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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
/ @3 x1 e! ^& n. s% ]( PI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
; a' A' n0 h; {9 CDreamers1 r( |$ a& w: c7 B
Savages
; I0 o6 x; S4 e0 ^# H6 j% f1 ZPoets
$ n4 }  R7 O$ Q& g8 `# NBuilders of canoes,
' V; o: F& C5 }# Q/ j& l( vBlack smiths
0 y0 u7 a1 m8 T+ Z( {, ?; G1 n, BMurderers,* W0 G( M) ]; J; i
Risk takers,
1 W1 B* v4 k  P# y9 H  b7 fMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 l1 \& g; C* o  q. g4 w; F- `/ R0 E$ N
As I think of what could be.
4 T4 y0 O7 n8 F3 _- vThe world is so big to me
- ~2 |! E2 ^- K& BI wonder what it means to be
8 x  l8 ?% @: h8 d5 P) B  WI looked up at the star and smiled
4 o) j) q# X1 `; {% ~# f& zThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
7 P  W: [) R9 ~1 Z  t, k) ^, e评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。- c. c, c- [8 d
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,3 ^" t- M% \+ R* L7 x$ i5 J
A poor old Guy;/ ^2 K; w8 F9 N; x3 L! y
Legs in a bonfire,5 j, F8 [$ k+ w; Y# I
Head in the sky' s( P# v' x6 S3 x9 E& _
Lonely, with the feel of betray& h) s# U. F! F7 H
Heart empty and hollow
& u; E2 g! _9 e3 aAlone I stand& P' R! {  K, `( y) ?3 [# B
I am useless to all
0 h* O6 b4 v0 o& t. N& U. T+ H" HBut I wish I were a dove
7 x+ m' G4 D' u& c* B9 E% t6 U* uGiving myself to the world, to the fire1 q! r' B) e! a. y' f) n1 b
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
, h$ m: m  @7 y. \0 {/ TI sent prayers to my god
( U4 ]9 f1 `. q7 u. jThough he does not answer
& O) Z" r$ O0 \. D, `: JHe bless me with the gift of hope , X9 U& k. q9 I; @0 W8 w, r' c
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。) L/ a5 _4 j# O, C7 M6 j$ s
加油加油,经常写写!
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