我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
3 C3 ~3 {- L6 K1 r9 Y是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
# G/ X& S: `7 p& T4 v3 F/ Y; J7 mSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
, |+ K( [) X. F7 X
( h+ n4 f0 X' w+ d7 G4 y1 N) oFollowing the summer's step,
% o1 j' Q" N* [1 S* LLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
! a, e7 }8 q" \6 t$ E% n+ zMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

% y! v+ s* e1 V5 q7 W一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
7 c/ {7 U; n, h& q  JIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了