锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

" u+ [( J# h  h　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

2 F! y  t& U! |/ ]" f+ @5 Y# \　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

: s( l# E, l2 O8 b" U; J9 l　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

% C& W% k- S% Q! l" w* V　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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; X0 z& D2 [2 K& z  u, Z　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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5 d; Q- M5 k0 H, ?1 E4 B" _, d' r( V　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

* R# L3 W+ P! w/ c8 C/ f; N7 h　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

( d/ o2 e! j- y& P$ X　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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( Q' g+ N* J  R6 O4 r, A1 Q+ i　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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2 ]; S8 a" A& g3 K1 e" e/ P　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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- s" f2 w: }' [' t- R　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

6 H" o5 S' D! V* p# v3 Q2 u& D　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

8 y& }" J# c) W  Z　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

, Y- Z' d3 ^8 l: |* ^+ s　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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4 N) t! k! [* f5 O) A$ q& q　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

* N5 u! o4 n" Q! \: [! g6 m7 J8 E& j' h　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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: b+ F) m. |4 E　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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- ?/ _0 M6 A* ]0 B' F( L+ b　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

0 I% e( Y1 H8 s& P　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

7 T  V4 ?' [: ~7 ^5 F3 K　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

: i! B7 [" q* c2 y8 J1 S! \6 ?7 p　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

6 h" D) R3 C3 y2 O6 k' D9 o　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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) y) L7 x3 B" s$ @　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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. B3 `$ s8 n' |' V  v1 i6 p) |　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

8 W( a/ P9 [. i3 i6 C　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

8 S8 b2 T2 W1 B/ w0 L　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

7 w' H7 C9 V6 h9 t: y4 n　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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3 a" H8 ?7 \( M. H/ \+ g　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

3 ~. a/ P  _; ?  V4 A　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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/ P* g' Z6 l1 u0 i' v0 R　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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+ m8 z* O4 X4 n  R: G0 t3 }　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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: R2 S5 H& {  ~! `7 h" T　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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5 u4 R* n9 Q6 o! u" _3 n　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

" g3 ]* n1 K# }1 N4 F' W　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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# @& _, _! e' }' R. u: o1 k! U) w　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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+ b' \  w' Z) R0 B9 Y" n+ ]　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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! `$ c0 D7 c3 U9 @' b1 Q　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

% L0 V" @+ R; q7 }  x　　38. No one knows all the things.

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. Z' {9 D) @% X+ z, g　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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4 u- N; p8 Z/ x7 j9 D# |( p- D3 S　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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( y! p9 a3 O1 C; @　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

* N+ A: ~% W8 `6 m　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

, Z: H) L6 m9 [, t# ~  y. ?　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

; z- C9 W" p* y4 l- ]: ?& }0 |( o　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

' ]/ i0 ~' \* `　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

' j4 x( A+ H# w+ Z- R　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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( {2 f& z( H6 Q# W　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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2 y4 Z3 R- a6 N3 v% m/ p　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.
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0 m/ b! y5 f$ g6 }7 ]7 `: P1 N　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka