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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)* G: q6 |$ _. x# `

1 e* `3 b/ r/ L# g) g     One day I always remember3 c5 B0 Y8 q' s4 z

+ h& t6 ]( o; y; W4 Q  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was* J' G; X) I* [8 k( ^
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,0 Y! [" k: ^. w
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 6 `" a8 b  V' F$ \/ }5 K" T% P
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 5 ^+ n' r; c2 ~3 {9 \) O5 d. B
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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7 F  |0 Y9 k: [" d% v on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 1 y5 V* ?2 G3 y& O2 b& C

! P9 B# w# H; _7 Dfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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6 W) [3 m  S/ ?deaest daughter.6 G0 S* S! p: g  b$ t
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6 v. p3 v: v8 L2 cAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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8 G5 o( K1 p( w( _; N# M- W# P6 ][ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
2 N2 Q4 r7 _; [0 |we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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GREAT!
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