翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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  _* }, U  Q# W3 Z$ B3 j( G7 sCold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
withered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
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此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
8 l; y4 Q6 W2 X眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。
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Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
# z7 L" x  f' ?. H7 R6 PSmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
1 F+ l" Z. p: L% vface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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  q- ?8 \# b$ H  T$ Y0 B$ @% u酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
! b7 @4 o- T0 \5 e8 @; G姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。

Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
! W. S  V" A" t& Z/ ~" ?$ f% ume. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

) O5 y9 e# R( }1 o灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
近。
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4 G$ m( {- d) f1 Z( |Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
2 v8 U1 n" W2 L/ Z) p$ P7 qgood-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
/ @; l8 E/ W, {* Hmy pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
( n7 E9 Z6 s) B* }5 J. ushouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
feel all the same.

往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
( t! z. @2 D9 [) X+ N5 U  X休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
然
# E$ C" f6 m- m% P于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。

4 }# c: G) }; @- [+ G* xMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
8 B) f# I* h* u9 p! V# s/ Q! J) ?measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
Christmas bell!

7 {4 e" N6 @  M; v4 ?2 M+ u. h妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
( o5 l2 ?# G& H1 J$ s' Q7 P皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。
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& r+ z# {; n- X6 ^The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
( G# b7 P# `9 w7 v% wSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
nothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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, z5 S: F" D) E  S. C( n8 R钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
" J2 Q& K) ]) Z1 p- @而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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8 U$ @. }* c* v. T: ?6 j6 E+ s. TSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
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三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
+ o+ c, G, ~  \( U: L; ^刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

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jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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$ V' W7 s4 n2 A$ H0 X/ }你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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0 ?# P# g* t3 I, B" a俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
/ w" m7 @  {# Y# k此老杨非彼老杨也！

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* x' k; ?5 v% a: H8 S, K( _其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

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原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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+ Y( m9 @- S7 H俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

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猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

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" P4 C7 x8 j; P我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表
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我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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不看年纪，看地位～

Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢