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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 2 ~3 K9 A, H8 S$ [1 ~# h8 }% c
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
2 L1 g! j1 j+ e. M  r4 D: SThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! E8 L4 l0 j4 l) ^( Y& A
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
( [9 ?3 q2 b0 f( D* D( {! ?A is superior in another way, this is…
8 `/ ^/ c$ U+ E0 Z' ^$ zIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 5 R8 W% _" s  }5 n7 V
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) + D8 o" D8 O- _) g0 b
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 5 G" B# N) e& G* ]5 u3 W8 y% b
For A, A 的一个优势 4 H* n: v) X2 i! \! P  c
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
( t$ B$ h2 j7 d& \! w9 ]" @Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 0 o+ m8 |5 u5 F
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, D- q" Q7 t+ c5 `+ @9 n' Hmoreover, B的优点2,for example… 4 S) }/ Z8 f1 h2 @$ y. |# N
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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) b/ Z) F7 w8 a(二)单一观点式 ' y+ t- \3 X( J# O2 _
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. 2 U9 g# V' @" j. v, x$ o3 t
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
' W' V: d. {% i4 `4 z% X8 M5 eThere is no denying that…
) M4 O$ B7 \/ O& ?% G, p, NAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 2 w/ ?+ F6 O$ w0 d( D
Finally,… ; h& B5 `9 x' J# u# q
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… + @& y0 L9 M0 R0 p

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. L, j% m! s" H* I/ [) R, Q) Z) Z! s2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 2 f, F" D9 f9 I: v, t  H6 s9 H7 x
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
/ W. W% o: N4 g) f$ {3 F8 bThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ' [4 [* l" m3 Q& g$ U
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 9 ]1 ~, ?2 l3 m/ E' D3 t
A is superior in another way, this is… ; k# u5 U' N! Y6 V: E
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… # v+ g" q- y- k- |% `) o
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) M2 i1 w6 e8 Y2 H/ i, |
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/ _  B* i$ c! e5 T. W6 x) v(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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7 i6 ?/ ~" `$ S: r$ Q1 BThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
7 l" ~( h' w8 EWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.   K: B: e6 g5 v6 j+ P5 \
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
1 q1 B% j, `( ?What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ' Y# W/ {$ x  x2 ^$ [4 O
C is superior in another way, this is… + ~* W3 P: ?& ?* b& e  H4 m; f! m7 U
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
5 S) J. \( N% ~3 W, k( T3 I7 DFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 0 c/ d. k! z8 l' @$ j3 \5 d+ a& h7 J
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)   E  }+ d7 d9 t# X/ W4 u

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(四)原因解释型 7 C# h4 V$ {- q- \, C
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% ^( A- q, H; s; x陈述这个事实
5 S! W' j5 H- Y! `Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
0 k$ A( W( T& F% S+ ^One of the primary causes is that…
7 q  [3 G8 `+ U4 k) i, dXXX also results from… $ T) Z  K5 B( l3 A- m1 S
… is responsible for xxx, as well. 6 t7 ]: @' {3 E/ y8 k
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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7 e! N& |2 h1 G( E$ r9 r2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
/ m% R2 r$ M" |# F: g% IThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. $ Z, p3 P5 ]5 M4 \7 ^; {

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… . o  M2 V0 B& P5 Q3 G$ N
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- K4 O' _9 Z% z% L1 v- F! _0 S/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?4 Y& C3 N1 P/ u8 k+ v' W
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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. J; r" A6 r' l' F, X' i[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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