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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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7 ~: i5 k5 A9 m; [: U     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to  h, s" ^. }' Y2 }0 r, M: q

8 z* V7 T' X5 g/ B: fput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my/ o2 Z  O" T0 x- t' R  {' \
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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$ M$ F( x% C  n# T+ w every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely ' _; n$ X2 q8 g/ g, Y% t
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ' f; v! u5 C; f6 D' @+ H) L. v
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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' f* h( C5 g  @6 M' ]5 H on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard - g7 C6 c+ w2 p& E6 r# @

  _+ K  A; k7 N9 q% X0 s! J$ Zfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.% F5 O3 }+ [. h7 a- D; o: q
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# g+ W; }8 o3 [" z" I  }8 N( F1 WAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.. G1 n; g1 D' o* C* T0 P8 y4 f5 N+ ~4 R

8 E. V% `7 V7 c! I, ^% \6 r[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!+ w) c; ?  t; `/ q# T" c
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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