我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
$ r: t% t0 _4 n1 D* w* g8 |8 v' oSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
1 o, u; ~' z( c3 H. S# eFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
  n* z6 v' _) Q6 H& ^& \Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
3 u& V9 k9 Y' ]1 OWashing my heart and soul.

5 J. v7 s  M; F2 y) R6 JGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
2 p' }3 \. V$ D& OI can prepare nothing;
4 ^+ o% t7 M1 B. p$ x2 _- tMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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6 }& r6 m; Z" o$ B" Z5 o! m一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
" ^3 u4 U8 {  q% \' P( Obut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
, A. d& y3 R+ z4 [$ R夏天来了