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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)/ A+ M$ f- I; q" `
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     One day I always remember
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2 L$ w4 E/ C$ {7 B% O+ A) m  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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9 U2 t& A; }3 N  K( iexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to6 Q" a# e/ D* ]' |

) X( R) f2 j9 \" R! L5 Pput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,* m) P5 m+ {6 b: o' K
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid7 ^1 B5 F+ x4 k- j, R4 B" o3 [
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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- `! s9 y7 k1 l2 L on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ' @1 G2 E4 H) G0 {+ ]
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deaest daughter.3 [  T& h" R6 x) x' p6 F: W
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.! S1 n& |, k2 K, E

: e) c0 d% A5 h# P: U- O! @9 ~[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
: x, B/ h5 y0 \, @we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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