我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

, F3 v6 Y) V" E* |( C9 D8 f; ZFaster, hotter and sweater,
& E3 P8 P  _9 u* MSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
% f) N9 x% V- g  e4 GFrom the colorful nature
, S( [; c6 m3 @1 _5 TTo my life and dream.

0 s2 N* \3 L5 FFollowing the summer's step,
% \) H; x& Z. W1 t1 G( H. R6 j9 VLet myself go ---
. F; {6 ^; }. ^6 X' H. DGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
. G3 C/ y" c- N% J$ \' m+ FGood-bye, my childish dream.
% K1 P! B) \8 H. ZI can prepare nothing;
2 n: h4 O. C, R' y. uMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

  F6 y/ l/ w4 L4 n! d! z/ s一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
7 W& h" w6 e/ v. Z3 y9 n* K: }. [It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
! w' w. K* U% p2 d; q  Ibut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
3 I  r7 W) N8 X( n, A) a; t5 C% q夏天来了