我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
' \% m4 M' d3 P! R: C. Z是十多年前的作品了——
" Q- g; O6 z1 m% ^; k+ i+ M5 ~" |6 aSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
. e- L' @# L* D1 j' aWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
7 u+ X; G, x( c0 FGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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2 N$ h# m; |5 W8 F' [# V一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
& ^, G7 R, W; ~( B+ }It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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6 a( }9 Y6 P- e$ Q[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
% D9 J& v0 T0 _! p" C9 c* L8 r夏天来了