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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)- y5 b6 b: g$ Q4 g4 q& l1 v
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     One day I always remember
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' T/ Q# z2 y8 j6 o  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was) a" D/ N* |. x6 t6 |4 ~; w

6 e$ s7 w. f% Z& a  ~  g, z6 qexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to1 I5 C# U  I- E9 A% w5 I

/ r! R6 |8 _) \' i2 s* Y4 u9 E2 ]put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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5 H2 z; g3 i/ @, G9 b! b8 L0 w little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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6 J  D- D7 `( ]2 T' i) G4 f5 N every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 N6 q2 h' E& D% T, }

. I% i# p! B  K9 V/ R was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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) |+ l2 u) r" v! F0 Z) ^/ htrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing0 c% r( T) ]7 T* q
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 9 J6 f' o% O  k6 E0 U/ @6 q2 F
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deaest daughter.+ j: Q4 N) y8 A* Y

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: S4 A3 x! {0 k! ~8 IAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
& T# Q) K) N- G( x2 rwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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