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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 1 u" o* E: T% j- z
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  - g0 r1 c% ]( P# {
Dreamers1 r" t" |7 j" W  o' h1 E- g9 S" o
Savages) U1 _1 S; B* \1 p/ V& q
Poets* r; f: u4 D" D  b1 J* \
Builders of canoes,. L4 r$ a2 ~7 s4 t* V7 |
Black smiths
" F. |8 X# X4 S2 l' R" f7 l: JMurderers,5 \, |9 o9 i9 h8 U" W: M: g
Risk takers,6 h* r& t. f, M$ `7 Z
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
% V% r( I6 h! Z" [As I think of what could be.
( b) S" F6 @8 T% UThe world is so big to me $ S1 C) ?$ h) m1 M' ~: ]
I wonder what it means to be
8 ?9 y1 T6 A8 }5 @I looked up at the star and smiled ' L* p: d' K7 r: ^0 B1 B
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ) H' d9 d' R! U0 |4 m

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
2 g7 T1 v9 p- Z: Q. @+ }, v1 T评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& o" G" [  P  t" o" O; A% a' b
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,/ Z# h+ ~9 V, k! ~% Q: [! p3 ^3 X
A poor old Guy;8 ?3 I0 K* V" n; j% [" R
Legs in a bonfire,( `8 L9 ?" O- [
Head in the sky
9 H; m- k& B. SLonely, with the feel of betray
4 u; Y( p" V) {/ NHeart empty and hollow
8 d7 h" s4 K% A) q; xAlone I stand% K9 X7 t6 h% f, r: ?8 @/ b
I am useless to all
1 a) G/ y3 M2 j: jBut I wish I were a dove
6 t6 [' {9 i$ X6 s: \/ `4 v/ \" mGiving myself to the world, to the fire
5 K+ \) i6 o- `8 I' ~+ d( k% qI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind0 G3 m: m" ?( O& T, n* z
I sent prayers to my god
: n- `4 u8 I$ n, a- kThough he does not answer/ `0 j* ?3 Q5 G8 Q6 m$ O
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。* c/ D4 n& `5 }& s4 `8 {3 M4 }
加油加油,经常写写!
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