锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

1 i( b7 g2 \" [1 l4 w( I" b　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

/ m7 y( I6 P: _0 ?# r　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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' U1 \& i' u$ F- p* a4 p5 y, o# \　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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/ _2 i# s# ?: E8 h# }　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

- ]8 R% ]; k0 S  T" v: z$ `　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

  a) `3 E: |; h6 L　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

/ o( w, |) K( h' `+ ?5 E: R5 m4 i　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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9 q2 G( K. y) M* t$ ^, C  R　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

# W+ x8 }- y& T( p) B# q8 ], ~　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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7 ~9 l! C( j. h% w$ J$ g　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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- S9 F# k/ G2 t7 [( }* n6 y　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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7 P: m3 M* L# D+ {, o# I　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

5 @# L9 d  H: u9 p2 I　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

' e* D* S3 u, j5 ]$ x　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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5 u9 C6 b) R$ f! G　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

8 ]' q4 A* _  y+ z6 R- v　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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6 X# J- L' \8 L　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

% P: j, p9 v  u8 l, _  f　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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4 ?1 w: _, c. d2 r; M% e　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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! v4 M! o3 M( |. K# `　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

# J0 r" S' y: ~) z　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

+ d5 W: u1 y% ^. R" w& k3 I　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

$ {1 k8 C4 N6 ?( I　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

0 z+ M$ o5 Y3 G; p* s! ?) z　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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- _1 Z: `$ Y% G% N　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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/ N6 Z' m. R' y, G　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

! B  N/ s6 P) E7 _5 W- y4 L9 [　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

- t: R* g4 i: G1 E: V( D　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

4 C7 i  i3 u2 T3 W$ l　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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! n/ j2 l) b2 @$ c. D　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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9 ~4 U, U- w; p3 [　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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' R; d7 V$ M' G, F; P+ U3 K/ ]( S　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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8 N8 Z6 [- }" q' \% p1 O. {　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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5 z! \9 q. d% g# Y4 B　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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, v. v1 I5 r) i! ^1 H　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

6 L' V1 V( ~+ F　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

. k% V1 M) V/ v0 ^8 U　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

4 n* c- S9 S+ J! K9 f$ G8 W7 [　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

0 p% R- H) a3 N1 u/ k+ ?) O　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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4 u, j2 Z& {/ x$ J/ Z' Z/ }　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

, n2 y; J1 B- g/ S- N/ R$ T　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

3 \5 r9 j0 [$ Q5 ?. H  s. k　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

) k( D0 s- K' V4 t: R" N/ e　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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1 H! C5 ^2 R' V6 w# w4 n　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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  w5 ^" c* ~; S/ Y+ m% d6 ~　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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" c. P& D8 o* P  o　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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7 f6 A2 Q( H0 e  e1 T　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

& F9 E6 s* D. c. DThanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka