翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞

Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
2 v4 d1 S0 n( ~( a3 u' {, ?# s) Mwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
out.
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" H( ?# f/ H1 y9 p3 G1 O, R8 k此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。
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Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
) s9 t- E, I( ~  f  kface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
! t& L& q' d# L1 u! khand, danced along the crazy theme.

酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
$ O" `+ O' g' k. W: y姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。

1 }5 G0 W+ b9 v% O( H0 s& A3 LLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
( D5 {% q5 V9 g( efrom God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
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灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
近。
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0 K6 d" R9 I  |9 }Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
3 }- R. c% S6 ~1 l3 s. adisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
: L) A4 ~: J* L7 Y7 }/ Zfeel all the same.
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" t# [* r! `% |往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
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7 q. f$ v' Z+ ~; N于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。

* d# |. L5 p8 k: {: T# P0 f8 RMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
# I, N9 _6 E" }measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
Christmas bell!
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妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。

The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
* K- T/ e+ M+ n. ?) `" |6 QSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
nothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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% u& E3 U! r* ?/ }钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
! y' Q" r& w5 l+ s4 G/ h! M而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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1 D! `/ ]( A6 FSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
7 q1 O2 s7 m- ^雪花渐融，妾与君仍天各一方

三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

+ k, }. E$ m! N8 W你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表

  \2 }( p2 y+ D你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
0 Q7 t9 v9 x3 ]. t( s9 [5 G; [: Y/ N不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
此老杨非彼老杨也！

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( G( j0 y2 e9 E3 ?% R相信地球人都知道吧~~
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其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表

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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

7 u. K$ x9 y$ K- y9 _. B8 i是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表

7 g+ |8 m! L" H" z是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

3 [3 M4 q$ w, L* J我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表

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$ C9 a9 ~& @6 [) I) \- }) w我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
8 u. J5 _/ [1 T6 A/ z1 k* l怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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& Z& M6 {6 y1 G4 l7 W2 s0 n不看年纪，看地位～

Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢