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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, # |( E3 M, g. g- K* \3 |
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  & n0 b, ]# s" Z4 z
Dreamers0 G& a% l& j$ h, [6 d
Savages( T; y3 y+ x% t
Poets. o0 S8 n% a' H6 M; Y2 R( ~7 X$ N
Builders of canoes,( \$ y+ X3 b- r/ x; b# F
Black smiths5 a: r$ r& M: g( M' y$ X# E0 q
Murderers,, x! m# c- A. u' Z, s
Risk takers,8 [( f) J7 O6 X- U
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 8 n. H* P4 W8 k- q' `6 Y
As I think of what could be. 3 G( f3 _( R  I3 P2 n) u
The world is so big to me
+ x5 f2 d7 W& ^: C% n% |+ {! `I wonder what it means to be
3 b3 S2 D6 r1 B7 h8 L% Y9 aI looked up at the star and smiled
) e0 l% n- a5 o7 XThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. , Z3 U$ ~* t7 {& y
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* b4 s; Q3 F2 O3 {3 e8 `评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- _, N8 o5 @0 @" ^顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
% i8 X& |6 l! V6 I; g$ XA poor old Guy;  J) d, L& [. W; v- V$ G  e
Legs in a bonfire,
: u2 @& h! C, ]* YHead in the sky
( [8 N6 X' p  o5 n( l& xLonely, with the feel of betray
1 n( x) _9 c6 f7 L) B" x% c  GHeart empty and hollow* @% v, p# e" W- {+ O& p5 T# Q
Alone I stand
  z7 w% f7 h0 w! f. S4 r$ zI am useless to all
7 e: t- C7 m4 V: {& c# LBut I wish I were a dove
8 x" F0 h- ]5 R! d. OGiving myself to the world, to the fire
& p( V9 y! b5 }# mI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind2 H' b; K8 c, d
I sent prayers to my god2 ~8 t1 f0 a% v  ]5 d
Though he does not answer
+ b* E( Q/ F! \5 O- L) }He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
! f$ B) k+ j  I: g' w: r加油加油,经常写写!
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