锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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% e& q  z3 k( K7 \3 v　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

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/ Z1 v, E: ~8 E! P$ o% p9 s$ Z　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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% {: G/ }! B- q" \( B　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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3 Q! z1 h3 z, g  _, c( [6 U　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

. O9 ]. R# A( y& n　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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8 n+ q; G# h2 |2 b- R% _9 D　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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; G1 G5 U9 q$ R" c8 x9 y　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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. z6 z$ v' R! |  g& g　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

% k3 C# S9 x& }: @' o7 D5 R　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

8 r9 D3 v4 f/ X* V; x  P( h　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

; Q5 F7 A( b1 w4 M" B　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

4 h2 Y6 X/ }5 Y9 t　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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; s3 w! H- i9 I! T+ m　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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+ J) x& s: p/ q5 Y" w" P　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

1 e, z# l6 U1 ]/ n  y　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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3 B7 U) d; ?3 l' K) q) u, N" C　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

( O8 W2 V4 g$ H9 \+ @　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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9 V1 g6 p- Y  T5 l! C5 m　　改进: They cannot think straight.

- |2 y2 |0 E* r) h/ x　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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. v, ^9 x0 r  ]5 a　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

+ [8 b7 _( _* q/ B) Q7 p　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

' m4 N- p: \" K  ]2 X; b　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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- ~$ U9 L* s- C2 y! `/ W　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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2 w0 {& p9 d3 q; X  Q　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

- `5 ^# C6 B* ]8 k. u　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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3 y+ U% j# {. d) a6 y　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

2 i" }# y5 Z& Z. Z" Z　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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" V8 Z0 g! v; h/ v& }　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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8 C# E9 ~6 T) r　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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, \' f' k/ q5 j' V　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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" E& H$ o5 W0 J( R" S3 c　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

8 e9 Y7 Q% G1 K! K& Z3 n　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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% L! S3 A# o$ e  I7 M　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

. R. v4 ^5 D: i9 \; L　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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1 G6 o# O) q- o9 ?8 D  o5 g　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

. b+ ~: @+ }; T$ l7 B: k- ~　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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. T8 b; B  U# P　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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  w3 f& x& v# f2 W/ Q　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

2 G+ ]3 c$ ?/ o% Y5 O　　改进: No one knows everything.

# U# g# Z3 i' e7 e& E2 L, ]　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

/ ?  [' _, N! X; N0 f) M7 B+ B% S9 [　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

4 {$ w7 D0 ?/ i　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  P/ p# i6 n/ N2 G; v) P& ^8 h5 [　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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4 H4 t% r4 y! {9 u; q　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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  f6 z) g* X% l3 W& b* ]　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

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! ?! O5 s( ]$ g/ s. }  I9 M; S4 m　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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2 f; |) I2 ^, E　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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/ c3 Z  ?2 S/ ~, c8 J& h9 v　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

: j8 B8 W/ y  ?7 u　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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& p% N! h/ L' x6 r　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

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* \! U4 k( \$ o; Z　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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1 @2 N7 |; |& G/ a) y　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.
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! W4 Y) m6 j( q* m  S# ?　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka