爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love

2 b& \4 I! i' c: h# y9 fI fell in love with you
1 b2 Z" d" O9 G0 T& b* P2 R2 MAt the first week we met

You have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
" P# E4 n5 Z8 I! X- K# \As spotting sky at a summer night
2 ~; |( a$ l. h8 J- A9 G; F4 ^, LThey are shining stars
4 A# T7 p* M: o; D3 P$ F% b+ U9 t) c
Your lip is so big
' i0 r0 ]- F: F# MAnd that’s good for a kiss
: ?* ?/ L0 q5 c$ X- ^) e& xYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex

' Q6 h0 K- Q6 m6 d* {I was deeply in love
, [. G; l% R6 kEverything from you is positive
3 g* y9 x9 H. C( EYou blame me everything and everyday
& |: R  S6 S( X7 MAnd I think all girls sound like

' Q! a4 P) [5 P4 W1 V( N( HYou could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
) z# i0 F% r# _5 BI think you are perfectly right
+ a! J' I4 }0 fEating with sound is a pig

I fell in love with you
1 b. Y9 i! ^' wBecome a fool to think
+ X# y( D5 E1 ^All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
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; P+ k5 Q% ~0 [* A5 PYou slash my heart
and I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
  F9 D) Q: f+ TIf my heart can be fixed

[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
; g& a3 n9 Z. G! AFalling in love
5 V/ _. s  O5 J& s5 O2 H
I fell in love with you
: G- D' u1 I. Q  L+ hAt the first week we met
: |5 x. f6 w, C$ H2 X+ H- a
8 V5 z* ?: C* l4 e3 i! tYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
. f) H5 K) P* c1 ^$ QAs spotting sky at a summer night
' L3 t+ ?$ e# @$ w" D! YThey are shining stars
% k$ S2 u" i5 w/ F0 D& Z8 a
  b* F3 F0 V; y9 }Your lip is so big
) J8 K; U6 Z% ^9 Q2 UAnd that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
And that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
7 `1 N2 l8 x, V: @# ~You blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like

You could not stand my eating
& y/ E  U5 `4 w! CSaying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
Eating with sound is a pig

+ r2 Q* m5 k0 lI fell in love with you
6 E+ c  o% ^/ \4 i- ]9 f- rBecome a fool to think
All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
3 v# [1 g  U/ \3 W% D1 j4 |
: D( R) Y5 Z4 j1 x$ B; [1 @/ `you are deeply in love
Everything from me is negative
"My man should like this,
and I am helping you to improve'
0 ?3 c- A+ G! X- N- G( b9 X$ H
8 a3 ^- E4 k' ?# Y2 g5 sYou are loving me
or that one in your mind?
9 t6 B2 W9 f# e6 F" gMy mind is like a mud
can be shaped whatevery you want
2 N/ P& }, Y6 Y, u; q
unfortunalety not my heart
# O! t: `' }- O% Z0 O! JIt is slashed by you
and I am seriously hurt
) \# R4 _! I5 Y: d( PI will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
2 G2 F: Q! j% Z5 x/ P$ X/ m& j
4 y. A1 T9 x" s湿人啊....

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- b- w" L: R# t: ^* o你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
* y$ p3 V3 i# X2 z啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

0 ], b  D- E9 @; C) x! r) X
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# w+ W( r2 Q- W" Z" k该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表
$ y- Z5 @- d' E+ q

3 y" B% S1 M; {: `8 W
) J" m: t- k' X# `  O该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

# j- j7 F% @& [+ F' A' L+ I

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.

P.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
0 y0 Y. \! x- o* G6 M看的我毛骨耸然

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. L, }. e" N' C7 P! `0 ~2 [有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

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