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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
" o2 o$ t/ q# K: I3 bI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( s! ]$ F/ g! a* ], Z0 C5 Q
Dreamers
1 Q. ]6 T, V3 nSavages
' J- b) n$ B5 |; A% wPoets5 {0 n0 v0 w- G4 N5 M) P* n4 d
Builders of canoes,5 H0 }* U" A  i0 ]  i
Black smiths
( i% t3 R' U7 ~0 O- [  c. T! WMurderers,$ F' b% E) Z3 n  j" L# W/ P
Risk takers,
  v0 d  ]. Q) q" RMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
. ]% ]3 R- @4 c" h1 v+ BAs I think of what could be. 9 V0 V  u) Q& A/ o
The world is so big to me
4 B" z" ]2 Q' a8 v3 D. y/ RI wonder what it means to be- }3 T: h% Z2 _) M: }
I looked up at the star and smiled , o, }$ b, C7 x! e( H/ f
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! H; n( k0 U* t评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。0 ~5 r8 f# u2 M0 _9 P$ |
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
% U1 l8 I1 z7 V1 U) c) BA poor old Guy;
  I9 x8 ?  I( s$ V  m% M' oLegs in a bonfire,7 q3 R/ z& R  w- t
Head in the sky: u. ^/ g5 V2 E( h% \) |: v* F
Lonely, with the feel of betray7 ]- H/ M4 G3 Q( |1 y
Heart empty and hollow6 k7 _% t+ V# x0 n5 C
Alone I stand
0 ^3 C! H6 G# T* c/ `! KI am useless to all
4 Q' E6 D/ I( n/ l3 R# u* ^# UBut I wish I were a dove
8 n# }* r0 f+ YGiving myself to the world, to the fire
. q5 j, F- l/ J4 \I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind- ?7 ^2 b5 U" F6 ^
I sent prayers to my god3 n5 m) V' z5 E3 P9 G" `
Though he does not answer
) u' u2 z" V4 ]( x4 o7 ^5 R; \He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。4 H! e8 u9 E; d1 l) Y
加油加油,经常写写!
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