TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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6 K* q# `; H4 m' @) t! f+ ~& W: R0 @(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)




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- ?4 c7 v: K8 ]5 A: f4 K(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
8 I+ L  I# y/ n5 t# ?& u3 E6 l' }The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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. Y7 R* \1 I- R5 w; U3 k+ M2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



$ q  H) _, L; G; n5 J. H7 ~$ oTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
. U5 e! \/ w) b) Xon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
; Y# u0 i; @3 i% I- B$ f9 j1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
- s. d3 H$ f' u% b9 i9 J& `' e- H- fAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ y( h6 Z9 z8 p& oFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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" l8 v: z7 v& B, o3 k(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
2 n# @( [: l' n1 m$ \. p+ gThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
! A. \$ n5 q1 P) x0 E3 I# }. Q  zIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
1 f9 T1 s# C6 N& J+ v$ {When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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0 q3 A* S' R* M( c: Q陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
, x2 e' H1 U* ^! P7 N" GOne of the primary causes is that…
, f9 d% W. \. I9 u* O) q" }) O3 NXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
1 r) m- Q; }9 A; d0 @& yTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
* ]0 k4 _0 d' \9 M7 q2 H: QThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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) F6 I6 A; T8 xOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( f4 h! R4 h, h' a6 U2 b5 U/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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; ~9 L+ U. B% m- t& L3 q2 ta more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore

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! J  ?( ^' A# sIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

1 D. d5 F, Z, e, ^9 q- e. C[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]