锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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/ Q7 b& b% n) x* Q　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

9 c5 {$ p' {- k　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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5 j0 X& ]7 p! [" `$ m! j' W- i% Q　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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* S2 S' G& O6 l% i, H% ]　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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) D! e/ x* E7 {: W　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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* A5 l& o! _: v9 O$ f& T  ?5 I5 [　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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* n: f1 M+ Z$ e$ m; c* [　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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5 X3 z% t$ T, ?- E　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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7 ^+ h: K$ G! {& Z. o　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

( {; v- g, U1 z　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

' l3 D$ i- n5 L/ z' C　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

1 U: e0 _# [: O7 A　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

' C5 P) A* n1 T; o9 x  W6 }　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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; h6 u" |$ |, ~  w　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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' [- _: X( E6 v7 o' O1 \- C　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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. D& ^2 M6 E( ]4 m+ [1 c5 \　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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+ Y4 g2 d6 r0 [/ O5 R　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

8 h$ {3 j. J6 Q% X5 X) |' }　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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* ^( \0 H; |. T# s! Q8 c4 v　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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9 n4 d) ^. z& Q7 n) D　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

8 \$ `( ?" i; S! V- Q  r) S( F　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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% ~$ u% b4 i6 [3 f　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

. k3 F. x2 W1 M  t0 f6 H　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

5 \) }$ c# A. `. z0 r$ e　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

7 o: D; P" T9 s+ I1 m7 R　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

0 j5 W9 y. M1 u0 {) ^6 w8 O7 t　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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- ~% c8 b* Y4 T  V# q　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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4 D" u( q! ^3 v. g5 U* a, n　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

( ?0 @8 e  x/ Q  x2 N, R　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

3 R5 L2 F2 e6 _4 d' M/ _　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

3 }1 V( N7 Q; y1 p　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

8 g+ a. L# t. L6 J" K( p　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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( M5 u  n0 U2 _　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

' ?! H0 f) H' S- c  Q3 S4 d# V　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka