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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
0 M# r6 j5 B! }5 [6 FI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  9 C1 X" e% Y# [
Dreamers7 A7 k( @3 t* \
Savages
( a, p& a9 g' Y) S7 k2 Y% i, p; x; X) HPoets
) x( o, W% u  ?% I+ m2 u% {Builders of canoes,5 j4 z- P  F5 o& a! S  P) x
Black smiths6 J/ D' s  X& p) P. x
Murderers,
" _* N1 |0 x5 m0 l/ ?Risk takers,
! b6 @7 G9 `) V3 \7 rMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder ! J( K# u' W; S; e8 P  h
As I think of what could be. 4 R& K7 @5 b/ ^
The world is so big to me   _( C% w* l4 m( q6 M7 }0 o
I wonder what it means to be
7 e) S0 K' {0 S4 e; g7 a+ Z5 H9 TI looked up at the star and smiled # [; H% h5 G1 @0 y! B7 b/ H& _% e2 ~
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。7 {! L* Y7 W8 n" D8 V( d% s
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。6 z% c. z3 ]: f. y
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,8 ~8 r; J# y; ?. `$ w0 `
A poor old Guy;  Z) }* Q& Y* Y
Legs in a bonfire,
+ L3 V$ Q% K( M/ R4 L7 LHead in the sky
' k+ Q9 G9 L4 }! O# D9 _Lonely, with the feel of betray
2 l" O6 H9 ]* r% y: ZHeart empty and hollow% G9 K/ O* T3 [# a+ I1 W6 V6 D
Alone I stand
) l- I$ q, q4 j  MI am useless to all
) o$ p. s( S4 ^) V- l- oBut I wish I were a dove
7 d% H8 P8 K  ~4 Z% _3 c7 HGiving myself to the world, to the fire
& j2 ?5 t9 A2 v: X$ GI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind4 S5 z$ }' ]3 h5 o
I sent prayers to my god
1 Y4 w8 R9 }8 b; m7 C  q5 EThough he does not answer/ o, ^" W7 B* U" H$ m
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 H! J. e( Q: R0 G) q加油加油,经常写写!
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