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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, . s$ ?. J8 v1 R, t9 T
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
8 k& I, t. v2 x6 O, p, `2 ZDreamers/ Y  N/ o" d$ r0 y2 Q5 P$ u0 o
Savages
3 ^3 R. K( B2 oPoets
- p: V& u4 V1 [. ABuilders of canoes,7 ?+ v) c  C4 x
Black smiths1 M$ m$ ~9 m; b4 q9 P% z
Murderers,4 A* B3 y4 j1 ?6 ?8 Z, c, \% r3 T% L
Risk takers,
7 Z$ T1 P- c# d& `" eMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder , U. j. ?+ w- G) k, @
As I think of what could be.
; e$ X) D" x; gThe world is so big to me
2 L6 w: j+ c/ N& ~I wonder what it means to be
" h# c' J/ Q4 O% V) K2 m+ C2 WI looked up at the star and smiled
6 {( w% n" x5 s% AThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 0 f1 M+ f+ Y0 V
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。, `) a  Q& m( A9 \+ a
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- {  O2 I4 R( N7 g  J顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
  v1 T  V+ h9 R' r6 L+ P; N& GA poor old Guy;$ Q7 y; G4 D0 H  U
Legs in a bonfire,/ q8 M! j' ?# v) B
Head in the sky
- B9 W$ }# c! Z4 _; a3 P5 @6 S8 \Lonely, with the feel of betray
7 N+ V, X6 w8 y$ I3 F' p+ F, tHeart empty and hollow2 s' {: `9 f# }1 Q$ G3 Y  Z
Alone I stand
$ S" k* P5 \+ @/ p) |' BI am useless to all
: ~# d9 H5 F& b2 i/ a, UBut I wish I were a dove
6 N$ I% l5 S  v) y7 W8 u# o0 q) }Giving myself to the world, to the fire4 ]8 [; M9 y  \3 A  i/ ~4 |
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
7 J! S( q, _& JI sent prayers to my god
0 `: K! \* D2 B/ q- w) F  s3 nThough he does not answer# f( N- j) h/ z) J$ J* ~% H; w
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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