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I just wrote a poem
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6 @! q9 t+ R( P# JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
7 c8 `/ U3 q. F" |% x5 X4 KThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 q% \5 c$ u' ?2 ~2 D: _% Y& I Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . k; ?6 c- R8 _
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
2 f# X" z2 g I I- [1 P Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & G0 l9 L9 P0 ?2 @) D7 o
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
) A1 \% D1 C! j! E' S2 l Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
( C; q0 W6 v5 P0 C, q2 B; k! F$ aHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
' U$ }& @# l: c+ b somehow I realized you were still in my heart
+ v( N- N4 K( I( ^2 p somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness9 r& V0 o) ^/ h0 o3 ^3 e# U
somehow I lost myself inside again , d8 s) i# H* u( t
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 3 o9 Q$ H5 C) C O1 P1 w
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
0 D v% E9 n+ [5 U+ f" iFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, f3 j9 k$ W' w1 i! f% N
Basically, I almost finish this poem: a* X1 X+ o2 c7 p
I am 一个人de精彩
+ N. B8 j( h& ^" ]" W I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
9 o' }! Y8 y# Z* h/ CBut........
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