我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
; {* m( T) I: H/ S( ?( E( t6 SSummer's Coming

" h( K6 D1 O# J8 E( _9 n$ j  E: lFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
3 p2 s6 H' D0 N! |. kFrom the colorful nature
. h+ c# I4 y- V; ?3 r1 vTo my life and dream.

! C; u9 V5 }+ q/ _6 x% g5 m# t2 YFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
2 M" I: r, a* q" bGo to the wild rain
4 n; J2 u% q+ @) MWashing my heart and soul.

& G+ x+ w- |% O2 HGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
7 |  C* m& z' h& x6 b) iMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

+ S2 `) S9 L6 V5 a一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
3 C* }0 _' c  `5 q. \* x4 d( l; c" `6 {夏天来了