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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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9 ^0 d2 A0 H: E# n2 n8 m  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to0 G9 S  k7 f$ H6 E& \

. w# Y, \8 m, S, `8 qput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,7 ~/ J  x8 b& M8 a9 D: Y

4 b! [: u8 U; M7 k( J/ q8 v: x3 V every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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) W, E8 e  Y  t. z! itrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 2 Q5 p% I2 y! K. B. Y
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing  t* p0 A# A# B( o7 Q7 [

$ q, q) |+ {  M) [5 ] on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 5 D( ]8 f$ w. B8 z

9 n/ g' P# A; h8 @for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 7 H1 v! |1 v$ S; R) O. d5 P/ a
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deaest daughter.% @5 @  o) Y" |
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, u$ f7 q, T9 J# X* Z0 X, TAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will  \; J2 Q: L5 }5 b# ^0 J: t
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.& @- q1 d8 h3 I0 u, `, J+ |

. y( G$ Z" A) R8 F, Q[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!. @0 h2 b% P& A% ], s' t) n% \$ [
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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