我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
$ X* Z7 _# `  v1 o3 [- t! f/ G是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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( V4 Q' c; ]7 ~9 \5 dFaster, hotter and sweater,
3 M! ?) w: V" f0 D: {Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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( t9 d* B% O6 E) B3 [( w! X* |6 e- t+ hFollowing the summer's step,
4 b& w, g  W0 q" nLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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5 P, z1 K' ~3 bGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
- q2 I" p! P' n0 \, h4 {3 U1 nMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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6 i6 U3 D& }4 J( W0 G7 C8 s一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
5 J+ _0 @5 C, j. N& d9 SIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
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Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了