锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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% y; R/ z1 N8 ^, I　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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& @; `- `* ]4 N2 ^; A: Z　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

* ^4 X2 Y4 w' D　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

" h# k4 n$ q5 B4 F　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

9 u9 ^- v. v! ?1 ^4 n. q9 Y! E3 @　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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4 j% ~0 Z1 ]! ]0 ?　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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9 T  m) L9 p& ~9 u　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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+ ?: ]" R1 x8 }' w　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

6 s3 b7 H1 @8 R: Q( j　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

. ~7 A# v6 g7 L0 ~$ K! z2 M0 X　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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. p! G5 g  N7 e( e6 v　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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( T; ]) |! H" [. H8 ]　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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: n  \% t5 {6 I2 I! t9 P　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

: H- F- x* ?. K' R　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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4 c& V+ c3 f  s7 c' E2 F2 |　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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  I" x, o2 Z6 P+ N* @. g0 g$ _# e: Z　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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* s" t; ?- ^3 h1 h4 `　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

1 C% o$ b; s4 v: [& _7 d& K( s  H　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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8 f+ x# ^6 p4 B: o3 N0 z& P1 ?　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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2 F* _3 a  S5 }& @2 S. d　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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) x( g; _* M$ b( k! p2 u6 O　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

- @7 \/ z7 i9 _" p* X　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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. e7 j; U! E% i3 N7 w# m$ K$ F' t　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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) @0 n+ o8 E4 _% G/ V　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

- ?$ A# G: H5 M' G5 P- `　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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/ [" ^. N+ ]) e/ q) v3 o　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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+ j8 n9 L5 I0 N　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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( ^" ]+ _( k( O6 j8 R　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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7 w. x! s" ]0 o* X) O: k2 D- {+ z　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

0 C' y5 |' x: N! g! y  e7 y1 P　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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( ^6 e  K+ B" ~/ `1 _/ Y5 C　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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4 u( g+ R% y' D" g. Q0 ]　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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. R/ N3 e1 R. }　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

; D6 ~6 p8 \& f( G$ p1 ^　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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1 e/ J. D: v; m5 f; M　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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' {( [4 _' O1 \- J3 r( l# [- g　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

4 k# ^& z+ \, x) \　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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- u/ ~! ^  x, ^, }( C) k　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

# w( A, D0 M1 Q5 S　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

; n6 q( z0 J* ]( L" r4 Y　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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% S0 a/ K1 g/ p% G) m　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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$ B9 j/ e6 j1 g$ W" _+ A- D! {9 z; c( _　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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5 O; _0 `/ {* ^+ R" x: Q0 U0 D　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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+ t5 a7 z% ~+ u3 |% a　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

5 m% h. ~7 q  Z2 F　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

, ^6 K8 Z3 ]- {$ y5 p! W& @　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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7 V+ _- A, ^8 f2 N6 w8 U4 e- w　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

' i+ {& \* i- v+ w　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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4 A8 \, o3 v  }" _$ M$ K　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

# @5 _4 m' V; i& H# Y& A　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

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2 y2 `7 @& ], O6 G! T% u6 w　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka