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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
: k* ^1 M' M: o2 T# ]' |- V7 eI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
% T& s" Y7 F% j6 wDreamers* R! R4 s: i$ o/ N$ W# d/ Q! L
Savages3 v7 \, d5 h( T. N/ L
Poets
6 M/ f. _. d( B( ~0 pBuilders of canoes,0 _( y/ T& U! e2 G' H
Black smiths, b5 ?0 b0 G2 J) U
Murderers,7 @) D( Y# Y, u' Y& `
Risk takers,
+ o- y1 Q8 K# [3 XMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder # Y, j0 K* B9 s* ~
As I think of what could be.
) B6 V4 J! f* _3 ZThe world is so big to me 8 c, }# `8 v% C: \! S' J: _
I wonder what it means to be! p! O4 a( h# H" w7 R
I looked up at the star and smiled 2 S: `2 x. u; j) k
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ( H  ~+ N( m2 A5 [& }% a3 b3 a
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
# T( v. V0 U. N: W/ m评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
+ ~0 D% I" h5 H. I% `7 [' W顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
" X) q/ i3 A3 l( F4 \A poor old Guy;2 J) c& v6 `& V$ e8 m
Legs in a bonfire,$ L! _# ^, W$ }+ _9 A, h+ ]3 w
Head in the sky5 {; e- a1 L. Z7 L( y8 v( t
Lonely, with the feel of betray
. ], e. t- ?4 a  X8 o3 kHeart empty and hollow
: u) X+ m$ q* i9 D4 l  j( kAlone I stand( |3 w. q! C/ Z+ ^" u$ V% x
I am useless to all 5 r/ i$ z, v. q, R* _6 F0 `, W
But I wish I were a dove
  V9 T* n: @/ j2 w/ u2 [Giving myself to the world, to the fire1 x9 Q9 Q% S( I( S; Z' c
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind5 @) X! M! ?3 J9 q
I sent prayers to my god
; w4 j" p8 Z, X; E/ vThough he does not answer
" `8 t' j. T7 a- C8 J7 oHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。& F  K, Y. z! j' m
加油加油,经常写写!
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