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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. - C$ W n2 i& T4 y9 t
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改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. ) R. O- \- ~& W$ N6 |. @
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2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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% e& q z3 k( K7 \3 v 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. - }+ U f7 P2 ~
9 }4 b$ k, D* g, m6 h( H$ n9 b 改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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/ Z1 v, E: ~8 E! P$ o% p9 s$ Z 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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% {: G/ }! B- q" \( B 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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3 Q! z1 h3 z, g _, c( [6 U 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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6. Their brain is still very young. ) R1 x a4 d @7 K
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改进: They are still immature. ) l- C6 Y: ]. S
. O9 ]. R# A( y& n 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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8 n+ q; G# h2 |2 b- R% _9 D 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. * F2 M- }$ G; h) c" z5 P) y/ S2 I
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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; G1 G5 U9 q$ R" c8 x9 y 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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. z6 z$ v' R! | g& g 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. , y/ A5 g% E0 Y R( x% \2 Y$ d
% k3 C# S9 x& }: @' o7 D5 R 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. . @3 f. L8 y. i4 y. w# C1 h I
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. . c& ?5 n8 x6 G! s8 ]* \0 }. u
8 r9 D3 v4 f/ X* V; x P( h 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. * u5 ^. B; B. [# n% r9 T: m/ b
; Q5 F7 A( b1 w4 M" B 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. - A5 @' G6 q) c& V
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 1 I S8 C8 ^: i6 u0 Y# v& V
4 h2 Y6 X/ }5 Y9 t 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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; s3 w! H- i9 I! T+ m 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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+ J) x& s: p/ q5 Y" w" P 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. ' a" f4 R# f5 X6 U/ P$ N, F b
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. 3 z3 x: F) s7 \8 n3 S& U E) g
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. * G# k q& f. G: q u( a8 Z; H
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 3 g7 f9 l8 P+ B4 {3 Y; ]6 o
1 e, z# l6 U1 ]/ n y 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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3 B7 U) d; ?3 l' K) q) u, N" C 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. 9 C( ~# p- d1 E! b7 [' T o
( O8 W2 V4 g$ H9 \+ @ 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. ' \" D5 q$ F; T, @! R
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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9 V1 g6 p- Y T5 l! C5 m 改进: They cannot think straight. 6 ] S) D. ` \ [$ }
- |2 y2 |0 E* r) h/ x 20. Money can improve their living standard.
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改进: Money can improve their life.
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. v, ^9 x0 r ]5 a 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 1 c4 m7 `' O7 w2 S3 u
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. ( `2 H9 A$ K6 x/ n
+ [8 b7 _( _* q/ B) Q7 p 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. + \, I7 ?1 Z4 M9 z) e1 r
' m4 N- p: \" K ]2 X; b 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. 4 S E. u! n! k0 I2 V$ `" q# n5 Q: k
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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- ~$ U9 L* s- C2 y! `/ W 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. - Q) G0 I( n2 Q( V3 R1 V
/ K4 F1 s. ?. z- q1 P5 W 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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2 w0 {& p9 d3 q; X Q 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. & ?! \8 M! k! G8 j5 F; U5 y8 d
- `5 ^# C6 B* ]8 k. u 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 0 O% j ?* g' e
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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3 y+ U% j# {. d) a6 y 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. , e4 l+ e( M6 b# p+ y | Y4 |: O
2 i" }# y5 Z& Z. Z" Z 28. What's about nonsmokers?
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" V8 Z0 g! v; h/ v& } 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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8 C# E9 ~6 T) r 29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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, \' f' k/ q5 j' V 改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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" E& H$ o5 W0 J( R" S3 c 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. + o6 z) k+ c& |1 ~/ f4 V8 W
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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31. I am not good at maths, but English ! ]3 S: G/ M2 ^; x6 u) J6 t3 E K
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 6 f4 o4 J4 i. J+ n4 x0 y
8 e9 Y7 Q% G1 K! K& Z3 n 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? 5 ` g' e! l) B! W1 }+ }
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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% L! S3 A# o$ e I7 M 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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1 G6 o# O) q- o9 ?8 D o5 g 改进: I agree with the latter idea. ' l* ~# P& D7 y4 W( A
. b+ ~: @+ }; T$ l7 B: k- ~ 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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* V- {, y- X/ |# y 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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. T8 b; B U# P 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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w3 f& x& v# f2 W/ Q 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 6 D" U, ?6 w1 y& j5 I# @
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38. No one knows all the things. & |% Q% ~# D. o( ?2 _
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# U# g# Z3 i' e7 e& E2 L, ] 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. 6 d1 r5 D/ C8 A, r5 d4 a. x
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 4 z; ], w, X. L( |6 W x& w
/ ? [' _, N! X; N0 f) M7 B+ B% S9 [ 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages , E. {2 S6 ?' d( v! I7 K
4 {$ w7 D0 ?/ i 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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P/ p# i6 n/ N2 G; v) P& ^8 h5 [ 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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4 H4 t% r4 y! {9 u; q 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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f6 z) g* X% l3 W& b* ] 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. - I" Q9 r" T3 z( q
( s3 [3 A9 g. ]. T& D7 ] 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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! ?! O5 s( ]$ g/ s. } I9 M; S4 m 43. They will learn the bad habits.
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改进: They will develop bad habits.
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2 f; |) I2 ^, E 44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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$ O& Z k- f9 o8 {3 f9 ]3 c- ?5 k 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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/ c3 Z ?2 S/ ~, c8 J& h9 v 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. $ y6 A" @% m# C
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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& p% N! h/ L' x6 r 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. . l4 d! }# \6 _8 L" C+ M- S4 K
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* \! U4 k( \$ o; Z 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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1 @2 N7 |; |& G/ a) y 改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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50. I felt alone.
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