我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
. \* W& M# y  }- |- ZSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
' G. U& r7 ]$ p, [4 }6 A8 B4 N' jFrom the colorful nature
. v- t3 w1 q1 qTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
& E# w6 T5 a# {- P! g) qWashing my heart and soul.
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& R) ^. T! S$ E" j9 Q, F" EGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
4 A# Q* ^& ~( uMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

2 d$ S5 Y1 q& ~2 S# L一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
6 E; a' e" m. |0 H5 UIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
# b1 v9 Y5 g1 \6 I; e夏天来了