锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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6 [2 D  P# R! i, H* g　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

9 O& j- Q) `9 R# k! I$ T$ r　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

5 z: C2 F* t9 p9 [" E" l/ S　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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/ f& Z. h( M- ?& W; b* z6 r1 t　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

' m( p9 S. Z2 s3 ^! u　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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4 u2 m( J7 b. \/ J8 j　　改进: They are still immature.
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) {8 x8 f& o7 y, J- t$ b　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

$ N! G2 R9 k' J5 q( ~& ?　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

% {$ Y. M4 Z$ ^0 v/ g　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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# l* u- B+ p. g) @. n" Y/ M# j　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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! g* ?5 ]6 q6 B% a1 T　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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+ U' Y7 Z" h. A5 E  Q7 ~　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

( d) O6 a# Z) F7 w5 D0 C1 q( H　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

  {% s- i. Q. z2 Y　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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! G+ W9 U! Z, S" h8 b6 `4 r　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

, V: t! i# y& @6 q, b9 K　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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6 g( S; R0 _) G　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

/ r% C% }1 _1 n- X; d0 n0 P　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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1 `7 j% n+ r4 `　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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) T, Z9 R1 S  X　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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$ p& I( [4 y0 f3 c6 g　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

( g; Y% }: b6 n2 ^: w. X9 s3 K% @　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

0 v& L2 ?8 h1 l　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

; L' x* \0 s4 k: {4 j3 C　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

3 I( |' T1 L  u" J　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

7 a' V$ ~* O% v3 Q9 a/ F, Q, W　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

7 T) F* g! J5 t/ }& c' A* [5 V. K0 d　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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' V4 z+ i2 E/ l: k2 F! ]　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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/ ~( V& }3 w0 r9 n8 |　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

0 `, `) R) l. y' k- ^) T# P( P　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

# K; g* t2 K% N7 [3 `5 w& ]+ p　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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( K) D0 E/ G+ ~4 b4 z　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

% Y2 X& V5 w6 f1 Y! L　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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3 u# H+ e" f3 E6 y　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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& E  B- A3 k7 C+ _# K　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

" s) f) V2 ~, E4 v" X2 }　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

6 n* l' @1 c" P8 K" A! Y　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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3 H6 S% u0 g, \; y' e$ Z) v* y/ n　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

  ]0 s6 ]4 o( x5 d  Z' }　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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$ ?! _. [2 q! s) |  g( r. z8 P　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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1 O# {1 M9 R  W( h- ?# Y9 }　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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" H1 a) W! h1 T' ]- W　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

+ G+ Q  r9 ~# k; I8 O- J- `! s　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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* D; n) U. u9 ]' d' u0 e* x- y# V　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

5 G/ }) N; ]1 e3 P　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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9 B- _& o0 N, z, O) I/ j* ~　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

3 i. W* j, ]% ~. c　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

+ R8 O4 h0 h7 x- a/ F　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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- r2 T" l3 X3 E* O3 v　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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) s2 c" N4 w7 z$ H1 Y2 [7 a  P% c　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

2 L4 _5 O( v" ?( c4 `$ Y2 f+ Z　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka