锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

5 T+ h. k2 b- ?; {1 Z# N　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

! U" O: i$ E& \, O　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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5 s5 b$ |3 j$ v' }; v. Y) N　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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. j5 \$ Z7 T# E( X! x3 X0 B　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

* h4 `$ v2 l+ n: k5 k　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

. _6 M) K1 S' y9 R) j( e. T　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

& @7 M' g  K- T9 X　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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2 G0 b8 ^& ~7 u& l　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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% }3 v& W9 U$ V6 {　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

, W; H( i" v9 h, f4 h　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

  }# K- ?; |6 _( ~　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

7 Q: \5 }+ Y; S6 J　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

8 d6 I; @( C5 z5 W4 A  d　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

( h# x  d0 \2 k0 N2 J" e　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

1 F6 q) w7 `5 A- w& H0 c" U　　改进: Money can improve their life.

( F# E9 K( v% ~% I# c" u　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

% |2 d8 r  v* ~" e8 ?; Y" F　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

. u# [0 ]2 ]; E; `7 _# k1 E: ?　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

9 B$ _3 Z4 x' q% D　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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' i& ~' \# ?: {- n0 V/ {. x+ h　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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# F8 Z, N! T# I4 E: c1 ~　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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' s% \9 U4 h0 b$ c　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

# S* B" |: x% B$ |4 h& u　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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" O8 J" S1 V: z& B3 }　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

8 [# g' a7 ?( V. t5 ^　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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9 Q5 p1 f5 ?7 l* ]  H　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

: ]+ [7 I0 Q- I6 N8 b- T. ]　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

5 I4 E3 S* Z5 |( n$ T4 s. h; ^　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

" [$ f* Y6 K% p  k" K: X( K, N% K　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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7 U) T; A6 L- b: j　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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* y! }" n* H* f　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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  B4 ?. V; D; d# }　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

8 g! V  ~, x1 c# G* p　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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# a- ?2 U' V) m! O  C' i- r  `( U　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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/ F! d) j. B$ ~/ e" J1 p" u# ^8 W　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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0 Y( [+ l  i9 D; a6 j　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

. R) n4 X6 h! y$ G& |' Y4 u* `　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka