TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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8 \% p! L4 K, F6 Y(一) 对立观点式
' Z4 }0 p/ R* b# e4 Y# Y. ^. F3 g; }1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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3 p; O0 K3 x8 c& \, X(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
2 g: |6 `4 p1 g1 X$ z1 v( IWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# y2 M5 A; q' f% eFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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1 H; @! z; x; _- G. I1 t. C- ?2 [To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
- ]1 Q' K% u- X! j  IWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
, [) l. ^1 ~0 g3 y- lon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
! V/ Z8 \; D; `2 _After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
3 \  c* G3 N8 i6 |5 i  Y2 R' ^( n& ^Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
8 B' e& H* ^+ e( h! ^Finally,…
- D5 H8 c7 O3 ~3 OBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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) i- i% |5 `" w8 e' b２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)



+ s, Z( ^6 ^( r7 k4 @' |4 y6 L(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
) ~4 ~" y! t5 N% l4 S- N- Y' bThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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* Y) [5 F) F' c/ I) d( A3 c/ _A is superior in another way, this is…
& b: q7 }4 M, r0 E: |% ZIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
6 S( F! _' F; O. {# k0 O6 TWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is…
& [) d  U7 p0 x' v$ k8 @& dFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
8 G6 Q% I, E( ?8 s, lFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
) h! f; v; Z! Q( v2 }(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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* ~8 Q* r8 m/ B6 v6 P(四)原因解释型
3 B% k( A( \6 |1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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( H/ y  O1 i/ ^( x' B陈述这个事实
, H( ~: L* l- S& n3 f4 i. T; N$ kAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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5 m+ ]7 H! c% x8 h( i6 ]5 ]4 `2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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( y8 V: d$ ]8 z; z) B$ R5 D; bThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
& d$ T9 ~3 L  ?* a( G, q  M/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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9 u7 l3 v) w! H' J2 ca more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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) k& T2 ~% x6 k9 r, }3 z% @/ YIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

9 Y. O& i4 A4 P7 K: L再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]