我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
! r" T4 |/ ]3 n4 c' F2 F2 tSummer's Coming

; i1 i$ x' A* @  r' AFaster, hotter and sweater,
4 m# Z$ i' P  e6 [Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
5 z4 a& s% b0 f9 j" U* p' ATo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
+ E7 J$ z- i# wLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
- N; ~( E: W/ }0 }2 _! v, X; gWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
( m1 D7 c+ ]! O3 C! JGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
# O3 u" }5 Z: o0 d$ iMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

! v+ ]8 z9 T0 Y! a% K/ Q一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
) o+ f) C* F+ S4 [! Wbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
) ^% j* O/ P* u, l$ O夏天来了