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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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(一) 对立观点式 , g4 T4 ^' Z% U! U3 W' s
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) . }7 \7 ~+ q- O) ~
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
* n) i( K- c2 ?( G! l% |/ s+ XThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! t+ X# v/ k6 R" O
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 8 Z  w# m+ r2 I* R% u2 H% [
A is superior in another way, this is… : P6 y8 q% j5 q+ u7 d
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ u+ n" d5 W5 n) m) yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) ; s2 P) I) }5 h& B5 p5 I

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; |  w5 H3 r, S+ nTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. " U6 f& {# y/ X" A% v
For A, A 的一个优势
: i; q) X5 v/ E' NWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, : L" r" ]/ V7 d: E* p/ ?
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 5 A1 S# D8 Q, g
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
7 s. d% v. N5 ^6 o5 x* ]moreover, B的优点2,for example… ; j; [. G0 Q3 s( W# E
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. # `* E6 m( t) e6 ]( b( ]( m2 E

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(二)单一观点式
' W0 ~, q& @  e# F1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.   |  O: u6 Y3 p: v9 b( Y$ p
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
" x7 G8 a. E5 ]7 Z/ Y& v+ T# GThere is no denying that… 3 N5 Q: e: g# R' E6 `
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
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Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… : [1 m* ^+ @6 a2 S* |- h

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1 w  C& F/ {1 o% _" l2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
3 J" y, T1 x# d# p2 b% w1 f1 y(本类型只agree) / y: }9 C" M) k- J6 ~

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1 x7 N8 @; ~, W* R; \$ F(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. ! }+ ^5 D  j& X5 p! U
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ G1 M# S( c8 E: F5 k6 F7 mWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 j+ H$ R0 C8 a, O, Y7 b' a3 `A is superior in another way, this is…
# l5 k5 f$ R6 P- V- t7 DIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 J+ L" t$ T; @- \) |- B+ t, v; x7 x- j! a+ DFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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( q8 V% x: `4 [5 T& |  m(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 0 o& e. m9 [1 ~4 @2 m. y. [" C

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
2 w+ Q2 ^7 e; W. w0 f1 W. v, c+ JWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
/ r# P+ v3 ^, O1 D# PThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 5 p) g( t+ B% I# K0 X3 S
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… & [; k7 T4 {/ C6 c# v! x$ l: P8 _
C is superior in another way, this is…
+ M0 j# P9 L9 Z( C  f# uFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' k  n  N9 Y8 q! bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. ' N2 A* G5 X  A8 W
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 1 T: Q& j2 N6 w! i3 T2 G4 \- R8 G- u
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9 @  s+ }" w  K. n" t/ Q(四)原因解释型
5 V& m( S6 h2 o; N5 p1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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& F' b& a# t, i* P! r* j  e8 hAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ' ^- b" e- A( L# |9 D
One of the primary causes is that…
! D2 |3 G5 N: h% a) n( GXXX also results from…
) K* C" a7 Y; Z5 ?… is responsible for xxx, as well.
( Q. Z& d7 K1 RTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 3 A$ R: j+ [, h2 C6 J# H( Q

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
- Q1 F' ]; ^- vThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. ' }  A/ Z) F& Z
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… * i$ w/ Q7 }/ r( o+ C
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
2 ^- N% x3 y4 u7 \' s* `/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… " h( p  o: G- S4 D! d, m! J

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… 6 y( Z5 x5 W7 O( z& D

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) q7 _+ D# b& D, z. B4 I1 gIn addition/ furthermore 9 w  L& u4 v' z# R; y9 o" }
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! B& F$ g8 z- k% Y) ~In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?# ^1 V- n6 d3 N3 e/ v  Q( K. @( M$ w; X
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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& O) s5 r. _6 A7 {( n[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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