锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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/ X$ F: B+ H. B/ h　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

) H2 r' ^( U8 Z* O2 b1 x　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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1 {7 D, S. l& V5 X2 w: z0 G4 A　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

1 a/ P7 H6 z1 v　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

& n: J, h1 t3 d2 V　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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  p! R  V, [# [　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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' w3 ~7 I( A; f8 j& Z　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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, q' ?. `6 k, J9 U! Z! ^　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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. a- p, f7 ~  B7 x+ o　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

4 g% \) P4 U& F" Z4 U6 ?　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

- F1 V  W( Z# T% o( I- U9 B　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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1 a2 R% _4 `" }$ ~. \4 \( E1 @6 }　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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: r3 T5 N% l& G+ F　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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3 u; V! x3 o* N  r% b+ D　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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# Y  S. @) l+ \4 m- k; ?7 h: \4 g　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

( ^; h/ ?* l! M5 v! ]　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

9 N: z8 I, [& H& p　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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' h, m$ H6 N9 ~) Y4 e* ^) f5 V$ O　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

$ d7 M5 |) c3 k9 n8 \$ J5 l  F) H　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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$ Y/ X" A( R' V! ^. D. o　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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$ j& B3 A& A: u8 ^6 x. u　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

$ Y8 \6 S8 B. n0 I% G' ~0 r　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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( u; J/ w* U- O+ o# G6 \5 ^6 L　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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. b  b2 ^6 l9 y) K　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

4 W* O+ O  N5 w: i, k, {　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

7 v0 Z# v: D2 C4 H, o# s- X! G, K$ ?　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

, H0 F! B" h" Y. @4 q　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

' H% I# Z3 g$ y% N5 Q　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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% g" J: O. t" P( |/ K+ C( g+ S　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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4 W$ E( y' K% k) @  N) r　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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' m7 D* j3 \+ I3 u" n1 L　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

  R& g6 a  {# a9 u　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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5 ^" r- x& j( f- S" u+ c. V　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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' U  v: \4 f2 T& ~. G$ [) v　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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- u7 ]" ~' V. R　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

5 I; {$ ]" ]' _  i5 ~　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

. F& t' Z/ [0 @4 C+ B　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  h& ~% M' V6 R& Z/ k! B　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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+ k+ g/ o7 Z- q- ~: I- ^) r　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

, n& C3 O1 V# K　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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& V6 Q5 W0 d' q1 O7 `0 ^　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

$ \9 A# V. J0 p( u# K　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  w3 X6 q3 [4 ]) J* z6 m$ m" ]　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

/ v, y0 y% \# s( o3 Z7 ^　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

& y; V1 V3 e3 T　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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/ W- y) j9 i) {) E# j# h/ P9 L　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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' u9 o/ G3 q2 [+ V3 T( u8 G　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

- n7 y4 Z1 a% s　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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: _$ r5 o: ~0 y# L4 v% x　　50. I felt alone.
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, b; R9 J! M2 p7 T' Q: K: ~　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka