TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
! W7 F6 @& G# x& L! o3 j3 z( f(一) 对立观点式
9 L, P! r$ j) s! e/ E1 n! M/ L1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
" p. B& w5 K* i, G' B4 vA is superior in another way, this is…
# s2 d4 U0 Z7 qIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
6 N/ K9 a0 U: W9 t$ T+ xFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.




(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 `- ?8 W* |, B" ^首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
/ B. }# ]8 C8 W8 l3 V# P% @$ bAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
* b/ m+ Q, N7 y+ nThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
; V" E2 X( z1 N% N; K8 O, hBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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) k) {7 B% U0 X8 Z1 d. h２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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8 T0 g6 T4 {* R  k' N$ y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
6 ~' P+ m; U/ W9 E8 Y, D! VThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 a3 l6 D6 O" a# q- o# g5 r  PWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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0 D' B6 G+ K7 Z7 w- J, y/ EIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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4 J7 s% \) R: C$ \/ b, U; j(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 s0 ]2 a- V. P* _" H7 hC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
( e) }2 G" ~/ K. l' @6 ?4 N1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
9 |5 o( B8 P2 c, p9 [8 SAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
4 W" t+ ]0 Y9 ]* S7 n$ a( BOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
1 ]+ D8 j9 k, I+ V5 c) @… is responsible for xxx, as well.
1 u  b' I* {2 WTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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* ?  Z& J, R$ s) T& ^! \9 ]6 wOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



$ y% z: X" ~! R2 ja more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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" l5 D; D( r" j5 _! V' a) E' EIn addition/ furthermore
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0 f5 [# X5 ^4 p- v3 j1 |! y- ?7 a5 F! _In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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1 n3 `* r3 i/ \  [再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]