爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love
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I fell in love with you
At the first week we met
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You have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
# l5 x3 E8 d% H3 KAs spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars

6 G4 v# U0 z1 O9 eYour lip is so big
And that’s good for a kiss
& C3 P+ w: q3 U  X$ }0 o3 y% I# MYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex

0 k5 S1 S- O( R" G8 G8 ?) S: gI was deeply in love
4 t+ s: @& ^  O0 H+ c" AEverything from you is positive
* b( C/ g  Z2 w, gYou blame me everything and everyday
& i3 G0 q; J+ _) Q. m- w* p; jAnd I think all girls sound like

4 `1 ]* `# h/ {& V' C& v/ |/ ~5 pYou could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
5 V% @5 H# l' @# @3 y2 {. XEating with sound is a pig
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I fell in love with you
; t6 V( s, B0 ^7 `- M$ m& jBecome a fool to think
& i* [, x1 }- R7 p8 ?8 vAll trouble things you did
# w3 @: d5 F; |3 }" T6 dAnd that is the price for love
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You slash my heart
and I am seriously hurt
  ~9 x3 n0 r) WI will never love another
If my heart can be fixed
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. e0 t4 K1 w) W6 k) S% }* q[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

2 g# `& |5 ?" f湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
Falling in love
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) x) l$ X$ F8 S# z0 I' N: XI fell in love with you
At the first week we met
5 Q+ ]; b& z) z  X" J6 U1 O) ?" q
7 n6 v$ H0 r4 g" B3 @You have charm, you have looks
' B/ t# t6 }4 V. {with full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
; f2 d% }2 ~$ `They are shining stars
$ C0 q$ Y8 t6 P# |
3 X0 |7 i" k/ QYour lip is so big
And that’s good for a kiss
4 t: i) Y+ k1 jYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
/ E6 n% @: w% R$ @* _Everything from you is positive
# x$ U) s! G- T" IYou blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like
6 p" h$ n! {, x! d7 T3 \' ?
You could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
9 P  p2 n. b' b" b, Q0 JEating with sound is a pig

7 i  n9 l3 u0 W1 Y% g& O" S) ?I fell in love with you
/ h( m/ p# J- F4 @: BBecome a fool to think
2 f; A- j; b8 g4 K( |All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love

you are deeply in love
Everything from me is negative
4 V1 {* L2 j/ [, ~' C"My man should like this,
and I am helping you to improve'

You are loving me
9 T5 K! W- N( ^+ F/ _& R3 i  \or that one in your mind?
; y/ N* m0 `! V# u. ^My mind is like a mud
can be shaped whatevery you want

. O/ h. i' [* Lunfortunalety not my heart
It is slashed by you
+ X8 M' V* c2 C, oand I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
" o! h% Q) a+ ?* W6 r0 W$ l8 RIf my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

6 a- M, N, D) |* _湿人啊....

) w$ ~0 j3 n& D) b你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
啊?还没整完哪?
  @$ e( B3 B* ]' Y够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表


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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
$ S; ~6 n& y& n0 n0 [$ F2 [哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.

P.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
看的我毛骨耸然

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0 I& C1 k) Y4 t6 r$ [. T有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
8 q# g, b* v3 C$ D+ m9 c看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声