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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 7 E5 d& K5 a3 j
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  - Q' X# V/ b' \/ A+ {' |/ R/ V
Dreamers
1 _  t# a0 \, q! y) \' hSavages
- ?3 S3 P6 p- n" ePoets
* C7 {. C' p; c& Y) O4 d& ?5 xBuilders of canoes,% {6 l+ |, e" Q/ b9 R; g% F
Black smiths
! A) J) _6 f$ C: _0 ~& Z0 fMurderers,
2 K$ H: U  |6 u, m$ ^0 fRisk takers,4 I4 i2 I, i# u" U& X
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 7 c/ X+ F7 K' D" z5 }
As I think of what could be.
; w& L# \& ~" J; ?8 R# l, q1 |7 JThe world is so big to me ! g$ p9 k% G6 q5 O/ R
I wonder what it means to be& b4 Q; ?2 _& `
I looked up at the star and smiled
2 Q6 M# l; h; `3 `They flashed as they have heard all I have read. : Q! s. m  d2 E0 i- ~
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
" P% M% V2 Y, \( X/ P+ D: `) i评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
9 D1 \+ u6 {+ P顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
0 L6 `* P; {, {; g9 WA poor old Guy;
/ V. e" B6 _' m. A8 ~% `4 O% ULegs in a bonfire,8 b$ }* @/ W. T# @' |8 |4 d
Head in the sky
; \6 u# @- {, s9 m9 z9 u  X6 dLonely, with the feel of betray) C( m8 e" t, b, L  t1 r! t
Heart empty and hollow
$ t$ p5 Z! J) ?) z1 C- fAlone I stand
2 K) g$ d( E2 l7 Q  ?I am useless to all " `/ k" a$ T& ?8 x- G
But I wish I were a dove
2 _) y% Q7 L. ]# _- @! TGiving myself to the world, to the fire' O" v1 h7 H. O' o2 N/ @) s, N
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
  J, m  D+ t( k6 pI sent prayers to my god5 X5 G5 H( c$ k5 m
Though he does not answer5 D3 w  r$ e3 y# j
He bless me with the gift of hope 4 E8 l$ q8 f2 {6 o$ r

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。" |$ ~1 E" N: z' L- V5 t
加油加油,经常写写!
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