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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架2 k9 [4 u; R& {  `  [) O- B: s- ?

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(一) 对立观点式
3 ~& c' X( T( a/ _- \: g1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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; G. V: P& M  [(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
. c3 l+ ?$ L- {; K& ?7 NThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… - w6 T) V6 S" l$ X( s* k  x  h; G
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
' k, p) U" m3 i- O! fA is superior in another way, this is…
  h# _6 z- n9 |7 g7 F$ wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 0 K: E8 T* @. M& Z
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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% l& U! {1 i! i0 W. r& F* i0 Y2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 1 q. `: [' K# j4 G1 u7 j" X5 o% s
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ! d: ~% W* T9 b; Q6 N2 A4 }
For A, A 的一个优势 ! M: \* @7 i+ K4 Q$ {1 p
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 2 L$ n  _$ }9 q) \
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
% Q0 \8 A: Q  ^on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
- c) X3 y8 h1 {3 s$ w5 b, J; h; Lmoreover, B的优点2,for example… 9 G( T& a. G( N+ J1 h
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. : K! n- P6 U. @% g+ ]

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(二)单一观点式
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. ' T, W( U" x3 k; V0 N$ o
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. . v, k* Q- B7 L2 \( v5 {: a
There is no denying that… % ?; ]. h  N3 f* l7 y3 k( h' ^
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
9 D, M: L. X; d# P7 ZFinally,…
+ N5 u' S/ d; t/ e" D' [% @( m9 H) H7 _Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
2 D* U. T0 @) E! l(本类型只agree) 5 d% [* |  f, ~4 D, B8 p

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
6 H: @" ]( t3 s  ZThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: r5 z' b2 q0 v' E7 LWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 u9 [- e8 [8 x4 B9 M/ D* CA is superior in another way, this is… " z& X3 Z  W2 B' y( G$ w
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… + d) H7 U# h9 V( I& O: a0 P6 A
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... * {0 C" u. b4 `9 z% h1 l
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 . Q2 I- h: P. q' s% `8 {4 P3 x# |- s
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- b! ~. x  O: bThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
$ j3 B- s. N+ Q" |9 TWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
; H/ p% z" i( q) Z7 eThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
! I. W1 x! y5 {) K, B0 l; u1 zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… # ]$ j- }7 B# D# w- ]  A
C is superior in another way, this is… - p3 X/ e8 l, A" `7 o, C" Z( Q
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 7 `1 d6 d0 z7 c" ]  L
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
# D1 i! R/ X3 P. L2 z- a(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型 ; O; S" V8 f! G2 \
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ! m, @, M6 Y0 j" a  N$ y0 P
One of the primary causes is that… . m( J% |! K# ^: s
XXX also results from… 0 H+ n; N0 [3 b+ A5 Q
… is responsible for xxx, as well. - k; E  y0 X; @2 n7 V! c. d" V
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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$ C! c1 e2 a' f' K5 _2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 6 e0 ?9 K6 E  k% p6 G
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' n) c+ a3 Y- A- @  `: XOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
" l5 |: P( X$ w$ r/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 1 A4 l% B% f6 _# f
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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) Q) O  w8 }/ f3 J- G1 U4 ta more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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+ e& S( y6 g" F$ V$ d+ m& g# VIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?. I3 z: K% ?) l! ~( M. A
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.' ~# J1 \7 `* G( y, D) x6 |
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