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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

. j- H# c/ p% o# P1 Y. K$ M1 |/ Q　　　　　One day I always remember

% c2 q; t6 p9 `; Q& u' B* r　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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# O: o8 w1 K9 ]. vexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

* \" }( z& o4 L- `put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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$ m' P4 a& m( Q' W little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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1 a8 E2 X# o5 {+ B, e8 J! f every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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3 g2 f4 A+ _5 C/ g& {7 F0 \ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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& ]- O; b  O! W; ^3 d; x, atrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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6 Q8 p% y: @* n% |that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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  h8 m$ _9 z! r, P on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

- {" U# J+ a( d6 k9 Z/ ?$ Bdeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

. {* {* H0 j/ U8 f& Z& ^( }+ }: O% [( z5 N[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！