我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
; n4 o# K% U$ O! W4 A" h# |; V' L' ]8 O; C是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
, S. E8 u) u. F) N/ KLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
& W2 R3 \. u( `, I* V' \0 t' Q  vI can prepare nothing;
6 Z; Y% h$ ?8 h' g$ D8 uMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

, ^7 f0 k+ V% K0 u一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
* P% L' X+ L# P% O0 ]It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

8 N1 P. q( C: a/ ~3 z$ Q# d6 S[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
2 H+ L) i4 C% _0 Q- T9 Bbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了