作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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; o  t, R4 `5 ]3 W9 k+ `! n　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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" u0 @7 [* Y; I2 P8 R4 B. X7 vexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

( ~7 r& L3 |/ P+ O9 U* I# M( Yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

) t' I' o% G8 ` little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

$ x$ e1 L8 e& y every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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+ S9 Z. g$ X* @# v& |. Z on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
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OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！