TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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TWE作文模板汇粹
# v$ I7 g* M) e: Z$ }5 N(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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/ @) J; N$ Y6 W$ K1 a(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
( }- j  R# a0 @4 {4 y& z1 A' v, Q5 dThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
- Y+ ]: k4 I" b7 m1 Q, y' t, JWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
/ Z5 [4 n: q8 b) Y9 PA is superior in another way, this is…
4 j! ~$ U5 g( a& f$ |It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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- o/ Q, W/ v, t% ~1 o2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
6 X7 g) J) I8 m( fFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
: }6 L( e# Q9 ~) {on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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7 r1 E. x; F$ W. m3 G3 s4 b(二)单一观点式
7 q% ~" X- U5 v$ N1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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/ y+ C2 Y! J$ l0 Q3 N4 K首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
0 f* B  D# _0 f; z) O6 ~' KAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
9 K) p) w& X- t0 j$ @; e3 {There is no denying that…
4 V: m/ e% ]. V1 HAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ _( w/ g# \* bFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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  \1 V8 a' k- Y/ c! O( F' |3 }% G5 E(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
, s. y9 t8 h, E  n7 iThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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1 e9 j- T( b. r# |; {+ hA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% P4 P* j& r6 ?3 x) R) kFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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% b% m0 G4 y' w; |4 l8 Z( EThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
) R" v- k* O$ lWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
8 T7 D1 U$ E  ^* ]: z& aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 n5 y2 R9 S; @/ N# G' o1 s" j& x, @0 gC is superior in another way, this is…
# S6 g; o5 Y- r/ ^  V! JFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
- c8 f9 F" p' I( q4 ]+ i0 z: }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
+ M' ]; _( F: L0 r5 n7 }3 B(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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* X7 [6 j: D) f# m" u陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
2 W& o4 N! H$ uXXX also results from…
( y. A2 U, Q' U( w+ D  b$ S… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
5 D3 E5 p4 ]( H. @* f2 t$ ^% P8 NThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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0 c  P% k7 R5 \5 [8 G) H  m8 sOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 m0 I- x; n8 y9 B. ~4 {/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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1 M, t( r( w) a# |( [9 e6 r7 t0 _a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]