儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
" R  x$ I, c7 G2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
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7 u" K5 o! Z# v% MI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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$ |9 K& B7 Y- A/ i; ?. F: L0 g* HYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

, k4 f* g/ G4 s4 Q9 A/ h) _3 }I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

  F5 ]" B- Y% {/ v& v. Q3 }* U" Y1 CThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

+ f3 Q5 Y$ S  p: c/ pI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

' [) h( P# ^2 s7 O# J, lYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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, T' ^: H9 M7 CYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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: o. }$ b" d5 E7 ~! s' i4 VI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。