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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
9 i0 P8 |5 q1 w- O- I% zI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  * w7 [5 m* `6 S- j- t) o2 F& {
Dreamers
4 x& E6 n; [5 C# WSavages
1 M) A7 |8 J) FPoets
  m9 J, I$ U# [$ j8 Q; DBuilders of canoes,6 ]! j1 R/ W& R" m
Black smiths
% m1 ], g: _2 E/ e5 BMurderers,
4 J, K' d- @2 z/ z$ u4 YRisk takers,' X0 X; R* k" i5 l  d; {5 }
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder , a1 I+ Q. O" |! Z
As I think of what could be. $ D# b+ H2 f1 Q9 U' W
The world is so big to me
) p' R& N' P+ S; KI wonder what it means to be
+ j1 w/ i& A1 p$ r$ d1 q7 @1 LI looked up at the star and smiled
4 i* O% j- Q3 p; lThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. ( s$ I/ B, F3 b

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。- c* c$ e( f7 ~- [6 A
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
7 o9 K/ s6 m; r顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,7 B9 a' r5 V1 G/ M! f. Y
A poor old Guy;
1 E  x2 Q) x: I' n/ o0 c$ i4 \Legs in a bonfire,7 t3 L; }0 F( p" v) E+ V
Head in the sky# Y& G0 Y# V( N* o" T: C1 s
Lonely, with the feel of betray4 O2 j7 Z$ [$ a9 ^
Heart empty and hollow
, M1 u( z% {9 Z1 y: IAlone I stand4 k$ n3 f$ H0 W# `' a8 C7 a% B6 N6 N
I am useless to all % t* J: E" m' P6 I( `3 ?3 J" K
But I wish I were a dove
* M/ p) q% @* V8 e4 d7 r. FGiving myself to the world, to the fire
% ?, O- I& ^$ K, m& f! C2 JI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind* ^' D' N! K" t5 a8 D# P0 L( V
I sent prayers to my god2 }7 r( Z6 t! }" a) C: O7 A
Though he does not answer
5 F$ \( y& J& [$ iHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
1 K0 r9 m1 S. O$ t0 _加油加油,经常写写!
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