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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

! c1 F, _7 O; d+ l% r was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

& a4 e: o1 L; A( Q/ mthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

8 z0 p5 {, y5 I* U# sfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.

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2 _" J1 J: v/ n% yAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
2 w! j) r- v) ^( K9 Nwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！