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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember% U; W( |9 g+ w4 O

6 ?4 w+ w5 ]7 u8 i0 |6 u; `7 M' F  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was/ L9 Q2 p& `- K  g7 [1 \
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to; s; S, a4 E" ~- E: `' ^: P! \
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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- [; h6 G& t) g: A& e6 Y) b little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,- z5 n% |! l/ W* r

  ]& E3 H; I  f3 L+ Z every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid+ m. t  ~' s1 r1 ~3 s2 y
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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# R6 w+ e1 F$ a$ i8 l on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 8 T: g" E1 L9 }

7 a1 Z3 {7 J# K# U! q- H7 ?for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will$ Z) q7 `  A% k
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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: r* ~; q& @' s  v3 c[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
1 x; F1 ~4 \6 w: T+ z0 H# p$ awe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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