TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
/ Z  B% s4 j* z% Y(一) 对立观点式
9 B% d# _" C$ p- F5 y1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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* H' Q0 n7 }0 w# {- [$ x(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
, c( o( }, Z# a  A/ }The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
, @) Z3 N2 q' U& }It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. N2 Q% c/ D, M  z6 ]6 LFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
/ A5 B+ H3 g5 q4 e; LWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
* ?) B& ]8 y; P3 ^+ D3 }' {Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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9 ]" W2 v+ U* z& f' |5 T& x) E3 a0 Z首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
$ d) P# O- a; g; w& G  ?There is no denying that…
. @8 @2 F6 t3 C6 TAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
3 K# E7 Q- m! i' z" D1 BFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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, k+ p2 L5 O+ `9 p- N(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 M4 K  Y) q5 P1 L: aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




1 a( `: d0 {% ^# U5 ]" d(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
; n) t0 V+ j1 \2 ~" M* F( kWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
" F7 I4 K* c. I) i9 ~The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
8 y) R% L% v/ F( i9 UWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
; J% I8 g3 p/ [1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
% O; e/ e! {, @8 |Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
: j1 W& V' \! |, E' U9 e& g' m) Z5 L* kXXX also results from…
! @; B" }$ ~" a  ~9 r# N6 s6 w/ n1 A… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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8 T5 `; k1 P8 d8 w2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
7 u& o: q" a  D" O* `There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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" w! P2 @* V  }, B5 q4 pa more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore


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9 l/ l) |, k# ~) Z# ^. {' {( FIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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