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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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8 I# r, Z1 t  P( _8 q& E; b+ A3 M     One day I always remember, s. w; v' [  W7 t9 q$ Y8 D8 A

! X* Q! ]% f$ D/ w& X- Q  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to4 A9 V9 j* R4 S
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) c5 `. c! Q! ~% S$ t; H2 ^
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since : |+ p; f" u4 I( P) I

5 Q$ d/ _8 j, G, i% x# c8 Q  tthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my - j7 q. p/ B% b: X2 N6 C1 t! X" Y

* d5 M: ]( ~1 a; }/ E' e$ Wdeaest daughter.& A4 D6 K- E2 h2 w7 j6 Q" ^

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8 C9 l) J; j. _8 I- bAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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7 X) Y" t3 q2 u[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!' l/ _) c) `: A2 J
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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