TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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TWE作文模板汇粹
: q2 V" ~2 I" [  n. j(一) 对立观点式
. m& ]7 t- ~3 \8 u' l. P% k' t4 \" R3 P1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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5 w( o6 [' @4 K5 _: X8 f1 ~" Y* UTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
  K6 M" _$ G& g2 h0 CFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
: K# ?" _+ ?% j8 sFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
/ w* {% y2 j$ _2 F8 V$ A  u/ y0 YFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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; ?, K$ z# ^  V0 W% Z9 b(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
5 _* _# s) n/ N; z0 x* M# Y' mAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
- Q+ Z- X, s# Q5 E! h8 SFinally,…
. A2 h5 r; x0 _, ]Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



; j7 j1 \9 R( f5 V２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 ?! P1 ]/ O3 Z6 ^- ^(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 O$ h) r1 K6 n- aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
( N( M! K5 f8 FA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. a( j* e2 y  z% r& X2 nFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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5 |8 J, u' T0 _) G& W) y(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
5 ~) ~6 r6 {  b& R* ^$ }8 sWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
3 I+ g/ b) Y! d7 NThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
5 i3 X3 ~9 Q4 q. |4 pWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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4 R* z! L2 B# }, Y/ [(四)原因解释型
6 q- I0 A: f" X7 Y! b1 ?* \7 K1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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  I) i5 a$ Z2 u' a: l陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
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To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



/ p0 E, J2 O* D' ~2 k% R2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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' u9 Y" E5 l) jThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



+ w+ E( P  j; T$ E8 eOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore


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8 v) w, J& [$ k9 H) X" Q8 P) oIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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