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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
, s' ` @. _) i,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
& R$ f& f& f1 i& @; L零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
) u, U, X' F; `. \. A现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
' Y9 v/ H9 f+ C2 Y" z梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
" |7 J4 Q# y# e0 b3 p, H% k. U眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.1 k+ s: @9 n M* X) G
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.& f3 C+ V* Z r# |
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
: W- ?9 X! f9 E8 D3 R& N就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.% L1 T1 n* l" L
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及: @! S% l4 Q: r9 O( x6 ~) }% b$ p
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。 A9 f* J; |8 C' ]$ y3 d0 f/ h
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.2 T* |# ?0 Q3 I. f
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
6 u* P2 _* r& v5 |, R3 t2 {想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.! `. e6 s4 X: e
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
: o" _" e. d$ U; [寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
2 u7 K3 Z1 G0 U6 T) L- @ d7 d醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
8 E# c+ M# [, t: O" M迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
2 |: s \( w! _最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
1 e( N- D7 M* r N$ q5 S多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
, P5 X4 F$ a7 }8 x eWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' …./ y1 U& N& ]/ M: [6 x; x
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously8 O$ o; |4 F3 D- a3 f" _
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig. _. e+ g# n) |
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, / v' o% H* P, ^5 a+ M
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?1 e8 | T1 r* r, ^9 n1 U
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!; V; O* j! X ~* W a+ H
永难平息的泪
2 Y2 h, J3 q- _* s6 u$ |( y每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes5 i4 ~+ I0 w- G2 P) n
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
1 D* O Y+ g, u, q+ c8 i当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
) D$ E* O# ?8 }; c) O让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
. ]! R& S5 D/ r你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul 0 e( G: ]4 h7 V% E$ M" K; i3 V7 r6 F
一抹微笑;
1 ]4 T& h. \2 `2 p% T$ z7 t+ U一个手势;" W5 R T I' _- C' j8 R2 G9 M1 Q
一片话语,8 O$ l5 m/ I% @1 w# V4 C0 Z
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
k2 I1 E0 ^( e+ k8 y r* M, S明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner. {6 E6 R! A, S6 O1 x a4 L5 r; F
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.) L- Q$ y/ X8 Y3 }+ r5 [# v
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
( W& t5 d/ H9 P& M4 C6 p也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..$ e4 Y, P, `( z. J0 u0 h6 \+ W5 ?
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,1 W, E( I0 [" G) ?9 N) \
我并不以为然。5 q+ N! R1 N5 r8 o X* }; D
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
$ e8 g3 }/ v! H" F S$ A& T慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
2 S- O) a2 Q, b6 X) a, V- n/ C被一种情绪所左右,# O) W7 r' R5 I9 V# [& `. N
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .% p2 J6 ~' P0 r* i6 r/ f5 ]
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you! p/ R9 C; Z! K* S. g5 y
也不问我是否喜欢你,
9 _, l8 W: }+ D' h对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.- W2 W9 Q& h8 F/ g$ S4 y7 T
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you8 z, n3 k5 M) [4 ?+ R# ^
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you3 G4 d/ i5 A9 |
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
9 v4 j3 G9 D. I" L: g1 A& t3 ^然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
' I4 W R+ N& m5 V! r( e; K3 n你的身影已化成一种氛围,
! Q. m0 U+ V: i/ s# G* p记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
" \1 p$ ]7 E8 D+ y& b- k: F你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
6 ^. [4 T; u( N# W* q V) B4 `随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字8 U7 ]" c' o- i/ d$ b
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,( ^6 _) m2 I3 L& }0 l6 D
一种声音,and your voice5 j" J( E2 H) r4 J U7 M+ @
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.5 c; V# B4 J2 H7 d! T& ]
掺杂著幸福的感觉。! g7 ?5 a" h/ A5 `5 A) q
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
e& I# H' ~* R* h' I, J象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
' ]/ c% Q& L: q. t# n$ {3 Y; Z倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
9 b* L# r7 o$ f纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。5 ]8 u/ k$ a+ N& ^- p* M
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
4 F6 X7 {; R3 Y: v) [9 m. R/ G有一个能够让思念的人,$ J' {1 O9 ? g% b! v! p$ _
其实也是一种幸福。; y, Z+ e( _% X8 O
尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
: V) o4 R: L3 Q! h( J) y柔柔的海风,! a% y0 C. _. R: v# W, |6 V( j
甜甜的夏天。: x1 w* P+ F2 {$ z Z& p. E! s" K: d! }
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
+ O Y% U. f- {7 F7 o+ a只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
* G8 t& x b, s9 v( t- m& N! b仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.6 i) i: w* ?$ z7 o
想和你有共同的情结,
" R" ]: V" U# |' f, X: ]- u% T共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
* w* }2 k Q% K; \# L一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
( S* Y0 W% \/ {或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
/ O. B& \- F2 z% H或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
9 p9 [# j' I* T, B, m0 Y- w『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
, W5 t3 E S V我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
+ n3 x8 @ X ]- ~浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”. R) Q" v; S* t3 B- n
或是轻轻的一吻,& [& _3 ^# J8 \9 i
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
- F, a/ M- w- f7 U: a* f& B7 s6 w就足够了. That is enough.$ ^6 }' E; Q, d5 W' x" M
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ) l* R9 o/ O. f' I
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.; o5 I& Y! P A( C
萌出了芽,( _, b4 Z2 `, F1 c6 O0 {! K
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
3 p9 h$ i3 ] Q. S$ J2 |浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
- q5 R! E% ~% ]; g% P6 @5 Q如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
2 D [ y/ Z6 \0 Y, D能够牵著你的手,
9 z* J' r& P) y那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
6 |/ |+ P: g/ R5 A) S. b: z: u2 b$ w4 t让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 5 y' {. l6 m: x. O" t
慢慢地细读,' h0 S3 d5 Z6 m" |
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 5 B8 h# Y9 z3 c( R
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me & X1 ?0 ~$ G) O& Z5 _
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor ! J6 F+ ^" t3 [ B! S
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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