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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 3 U8 X  J& ^5 t" J) |
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
* D5 `# `! X1 A0 K1 pDreamers
/ }  o7 @' z* X* k8 RSavages& ^% m* h7 m" ~
Poets
) Q, W6 X% |" j/ p9 ?- hBuilders of canoes,
, k; n$ i7 c! _Black smiths
5 i; [- S3 \) j, N- [9 ~Murderers,! \" G/ Z4 @1 ^5 ~8 O1 I: S
Risk takers,
. x, J) }' E' C4 [My mind is full of curiosity and wonder ' C7 z8 J% ~+ E7 a% i+ V- Y; r
As I think of what could be.
, e+ g7 _; y) b2 rThe world is so big to me # L0 H; W; E& M& F( ]6 D
I wonder what it means to be& e3 K: i& Z  s' e6 J) J6 [3 l
I looked up at the star and smiled
/ V* S* U' h3 C4 U; p. VThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. $ \2 y$ R' I' D3 H$ r

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。5 }6 u: w: G. T- c& A+ O" V1 {
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。, U: a+ {9 R+ i0 O% H) K3 Q! y
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,/ d- {) D& x$ z0 s! I0 O) D
A poor old Guy;1 C- Z* W- F4 C- o* N/ M$ |/ R1 l9 b
Legs in a bonfire,
7 N9 A3 C( g! q$ \Head in the sky8 H: X0 H- l5 W. b7 v8 T
Lonely, with the feel of betray
, N8 o) a4 S* E' r% kHeart empty and hollow
: a/ T; ~7 j* MAlone I stand
0 P& S2 f7 F& TI am useless to all $ Z) b9 t; s/ S9 l/ R" g$ N! G
But I wish I were a dove $ p. i2 I& X. d9 p5 S- z2 P
Giving myself to the world, to the fire9 p! u( I: y8 i8 H
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
: O. V5 o! J; K# U" [# w) Q; iI sent prayers to my god. `) h# E6 U7 ?, V
Though he does not answer
8 p' o1 h) f! m4 h' wHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。+ t" r* `/ ]) ]5 _$ g! H4 ]& j) F9 _
加油加油,经常写写!
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