TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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" y' U6 u) P, P  N: `- W$ C' M(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
2 n/ @0 J+ u0 i* j: ^# |, a, pThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
" O7 m5 \8 Q& M& W) ~/ w) IWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
" F' B* b* V; yA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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: {4 Q8 V; ^0 e$ y2 }0 gTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
; v6 A: q% w6 k# A7 A+ e. P) ^For A, A 的一个优势
+ `8 X$ |' J0 m: [+ A% \Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- @( c/ l% {& son the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
' w1 a  W5 G3 B' y/ Amoreover, B的优点2,for example…
6 e: l* V6 d' x0 ?5 E$ T3 mFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
' p' D4 j+ Q% E% @6 J3 R" kAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
1 N4 [& |% N% QFinally,…
6 H: d* j3 M; S) g9 V( _Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 Z: ]- L& U' m* u9 J  t(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
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What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  U6 u+ d( \# j" x- e# Y: c8 dA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
5 J% f% \8 I  T; DWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1 F. v) S2 r; Y(四)原因解释型
" i* T* i- W- j* \! c& B9 q  r5 K0 x1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
1 U7 K( J  Z( F2 b+ ^" J( U, E& }One of the primary causes is that…
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… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
  M" I$ f8 i4 s- p* P5 R% xThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
5 |1 w: {9 B& u$ u0 n/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) k) W) c9 u, [' S# ^3 m/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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$ L1 z( f* Q5 v; A9 F) qa more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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3 n8 e8 L8 }: k6 M) g$ gIn addition/ furthermore
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" W7 B& Y- e! I. r" Z# nIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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