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A positive change
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大家首先要注意,时态上一定要用过去时,然后想一想什么样的chang是positive change呢?比如一次basketball game队友们让你意识到自己技术上的问题,从此球技突飞猛进;比如一次家人生病了,有生以来第一次照顾父母;比如你学开车考驾照的经历;比如你第一次离开家到外地求学。。。只要不紧张,认准了话题往下讲其实不会太难说。不过有一些套话是描述change的时候可以用的,比如:$ e& i! y6 G I# A% }
9 O" ?3 [$ [, C3 z- qThis experience altered the course of my life---这次经历改变了我的人生道路;# y0 ?4 m$ c/ F: Q$ _ E
At first,I was really bewildered and frustrated.刚开始我感到很沮丧也很困惑;
: u/ @$ n1 d+ ]2 S3 gMy teammates encouraging words really cheered me up.队友们的鼓励话语让我振作起来;2 F# m. m( \* u/ M1 I% h
My driving instructor's sound advice made quite a change in my performance.驾车教练的好建议让我的表现提高了很多;8 ?: v* W y: B* M
It not only improved my skills,it also solved my attitude problem.这不仅仅提高了我的技术,也让我改变了自己态度上的问题;
# {$ O7 d9 i8 @. u" w' j+ wFor the first time in my time,I found my father so vulnerable and so helpless.有生以来第一次,我感到父亲这么弱小这么无助;' e: Y+ _& e& ~
This episode had profound influence on my later life.这段经历对我后来的人生有深远的影响;
7 i* b. {1 Y7 N7 z4 jI became a more caring and loving son/daughter after that incident.这件事情以后我变成了一个更关心家长的孩子;
g: I; ^: ?9 v, x9 pIt prompted me to start working on my agility and team spirit.这促使我改进我的灵活性和团队精神;
% S8 ]' f3 J4 @! {This experience was pretty much a milestone in my life.这段经历可以说是我人生道路上一个新的里程碑;
) w" s c0 L7 T* f( V: }It made me tougher and more tenacious.这让我变得更坚强,更有毅力。 |
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