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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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% u' x+ m/ B; H) u+ f2 t% ^8 y( W8 v% u  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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7 u9 r, m1 ^6 p' ]9 e$ ]exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 v2 ^! W: p+ G: F: G. ?6 X, W- ]
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely / X" F/ V3 |6 n4 n8 K, C: }
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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% h4 T3 q$ P1 x# }that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing( P7 ?8 m+ [! _3 B

+ P* x4 M7 k1 b; g/ T. y. R on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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: ^! a+ X; \- y/ S* N; f  F8 mfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my " G8 z6 L/ [" G! y6 H  s3 A! r
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will5 ~, C) i1 j% q' V: ~
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.! ?+ E0 E0 J( s, e

" |9 V) [, s8 t- z7 U[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
  i; U- ~* h( T; J& S, R. Mwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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