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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
3 H- ~7 H# C; a2 D0 E9 CI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ) R# d" @% J9 G' ?" t  J
Dreamers
+ V5 M, Z. G# Q9 F; d. N6 SSavages
) k3 p8 v6 D: P& p; W4 ZPoets
# R  D' a. H5 Q$ f; EBuilders of canoes,
2 `* Q+ X4 o( l* D  @Black smiths
- ^6 z: c' i1 V( w) BMurderers,3 f, |0 q+ d% p2 E0 l
Risk takers,
& G" N6 F+ ?" b( x% m2 ^My mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ o! s6 W3 K6 ^  Y" M
As I think of what could be. ! I# A# C  f# c9 y' o1 H# L* \
The world is so big to me
) F9 A1 V, @: ^  x( D) Y$ TI wonder what it means to be
: y3 K4 v" S) j- d- K  y' BI looked up at the star and smiled 0 g4 d5 Q6 ^1 b4 }! I
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
7 O! o' W% e& O0 J3 b% f评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
0 T) Z; x6 Q8 C顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,8 T- q& g5 J* u1 k/ l& |0 N" U
A poor old Guy;0 M- ~% }  c$ U6 K
Legs in a bonfire,  Y2 T6 p9 R: _* S" f: S- o$ m
Head in the sky
* h( a# e3 R2 TLonely, with the feel of betray0 I& d! Y% x) B- X! X" O8 `
Heart empty and hollow6 I( U* K, {" F5 Z3 M* Y
Alone I stand* q% E# r$ K8 x) A( ~
I am useless to all 0 T# `5 J# ?5 e8 C  w1 g4 h- R) f
But I wish I were a dove
' y& Z% B4 E1 ^" a% \: i+ ]$ M- pGiving myself to the world, to the fire
1 X( f6 b& p3 n/ U7 w; ?% f) iI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
! b5 @- e2 x9 ^& K2 m4 l& \I sent prayers to my god. ~* r" k4 z# A1 i
Though he does not answer
+ t  j+ P! H7 sHe bless me with the gift of hope % g" {; N* r5 c9 |. v: e/ o8 A
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。/ |  D" E3 b; p
加油加油,经常写写!
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