我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
/ j2 x5 x( T8 k) j8 l是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
" r. O: O0 H0 c) PSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
% p4 Z4 O$ k& y) N0 d  Y7 kFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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. {( l' K8 a3 x- j" o4 c, ^Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
* k" [1 |' w  a1 {  ?" yWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
/ E# k, q4 i& {+ u: K. BGood-bye, my childish dream.
3 r3 z  P# t7 ^& Z8 l# TI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
3 l' V8 Q* v( sIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

* j1 z: L! H; H0 j[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
5 _( q5 q8 L( [" T9 |0 D5 fbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了