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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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% U( o' X7 k1 F     One day I always remember9 Q, N6 C9 y+ I5 t

8 X, `3 n) h+ q4 ^- m" K  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was# J& y4 `: W. R( A

  A! ]; u6 E8 Q1 Eexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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3 ~3 N, `4 v1 p) j- j3 ^8 iput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my8 U0 T8 y, [* O

. o) p: s9 C7 Q$ N7 Z' L' i little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,% F; P' m! Z3 O0 F: ?) C) F. l# B
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid8 D9 h$ n" U; \. w. k3 ^
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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: t& T( K+ n" g# H1 c  c7 i0 w* N+ Etrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing0 i( E( B. ~; y) q% O! X1 U3 n
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard $ H: |1 i/ Y) u/ y, Y4 \7 E
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.. @% k) s8 L- y$ [+ {4 J+ d& Y( C+ q

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& C! B( W2 L; u: PAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe." [' [* L( |- _7 |4 y: m. y- }; G8 @: S/ M

, t. N, P( r  v# z4 J[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!% L/ Q6 X7 \7 |. I- _  a
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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