我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
+ G% t! b4 L- R8 L. C# |2 a, Y9 Z是十多年前的作品了——
' W. @5 ]7 ~9 E& D( [Summer's Coming

' K# B- z( M, b, m$ y- J; I# }+ XFaster, hotter and sweater,
: q# Z5 u* Z" T7 C% ^Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
. n. P! Q/ b+ T' m% A" G; |' oFrom the colorful nature
9 U" x! i+ X6 s  ATo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
1 X3 T- h; E0 g4 A4 c; ]1 NLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
  \+ @4 O: `& n3 W" Z0 _9 F2 w& bWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
- z1 i9 |' C( O% L- n* [, {) Q. L! @I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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8 l& t! |3 B9 w2 Y3 L; z一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
! Z4 E1 a7 Y  m) R! sbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了