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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' z) b% e$ J" f8 `
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
5 ~" d- Q7 W- y1 I1 ?. D2 kDreamers
' A. X& K, i1 b# C8 KSavages% M/ k" w7 ^! Z* i
Poets
( W  H6 p4 Q7 K6 J1 C; l+ rBuilders of canoes,
6 v4 s- U8 D) h, G+ d4 i+ pBlack smiths
/ g4 g3 n; ?! ], b% cMurderers,
+ f/ U2 w$ d2 [* ?9 |5 }* ORisk takers,
$ |% ~* X4 U" D" M2 L" w7 o5 t1 D8 }My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
! d2 K2 m  Z# Z/ ?! _As I think of what could be.
! N6 ?' i: x$ X7 R" P5 O$ N. |The world is so big to me
, K, Y% u3 ]) wI wonder what it means to be
8 _* P) T% T; m5 c* G* ?8 VI looked up at the star and smiled
+ Q4 o9 S! i6 |' d2 \They flashed as they have heard all I have read. $ U8 @1 Q4 Y. M6 J1 k3 i7 g9 w  M
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。. j5 h2 B- x! Y% t
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
  H  Q' T# V; d顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
3 ?, `% C2 X* N7 @7 s0 F# CA poor old Guy;* `1 [# W/ j* I+ u
Legs in a bonfire,( ^  _4 ]+ R( e% P, a6 l7 F" ^
Head in the sky6 Y7 r' ]7 `# p4 j
Lonely, with the feel of betray
* ?3 q3 b) }' N5 y/ mHeart empty and hollow
& U! A- L  H) Y; S8 X- ~9 Y( GAlone I stand
! Z4 J% \. t0 BI am useless to all
4 C0 Y# V, J3 o- r/ u% d: x) ZBut I wish I were a dove
* S; Y$ u+ O  CGiving myself to the world, to the fire
$ F; u' q* P+ x1 G1 y) X# |- mI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind5 R) J$ i; B& P$ l6 s4 I. _; x* N. F
I sent prayers to my god! B" F; N1 X9 \2 q$ @- v% @
Though he does not answer5 C# H8 h  k, ?- o% y
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。7 V* U; {; |; y8 L" v& U
加油加油,经常写写!
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