锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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5 ?1 {0 S9 d7 Q3 k7 p6 M　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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* `  b5 l+ a- ]2 K/ H( }/ T　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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$ h! T; L$ S  Y4 q+ b6 B. \　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

# f! @* b- ~( F/ ]　　6. Their brain is still very young.

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2 U% O( W1 d3 i2 ^& ^% r　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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2 s( H8 U7 s' X. @$ I　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

; D2 U  p' V' }　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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% g* ?/ f" d) T' Q, ?　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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6 Q2 T+ B* i( \9 n& a　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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  e% y$ O7 \1 c$ C4 N　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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$ j8 s5 g) n. h; E, a' X& E. M9 N　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

7 o3 C9 n$ T: D9 {　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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, V5 ~8 @! v/ Y4 U) l9 P! K　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

2 A  S: W9 |* |# K% i* E* `　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

1 N) }, q* F- e  t1 F" H　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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& ?7 X% {5 u! [1 I& [$ I　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

8 d. E1 K  f7 v) @+ }　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

. s3 C9 x9 h0 O& Y3 ]0 p　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

* o* _& r' p% c6 }) y3 P　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

) l. Z/ g' l" D# a1 v　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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5 k; o3 F/ h; p" Q! O0 Z　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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* T- ]# E8 x' E2 u; r　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

, K  H0 B& a: p! e( @" R( E! Z　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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+ m# {) ^2 D1 }+ L5 h& ?　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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5 \4 c' k  Q. ?. y4 q% ~　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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4 r/ }' T/ Y( ~7 w, h　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

" L: C& [4 J+ D; k. |; r　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

. S9 Q+ D- Y/ v" N& ]4 U! M7 x　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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- {) J- j$ V* e. X- |　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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" d" c& Z" j  F2 _% j5 d6 ?　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

! h# k0 X. M! s/ B7 o　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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; b2 _4 y, T& }; d% z　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

$ a5 @9 }. S' f: Q  b　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

4 u+ n$ G. `6 F' l# A$ t: O) W　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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0 I9 a; ]+ N* M3 s  ~　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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5 ?- j) |6 c$ w$ o0 J　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

! A6 ~7 f# F( k( U1 k5 O　　34. I agree the latter idea.

) F1 k& K- ^9 p- f9 s% R& Q　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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: q: {: j  r) \- |3 O1 i! C　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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5 W- z0 D- }) f+ r　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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+ U+ d0 @+ {7 Q$ M% E3 m3 \+ O　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

; d) i$ q; A6 e/ ?　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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; g8 C8 i6 f; u( z* D3 h& \　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

% F; A- q* u# W* B　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

; h& I$ m: k% T( E" W　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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$ Y6 o$ A. [+ E+ A- v4 n/ k. o　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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6 J* R- t4 B6 ?' r$ p　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

, r6 R7 A2 b; |: Y9 [. M* a　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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6 b& j8 C# ~: Q$ L8 e- ?　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

- b9 x: z$ T: C- o: ~" M  ?　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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; {; q) Q) }* k　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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" M: Q7 |5 C) Z8 J6 i/ I3 u　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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5 S4 t2 Q- Z; }0 C$ g) @　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

6 D, V9 g: a7 U3 M+ u: o) Y' @　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

' P" A! J' `, C8 f: @' {/ }5 \　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

+ F: e# C6 h( Z( H7 Q　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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! X1 A9 p: t0 K# \; q　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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$ G: M! W0 A0 W) T5 z/ B& Q　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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# J3 d' Y; |4 }0 `/ e　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

) I3 O3 k5 r/ v# h: p1 E　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka