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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)) G- \; O% T  T% y$ t
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     One day I always remember1 c7 z; F2 J9 `
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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% @3 `# a, E& ^# D# T6 J9 vput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my2 b8 l2 a- _: F, a8 `) N

  ?( x% o, p: T* N little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,7 p5 `& v) S) w4 T9 t! {) @6 G

  X+ w& T8 z) q  Q: N7 E$ e& m every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid7 T2 ?! S5 H3 M

5 ^& v. T4 `) q% K( N! W was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 9 n, b- C  p' Y6 q* X9 t& c

; V/ |) @% t2 [5 |: L5 Ftrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 1 D' x2 g8 k7 s, \8 B5 c# ]

! g/ ]7 |: ?" y" Dthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing8 d" F/ x0 x9 d' _+ ?
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 1 b0 k- r7 P6 }( F
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deaest daughter., I/ K6 R4 b" x
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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/ U2 h: @7 m7 G[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
( D$ L. V5 d5 A' Lwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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