }! e, n　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

- g3 [5 B0 o# Z　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

, L% `# c/ z( V( ]$ c0 a! N　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

( t6 P; v% @3 ]' s/ y- I2 `　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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  @# W! A5 a! o% N- J. t1 ^　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

" ]  N" L6 H! u5 K( P　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka