我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
- L8 `- G$ [) k3 k: bSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
1 K" ~) j& l0 Q0 {5 w8 `6 HTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
/ q" p/ E5 Y5 F" @& [: O: tLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

. y. J$ l+ o0 T+ O/ f$ XGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
$ c# [9 D; T4 u% k" N9 |* w2 x& r& K# AI can prepare nothing;
; C5 _5 d4 R7 qMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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, m( B0 Y0 L9 ]5 F( f+ ?# r( f[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
) q$ J) _* _) T9 [' Y) b1 Gbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了