我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
5 `, F' ^+ X9 W+ k( D+ KSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
5 |/ T, {8 m7 Z- P4 w' DLet myself go ---
5 _: N1 U) d& ?; d; R. Q7 ?Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
/ a+ q1 K2 u6 n- Z1 j8 o" gGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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! p7 Q& Z: p9 m+ F; g- c$ {一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
* v' G4 ^: i( h  R( U! X* o( G# aIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
" U2 g% q0 k. ~but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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