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I just wrote a poem: Y, Q2 [) l: R$ E' p% Z$ M
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! g: ~6 r) n+ ?, m: F
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
! _/ v' ~$ I8 J+ u Y9 q- D/ M) IThanks a lot!!!. h2 n7 ~8 ~( L' Y
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0 ~- C' V+ x% U. V3 `0 mFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
; G$ d& {' ?' N; p" |" g Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
/ C! g1 V+ [, a# ?. S Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 8 @% T7 ^) e+ i( Z$ c0 _. D0 @: G$ N
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me " s/ B1 e+ z5 O8 e* ~
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
8 e* E' I/ k( n* u% E Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
- ]$ _) G* e0 T1 k7 r; I% t: w$ }However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
; o' Z" }) z& E) @ somehow I realized you were still in my heart 3 H+ A$ L* q, i. Y5 \* y: X
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
8 |) E; P) ^2 Q* ]; N, Z) { somehow I lost myself inside again - N% A; P9 u4 V1 b1 \
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' }; u- t" v Y5 [: j, _& | somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
9 h* f2 e3 S4 G3 u8 ~# fFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 ] g. }# o9 u, t5 s' ~) Q/ OBasically, I almost finish this poem3 | b5 g9 f$ ]2 h) ?
I am 一个人de精彩
" }. F$ Y. v$ z5 H3 ? I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.# t, b- {% C+ w" y
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
