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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)/ ?; S! |. b# o9 {) F5 s2 l0 \

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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 }! h3 f) A$ Y- S: b4 k' V9 @8 Z4 n

* ]( m$ {9 A( f; |/ `exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to' n/ w' p' |& C3 r' V
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my, Z: ~; q+ K" v$ h8 L& R
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,$ K6 r0 s! Z% b0 D
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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/ U2 T# S, p2 S6 Gfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will7 k2 O" r+ L, S0 n% o6 d

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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
6 J# A# M4 g2 L- D% v- }& Kwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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