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发表于 2005-2-24 07:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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/ X$ F: B+ H. B/ h  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. & c( Y9 h0 Z" i* A7 h. V

) H2 r' ^( U8 Z* O2 b1 x  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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1 {7 D, S. l& V5 X2 w: z0 G4 A  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. * m8 P; U3 d9 @+ J

1 a/ P7 H6 z1 v  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. + v4 K6 f- H& @: d/ H

& n: J, h1 t3 d2 V  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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  p! R  V, [# [  6. Their brain is still very young.
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' w3 ~7 I( A; f8 j& Z  改进: They are still immature. * W; C! P( i# {5 T8 ?8 M4 ~
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  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 4 {2 _: o  B% Y) ]" \0 \
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  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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, q' ?. `6 k, J9 U! Z! ^  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 8 o/ ?$ o9 ^9 _% O2 Y% N' ^( h
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  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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. a- p, f7 ~  B7 x+ o  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 2 _$ ?# a: [6 j; [* d( T
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  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 7 E. p7 s9 U: q/ D+ @& O
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  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 4 _; {4 W' P( T: M) j# A
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  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. / l% g5 I1 ^2 Z1 x4 k, X. @

4 g% \) P4 U& F" Z4 U6 ?  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. + e& l* ~  M3 r( P

- F1 V  W( Z# T% o( I- U9 B  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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1 a2 R% _4 `" }$ ~. \4 \( E1 @6 }  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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: r3 T5 N% l& G+ F  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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3 u; V! x3 o* N  r% b+ D  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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# Y  S. @) l+ \4 m- k; ?7 h: \4 g  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 1 c% h6 Y  C7 X9 c
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  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. / R0 _/ L3 Y) _; x1 L5 a- ~5 N5 M

( ^; h/ ?* l! M5 v! ]  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. ! \% l; D& f0 J

9 N: z8 I, [& H& p  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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' h, m$ H6 N9 ~) Y4 e* ^) f5 V$ O  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.   i7 T0 [! t% |- E. Q* L; i

$ d7 M5 |) c3 k9 n8 \$ J5 l  F) H  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. % @7 ]3 B( v, B  v" v+ I
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  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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$ Y/ X" A( R' V! ^. D. o  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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$ j& B3 A& A: u8 ^6 x. u  19. They cannot think clearly. 6 ^, P5 ?& o/ a7 u, l! `0 W1 M
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  改进: They cannot think straight. 4 q* L; i5 h, T4 E8 N" o  f

$ Y8 \6 S8 B. n0 I% G' ~0 r  20. Money can improve their living standard. / ], F" k* {1 p5 g6 _' x
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  改进: Money can improve their life.
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( u; J/ w* U- O+ o# G6 \5 ^6 L  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. % A( O' T3 Y- R
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  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. ) @! m* T! k' ]. z# q
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  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. 1 S- t5 t* y- e, ^- ?; @$ F! r" T
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. 3 N) e- [- D* k+ |; ?

4 W* O+ O  N5 w: i, k, {  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. % \0 u! k9 t1 `1 x& p9 [% L6 l# v

7 v0 Z# v: D2 C4 H, o# s- X! G, K$ ?  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. . ]" m2 [  |( I5 H' A5 B2 G. Z9 `+ s# H
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  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. ' l- F5 Z( o: b' v2 O( p6 \: ^

, H0 F! B" h" Y. @4 q  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 8 M1 W, g, o' d7 s1 J

' H% I# Z3 g$ y% N5 Q  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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% g" J: O. t" P( |/ K+ C( g+ S  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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4 W$ E( y' K% k) @  N) r  28. What's about nonsmokers?
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  改进: What about nonsmokers?
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' m7 D* j3 \+ I3 u" n1 L  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 6 C; l) d! m  P! h

  R& g6 a  {# a9 u  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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5 ^" r- x& j( f- S" u+ c. V  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. 0 j7 Y4 z) r# \6 k3 d
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English , U' d9 K9 F( k. W
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  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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' U  v: \4 f2 T& ~. G$ [) v  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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- u7 ]" ~' V. R  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? * N- K0 V- ]% F6 N/ {

5 I; {$ ]" ]' _  i5 ~  33.It is children who clear about their interests. 5 N5 ]$ d$ F, d1 Q4 e" Y
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  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. ; l6 b0 {! S' w0 ~

. F& t' Z/ [0 @4 C+ B  34. I agree the latter idea.
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  改进: I agree with the latter idea. # L- p! c; _- Z1 |6 u' N' c

  h& ~% M' V6 R& Z/ k! B  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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+ k+ g/ o7 Z- q- ~: I- ^) r  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. / n& E4 d$ j3 ~; W; G9 k

, n& C3 O1 V# K  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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& V6 Q5 W0 d' q1 O7 `0 ^  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.   O5 ^6 T" j: R
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  38. No one knows all the things. / e5 @* a" ~& z4 W4 w

$ \9 A# V. J0 p( u# K  改进: No one knows everything.
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  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. 3 l. C! r/ a7 h  E

  w3 X6 q3 [4 ]) J* z6 m$ m" ]  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 8 w$ ]; x! \4 Z) Z5 ]* o
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages % k4 C$ [! v. G

& x2 t3 I. ^" Z3 \1 `! U  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply # N& G1 o/ h2 c- `8 t, E; M

/ v, y0 y% \# s( o3 Z7 ^  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. - M- E  F9 t# L# {' R" z* n; V/ D; _
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& y; V1 V3 e3 T  43. They will learn the bad habits.
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  改进: They will develop bad habits.
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress. 7 ^6 ^1 O8 j2 G; l
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  改进: In this cycle, people make progress. : R+ n. K- I9 g$ i' z" f9 x
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  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 7 ^  P9 Q  V8 q+ J5 c% W  |# _
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  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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/ W- y) j9 i) {) E# j# h/ P9 L  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. # H' P' s6 p( R$ A0 k# |
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  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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' u9 o/ G3 q2 [+ V3 T( u8 G  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. % A$ P& v6 p8 I9 Z8 u& _

- n7 y4 Z1 a% s  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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: _$ r5 o: ~0 y# L4 v% x  50. I felt alone.
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, b; R9 J! M2 p7 T' Q: K: ~  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good. 6 V0 ~/ _& d" c. B* J6 _) {9 N
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Thanks
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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发表于 2005-8-24 21:11 | 显示全部楼层
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