TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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$ I* n" R8 d* K: A, y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ Q+ K# N$ C' t( qIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
2 q, ^, ~4 D- O% HFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



# P. Q' g' q/ y6 ~; T- Y# D, nTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 G9 ?8 i% x) Y, }6 Z- Y/ }Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
( X5 B. S& h* Y/ i1 F/ d$ W* h* yAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
# l  n+ S1 V1 pAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
! c9 t: P  d0 rFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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* P: A% G5 x1 l) J3 G/ @. J- _& f0 i7 R(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
' K6 ?7 J2 k2 }; m4 @$ mThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
" [9 B: n' e+ @8 v: f" a4 {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 R8 w* F+ C3 C$ n; u$ V5 C- O2 fFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
: Q1 z% q3 J- E1 ~3 |) XWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
- }! ]+ r5 T7 O, pThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
$ t6 o' P5 J/ lWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 q) j9 Y3 o1 K3 dC is superior in another way, this is…
9 E, @$ I" i8 C" LFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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6 S4 J, C7 v/ R- a(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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7 s  k5 u) V$ b" `1 f1 P: F1 a2 m陈述这个事实
; B' g7 i9 Z& m2 eAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
" v* g  E4 D$ @. n3 }( ]. P4 g& ^# T# l, OTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( B! q7 ]$ c, q( f9 \4 U/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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5 P4 J" J. I& x- [) D  ^8 ]In addition/ furthermore
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& J! Q8 F- x0 u/ a! {6 sIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

' D5 L0 O, U7 q# r[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]