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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember  d/ i+ ?0 R9 ^/ \; L, |. j
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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# n" K6 d+ }! @+ Z0 G( [put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,% ]0 Y% o  x/ N
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid8 f& Y6 C1 |$ {* g; ~' e
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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2 h# ^, b- ~, X3 Q$ \* Wtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing2 V9 g  x* o5 L6 R7 @
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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% a$ |  g; V5 \8 Z1 {for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my . E) E2 U- F: d2 l, A

2 @% h* f6 u4 K6 tdeaest daughter.
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+ b" \% x5 N/ `# n* o+ uAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!  y7 x& B* r9 a/ e
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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