TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
* {* D& Y" u7 B7 E1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% i% l: g! _) m" R0 z8 i3 V+ D4 TWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
  D7 y2 r! Z/ C: FIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; {; `1 z$ X' [( `From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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9 c6 k$ c: f( T# l2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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+ S! ~6 u1 ^4 Z5 a- L* KTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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2 A; P/ r7 {: s3 s7 R, f& NWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 n! g  x" N; ?! z" Y1 u9 gmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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+ Y: m+ g( R9 p/ \, r6 W- d(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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# F" x* r, r0 W8 u' U3 N首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
9 u4 P: m) \- m% ?9 X, J& D1 ^, DAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
5 B% Q- x. z8 n* o- w1 d3 OFinally,…
$ b7 C( U8 a! w6 QBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 C( c# c& I- e- lA is superior in another way, this is…
4 |$ Y; J9 c& d( d- D9 }  SIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* V1 r3 y8 o  G/ \! B, QFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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4 S" e8 O7 v8 t2 B1 v7 {9 {1 g(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
" X; G) R- N& _/ s9 Z0 R/ CThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
9 {8 h- ~/ K$ o5 WWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
: B4 N" A: a2 o0 DFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
6 n# h( k8 ?5 [5 c3 c% }0 [(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
: u; P* ~2 k  M6 V. _3 H1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
- }% o7 a* P# p$ Z, E$ x1 Q3 t0 y! f  mAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
2 u- @% g$ |3 f  g2 p  l6 s  K& XOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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$ f. d" T$ [- C, y  ~0 wOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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* h' l5 q' Q, g8 Z3 E; `In addition/ furthermore
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0 i! Q1 l: [4 ]In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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9 a2 L/ v* P2 Q0 f. m再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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