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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 3 R+ i/ i: K$ `. O+ p: T0 r' g
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( K8 \; ~& P  Z& \' B
Dreamers
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( C( e+ i6 O. rPoets) w6 i$ P8 |  m$ i; f% T
Builders of canoes,
5 ]# I$ w" A3 i. |1 M) r2 `0 ?# ]( d6 jBlack smiths
/ v, ~) F1 V! K+ w3 y  ZMurderers,
7 {6 T* g4 p; u$ J9 ?& oRisk takers,4 L# x+ o$ P- J7 N3 S! S* Y" v
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder : H/ p% b1 L$ z" v9 y" F' r% T8 j
As I think of what could be.
% U6 n4 M6 D5 c1 v+ m+ kThe world is so big to me 6 l  S( ~% ^' {  R/ }
I wonder what it means to be) t9 t  p4 _' u  ?3 L
I looked up at the star and smiled
5 p0 f/ j5 I7 iThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. . J2 S( b' O* A6 i+ }5 d3 u9 L- g
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* E) n7 a9 P' T$ y$ Q评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
6 W2 b" h7 I6 f; ]; {, A+ u; m顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,6 i5 Y7 c* v. x1 A- t* C+ w
A poor old Guy;$ Y4 X4 O- O# P  {$ T1 |
Legs in a bonfire,
" Z+ v  m2 T5 |2 C+ o! ]Head in the sky! g  ?$ s! k7 `! B3 Q
Lonely, with the feel of betray
  [5 P3 T0 P0 |. ~* k- \9 XHeart empty and hollow. ]5 \+ K  T6 g5 K; D
Alone I stand& S+ W1 N1 ~8 @) f/ N& [
I am useless to all , y, K/ C, i' r" S8 R$ @1 x
But I wish I were a dove 9 @" w) h. v$ U
Giving myself to the world, to the fire6 K! g( h* V7 ^+ n  J# s
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind* k1 R+ B8 o* W( G7 {" T
I sent prayers to my god5 ^9 ?* y3 D4 D% U( v/ L1 M
Though he does not answer
2 S1 t- @+ m8 e, NHe bless me with the gift of hope 4 j1 R! v$ ^4 e6 X$ p: l
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。) v7 B$ z9 P% [; s# S& z
加油加油,经常写写!
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