TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
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0 E! W) [( f4 _; n" N2 _(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
! n* p& C" A1 ]2 y( D4 v) l8 ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
( V; T* ?' s' a) a6 G7 B8 KFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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For A, A 的一个优势
* O0 {3 k* k3 J) Y1 T- YWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
* \2 S* b$ f2 \! l+ Y, E' G5 K1 w0 uFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
/ x' q1 b  w5 q$ Y% T7 xon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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) |# x+ L# n9 d/ p+ E8 N/ ~! `(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
) X4 O; u, d2 X3 F9 h/ _  `Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



' f( n0 ~' u1 V$ \/ L, \  F２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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/ N1 C& b: u7 E(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
$ {9 T9 c1 Q$ E" W6 @What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
& i# ~# ?1 w- \' j# }% UIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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- i: _) g& D  bThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
5 k' u) A+ S. fWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
+ s2 s5 B$ K0 `/ L" UFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




, P& B) o5 v/ \( {! Q  @(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
& K, S: m' k5 N7 l# n' GOne of the primary causes is that…
, ^3 [! g9 m, yXXX also results from…
6 J4 G7 d- V4 R3 |… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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, D" Z& G6 ^- a1 Q1 V2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
* x7 E; D6 ]; H+ g& P- HThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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: M7 ~/ R3 b4 u3 ?8 @  c1 h' gOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
  t' g! ?, ^9 K/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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% J0 I+ X: ]5 S. t4 G3 a, pIn addition/ furthermore
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! J' o0 U! ?; E0 x8 ]In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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* N) r2 N3 P) L0 K$ a8 F[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]