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I just wrote a poem6 |) Y J! |; T% v
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
# r7 g, s3 Z# w; F/ Z; yHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
* T' N; K" P8 N7 x! I7 m1 iThanks a lot!!!
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6 s' p0 B: I& y& ^Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
' \. K; {, W7 i. g0 G- R- x; O8 ^5 u Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ) z' a, ]' V5 O: R/ p+ ?
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
5 G# c, U/ o/ B Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 s' c9 z) ?5 r
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
# H1 \6 M4 {' H1 ^ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
% ?/ ?) `: _8 E- T& z9 tHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 1 }+ n+ ]% n( Z2 k! U6 v8 b2 e8 J
somehow I realized you were still in my heart * h: K1 |: \: [( ?; L. v2 q) m
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness; _+ n1 _2 R: h. A
somehow I lost myself inside again + ?% m, S0 f( N( a
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
4 i. ^* b; q+ v0 J6 H3 A M somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 \6 E5 ]4 W" |! }5 \( ?: HFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
& M9 N q9 E2 w4 p3 i3 o9 w q/ ?Basically, I almost finish this poem
`8 P+ N1 K0 G. ~. W I am 一个人de精彩
, _8 _: w1 I9 R) { I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* }+ |1 _/ Z2 }1 j
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
