爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love
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I fell in love with you
At the first week we met

5 W- }& Y$ G) f1 xYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
* y" {. o7 h4 C! ]! k1 D4 l+ RAs spotting sky at a summer night
- j4 z' j5 l: f. h' v) _- [They are shining stars

Your lip is so big
And that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
! \, ~( A- P% C6 K3 }+ i% W. hAnd that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
You blame me everything and everyday
# b9 k$ X: [8 W( l! K* q  U3 V3 Y: gAnd I think all girls sound like
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  B) p' b1 g  D7 i! z0 u/ YYou could not stand my eating
2 W" b+ e6 a1 l# b% d  L9 q/ ?( ]Saying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
, v& k& B* l5 ~, J( gEating with sound is a pig
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I fell in love with you
Become a fool to think
- A- Z) r$ l" {4 }4 eAll trouble things you did
8 U, ?' D; O% wAnd that is the price for love
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You slash my heart
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I will never love another
If my heart can be fixed
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[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
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湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
. }; b4 b: L7 n& k. b- _Falling in love

# U6 R* k9 W3 g: R& cI fell in love with you
At the first week we met

You have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
2 p/ T8 P7 d" I( k2 h+ Z0 _  VAs spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars
6 r6 K4 ?1 M# }
Your lip is so big
And that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
* v. \9 [8 \$ V' X/ cAnd that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
) D3 ?: i2 k/ dYou blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like
* s! G1 W4 [: m7 H0 m# z
You could not stand my eating
" A% j) a0 w9 e! u1 U( w( RSaying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
3 k& Y- G, l4 H! F! eEating with sound is a pig
* F3 \5 L9 s1 N( s
I fell in love with you
0 g" a. X" l' t+ ?+ l& ]! h/ W9 ?Become a fool to think
All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
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you are deeply in love
Everything from me is negative
"My man should like this,
and I am helping you to improve'

You are loving me
or that one in your mind?
$ y) p5 t) q# a5 g) k8 r8 RMy mind is like a mud
can be shaped whatevery you want
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unfortunalety not my heart
It is slashed by you
; G2 T0 ^6 ~$ Q' @and I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
" _5 ?8 _9 R, r: y# iIf my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

( F& {8 b: O% p0 e0 V湿人啊....

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你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
; i3 r0 F4 ]5 [: e够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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! P' H  I' _7 A, K0 Z该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表

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. w: ^  V" ^$ I7 |$ {该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
9 J, v+ L- m3 _+ n. |- F. z哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.
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P.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
5 c8 M: T- S; B% ]. M( K$ W看的我毛骨耸然

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有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
$ O! ~1 r5 f, \7 W看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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' P8 S9 T: H6 b4 t+ F  L听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

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