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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
4 q) P+ k* L+ g+ II believe there must be creatures like ourselves  8 i6 b9 J# P: ?! ~) z: \1 \
Dreamers
1 e; ?" M: \0 YSavages9 ?$ b$ q! F2 H* \1 `4 Z) ?
Poets
0 B. e+ j6 n" I& k/ T2 v; IBuilders of canoes,3 G5 |/ _  V0 O) w9 U. B! h8 Z! h
Black smiths% i3 [; {& F) @: m, r
Murderers,
% v" v- |* m- z6 T6 uRisk takers,
& h0 F  d6 U. d2 N- H) h$ iMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 @% P2 _0 ]7 p0 g* Q* |As I think of what could be.
) S! @/ M, x7 R5 a7 U- `  vThe world is so big to me
2 y' E- Y+ k0 T) Z! g+ M8 OI wonder what it means to be* B) x5 S2 S! q( A! ~' H% C
I looked up at the star and smiled
3 _  g5 y) m! w3 M% Y/ EThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。7 ]. r" R) a" N, P' Y9 E  k( h
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- T* l7 `8 ]5 g9 N2 `顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,$ T& d7 y& o+ J& W# w+ N! ~; o$ t4 |
A poor old Guy;) G& L7 V4 i6 ^5 w! g, c. M0 N5 E7 A# ?
Legs in a bonfire,% J! G8 V7 @, A7 J
Head in the sky
7 C+ z1 \) }9 M; H( _- L, rLonely, with the feel of betray' k; m* O6 e. q, T$ r5 C
Heart empty and hollow
. \! K4 r' a$ PAlone I stand+ h; q; @2 n. y1 V9 B+ v. x7 E4 X
I am useless to all
/ x' J4 z, S$ K$ v' }+ ?But I wish I were a dove
- Q  U- d% J8 kGiving myself to the world, to the fire3 I5 ?5 W; F5 w% i: x6 _! Q' m& A" s% m
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind  k+ L# T" p* E% `9 X0 U& J
I sent prayers to my god2 F6 m6 E8 k! t7 x3 q
Though he does not answer8 h# l& A( k9 c7 u
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
" I/ T+ e  g3 n4 }4 Y  m2 Q加油加油,经常写写!
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