TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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' o# g1 Y6 @8 V( K( K. C0 W(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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/ F# e. g2 N) f! N! f* }, F7 Y# ~(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
% {' x3 t6 t6 Z2 a; Z& J# PThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
+ m1 r8 b# y( |" M- x- T- T2 @8 xWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 w: l" j+ l# [9 [0 X4 n2 [! L4 tA is superior in another way, this is…
! w8 {# g( v% T9 wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ y  @3 ^6 Q) z  A% m! j2 V6 Y2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



# }' S5 C# p' D. Q0 d: i9 R  gTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
$ D# {$ D8 M2 e! y- S$ P; FFor A, A 的一个优势
! B3 y. [# u) H3 ~* EWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
& r6 K7 v: a  B! G3 ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
8 J# F( X/ J, I" d; F1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
0 \8 u2 ]. Q& pAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
: ]1 s: l: x( B" V" [Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
4 C1 ^& c3 W6 k5 X/ M+ I  [2 x7 aBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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% f8 ]4 f& t2 I/ @! X) T( R/ V$ l/ L# k(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 n  }1 g6 V( pA is superior in another way, this is…
" }4 |: u1 D: _9 kIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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" `: ^  C% C5 m6 Y6 }9 S7 PThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
) Z# p  h- ^- U5 U) p& J(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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+ k% l" X3 H* P3 \Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
; h: P4 _& I  e… is responsible for xxx, as well.
  \( z5 h- [. cTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



8 a8 I& l6 a1 B/ _" |" K. S2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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7 X1 f$ a3 A# S7 }; LOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
* a) t* @8 c5 E6 Z8 i/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
  W5 G5 Z! {1 @- ^, L/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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& x5 e. I0 l7 T% b% t0 b# e; L4 @a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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- e+ y, \% j0 t/ \' C. r' Q再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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' D7 K5 U$ q7 {& u- i[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]