天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
* Q  G5 n: o% T6 n/ R  y1 NTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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! P; s' Z% h7 E: }2 U, s鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
+ p0 x6 q" E7 ZTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

! p" Q9 N5 K. s/ `& o9 k哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
# p6 z( j0 q1 c: ?1 i3 l* ]0 II think it is better to have sth more appropriate.