天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
' V. }# C. r. r& ]Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

) o/ X  L9 Z6 Q! G) q: L; l鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

! [, x: z- O) C7 v* q& s. s鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
' ]6 `9 ~( U' l! i7 [3 USheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.