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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% r& O  e; j& J2 r' g
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     One day I always remember* ?! I, ^5 X$ K& Q  C8 [8 g) [
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was" ~; q1 E3 r/ T, F- {
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my% q4 T( Q, C! v" V: M. }! D( w
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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7 n& S; e5 n0 m$ L, ? every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid, \- A, B3 h3 C: y  a+ A# D

2 c8 s  S! B) a; _% f was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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9 T; u% w# ]6 [/ h/ V" btrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since * v$ v' K/ B+ U0 E' d& z

# \) M% ^) j# Q% M- Xthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing. _; p6 Z! n& U* X( _

& O4 A3 V: b. k5 K9 ]1 ~ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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  w0 S0 ^6 ]8 j5 @/ |. T& i. ufor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my * k) k( |1 y$ }. o8 X% e
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deaest daughter.
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' d4 j( W, N; S+ i9 G% [; rAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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  N5 x0 z5 l" M+ w& z* Y never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ |) w! ?2 j/ v, d4 `: M, V2 Wwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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