我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

8 x3 H0 v9 _8 }Faster, hotter and sweater,
' [$ s$ x. H/ A6 B* hSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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& k8 J: z: f8 `  L; [3 h/ V# g6 J& }Following the summer's step,
/ m6 P7 I* b% \, U9 @Let myself go ---
5 u0 {+ a+ f2 ~9 OGo to the wild rain
6 U, [( a0 X+ q* A3 u9 S6 h) nWashing my heart and soul.
6 r3 W: i. U- l' H3 X* E* E5 o/ v
6 k, f/ Q* d% z  }5 l% ^Good-bye, my happy spring;
7 j' M' O5 U9 i0 `+ @Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
$ d1 u! i( U$ u; U0 _My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
5 u: z6 c6 h$ u5 {: H( k7 iIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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3 Q, M' V2 A" K9 @# ~3 s[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
: W8 S  p& O' u( x8 x4 Xbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
3 T+ \+ y! B. B& }- I夏天来了