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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

8 v' a2 }6 n$ j" b& xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

- S( |. k; m# f/ a" r3 e on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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2 v& \, g  d- R9 ]) \, d! xfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.

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  S) E; _+ ]5 lAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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& S0 j* \# l9 S6 ?. P7 ^: ? never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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  L5 w3 T+ p" l- T7 q/ m/ |- g[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！