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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一); K  v5 b( O. c1 t- M! g

2 @: ?& {, H7 d# q% c  _; E     One day I always remember; P8 s8 l3 ?2 |$ o& {% o) {* J
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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# n8 @1 n% k* r2 a1 Dexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to7 X' x$ T9 g- F% \: u- T! V# g
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my3 z6 s5 n" l1 N$ q# o  k& |9 Y1 k
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid4 H5 S. J% X1 p" l! T1 @! G) V

( c) \( L1 D, L# B8 i+ |2 U was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 7 _1 U3 \2 ?6 I
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since $ o$ C! w1 q2 i0 l3 h
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing0 a& \* q, k$ ?  i+ S% G; S0 U
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ; G# W: M: G% P5 i5 y: Z2 g- k! B: O
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my / G' `" x! k3 }+ U- v

3 t3 W: `! ^. [7 }7 pdeaest daughter.' q% z$ |  [) m

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+ l# l8 x" s: n- ]. w$ dAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will+ O" o; g3 f( U* a

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!# {0 U, e! [- t1 |0 @6 Z
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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