我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
. J; ?# x& ?9 S' [9 F是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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# j( q9 x. J) [' h$ LFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
* Y- p6 S$ B# e: AFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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  V9 J" n9 k/ e; S5 `Following the summer's step,
' b$ p6 a) ]) rLet myself go ---
  ~3 g9 G: W' T  O% dGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
- e7 Q/ g! y7 m' `( t+ v# G1 N5 kI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

& q0 {) v* R, t; R( @" b8 e& R8 M一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
  o& {$ A; z' b  N$ XIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了