锻造地道英语句子

随便

　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
! U4 D9 n% I/ R+ l/ t3 c
　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

2 }; N6 {# F0 x4 H; u. U- ?; B　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
% S9 }9 T8 O: W+ a* e3 |# ?8 ?8 |
　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

0 T% r! j+ V, g& ]0 f) T" g　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
6 x; v$ }$ a! I5 E+ P2 j* r2 Y
　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
  \5 {# a! L# o5 ~
8 J' v0 e) l+ o　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
2 y- h( \4 T: t  H! A! A
　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
3 u3 H4 t& q8 C- M
2 o. l; r4 R  x0 O0 ]; `( L" ~　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
: p1 F) D9 R. U, a# D$ g: \$ f& ^
3 q( ~9 A1 i/ Z! \9 ?　　6. Their brain is still very young.
7 m* s% Q$ `# Y) p* _1 I, c7 y
7 z5 y  K$ @8 @　　改进: They are still immature.
7 R6 {! |5 j- {% B: D
　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

* w  Z+ M* D: \( J  A6 f2 ^" Q　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

) S( Z+ F5 _) [/ j+ `- R　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

+ R2 j, a# `: n& e! H6 k& A) {　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
; T- d4 r9 {4 _, ?, [
7 D1 w  C3 e# o" _3 t' d　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
  k0 |% |1 A4 T
　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  K1 ^0 G# _! @% O% U1 m- M　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
1 t; L3 ~, j' ~9 Z
　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
( H; h- Z: C1 V; G
　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
! B1 u1 a7 O2 U
　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
0 y6 G5 A7 {* w/ p9 s* t9 o9 C
　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
: V5 C  V4 U, [
　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
. Q, _+ O$ U$ H; T
5 r% w+ |, J' A( G3 U. T　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

: v. X' s1 N. \' o. U  ~  T　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
0 r  K+ w5 ]" y9 W1 F
! W' G0 I9 C; f) B( l- z, e　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

" \2 S$ E) c8 T  j　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

: E6 y5 H( h6 A1 J' _" V　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

* g' g% N8 k1 Q5 {/ i　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
, F2 n5 G2 r. B5 ~* I- K$ `+ J
# s, Q# z# B% E% P( P　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
7 m7 P' y+ F( u
, O5 I9 w3 g/ w( z7 ?) I/ O, i　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
, V8 M. Y4 O. k$ Y1 w
　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

; L" g' e& Q/ i) x　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
( [- H& r0 w4 T. K3 t$ ]# _+ f7 X& d
　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
% B! F/ S* V. R" X( j0 {9 {
- ^. t1 ^; x, b( o  z+ ~　　改进: Money can improve their life.

. B) h7 H$ J- M7 o7 C4 O: Q- p　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
6 S& m2 \( U# U" J! b' v' k1 C) O. z
5 `/ W8 X) A8 S8 }7 ]　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

1 M8 H! B0 r1 K6 C. o　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
* t/ c% n  v% F2 t2 ?  Y8 p
　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
2 j8 `& l8 s2 T. n  Q% m- X
# J- X0 W' w6 k; Q2 B　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
6 ]) _* x. }/ I/ w- Q/ h$ \/ m
　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
/ w$ a7 {1 K4 X( W& s, }, }
　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
! b0 t! X0 ]; |$ r' E* G" d/ `
　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

) Y/ J# t$ w5 c6 _9 f" Z　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
# ^, D/ D, p9 x1 m6 v% J
　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
& T9 L4 a* D6 y
0 N$ l6 g. w% W  A9 w　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
  E& ~9 `- J: G- }
　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
* S7 E; h- Y: D* o0 c% I! d
　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

) g  i& Q1 C$ A( V2 I- }　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
( |: t, I. ]: k! s: A* c0 N* {
　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
, M$ Q( ^, z* r0 r1 O7 r7 a
　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
6 t: \5 ~+ T7 b3 s' M% u: t
" [) w! j5 Y/ k　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

0 u" L! v" \2 k: U* l　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
- Z9 V4 y) S5 c7 A5 C
　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

/ r/ S9 l4 Q6 K3 \3 U　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
7 F/ e0 X5 R% _& r- D1 O4 {. q/ G
: o& O1 x# \0 }* V+ K" G　　34. I agree the latter idea.
% y( R9 i9 C! m5 j
( c. G/ c9 ^# \　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

9 l- u4 H3 V9 N1 F4 h# F, s7 K　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
& T( F0 @/ |6 x; ]
　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
6 Z( f4 p7 t# b/ j) h0 l
　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

" A, N# w% p# Q+ i　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

- ?. |. @/ @$ T# R+ F2 a! @- l& h　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

/ j7 y& q: o' A) B' F  R　　38. No one knows all the things.
# |- f0 U4 d1 q% \0 Q
: O! M  m" i7 B8 c0 Y4 y- }! N　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
: {  V: {: i7 ~7 K
　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
+ p9 r7 [% h; V' E6 S1 s
　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

4 y/ G, N* }9 P" ?　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

8 L0 D; \, b( D$ B% U　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
$ T: a" v+ M. e% Q& c9 I7 ]
! N2 K; x9 R0 @  J　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

8 [: G8 o9 }" H* |, Q; {　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
$ Q. o$ y# g7 T' r
　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
+ H) a" M" Q9 V. G4 d
  o1 U1 |) r  u. c/ @7 n& ]7 u　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

) W, D- \, Y" [' I　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
( M! L. j. x$ Z
. u3 P( W3 g/ F: J. K1 D7 d) I9 ?; W  ?" u　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

: Y( B* Y1 f0 a# F2 S2 p- I' s# o! \, n　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
; y, d4 C- N2 ~% R" B7 f/ y
2 p, Q! P3 z( o4 N8 O　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

7 G8 C: T! O6 v  i: `　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
: R2 D1 r5 T& Q" f6 u" N1 U
　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
4 P) w+ ^- d8 k* C: z) \' q+ K
　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

$ d8 N8 K( B" a% @* q8 o　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

, q; B) O' E' q; j" r4 @　　50. I felt alone.

# F! a: z9 z# `) Q　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka