锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

6 i2 ^* z# T- K. z! |+ }5 c2 O　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

: f$ V* B9 z0 f) h7 m- o　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

/ B% E9 E# O# N% t9 e7 M　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

3 V" D& z1 ]0 g& \* @. ]0 w, S9 l4 [* W　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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# T7 d  r- h9 x% M+ R- {　　改进: They are still immature.

) |2 I5 C- A, S" A$ H1 l　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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( d% F/ K; O( l0 O4 m7 `) D! {　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

; ?# w! \: L& x% p( W1 s1 j　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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  [) _% \9 z" w& c' I( @　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

  B, \2 \8 P" I9 \/ X& M3 N+ {　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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8 v6 e* g, E" Y, q1 R; K: ^/ p　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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. m# I. U, o. h& ]% J' B　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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8 i/ O0 ?: O# Z, Q2 j　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

# V; Y* O! w  W4 I+ h　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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: O7 U+ N( t- t; h7 N　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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( Z( s5 a" W* y# C" X8 \  E　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

* _  K: _3 J& O0 N+ b5 L　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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( F$ f" g/ [1 t: A  R( b- n　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

$ a  g, ~7 S& n/ x# ~5 ~, N　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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5 H, {) b# w# U* m8 R, E6 j　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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, x( e, W9 D" }. `; o& u/ F; V　　19. They cannot think clearly.

8 ]/ H: [: r8 D: m1 L　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

% V7 U! f0 D; H* f+ u　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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6 x& Z0 V' K6 S5 v　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

  M! v, R( J# k! J　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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5 C: C8 x' k; e/ `. R; p　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

' X' D" Q% T! a$ h" L6 v0 J0 W　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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1 T+ N$ t" B. y  ~1 e5 o8 ^　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

4 t5 `2 J' G* u- v! @6 P( H　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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* I3 Q+ c8 i5 E8 R6 {! t4 C1 Z  a　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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. n( [, }. t: D　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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% s; N$ U# u$ b, q+ l3 I6 @　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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" B* x$ N- i* B4 Z5 i! q9 I) `. U　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

9 V( d: c2 r4 u　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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6 I6 }! ]  \- C( ?$ d* j% m6 W　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

+ t7 G& e* Y) c9 O2 I) b　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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2 W! C) W- ]! p6 c1 `, k! M* h8 \" G　　38. No one knows all the things.

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' ^5 o+ `- G! t' Q. ?　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

- N4 D- m1 A; P! d3 [　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

5 c( Z+ }5 P8 E　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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0 J* ?/ c# i8 {' C. ^6 ]　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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# M. y4 }" ]: |$ L　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

' m. A1 K' z+ A9 x0 ~6 ~　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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6 r) ]: D; Y/ u$ S. \　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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* X& `. P: i; C% S; I3 G　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

" a& g' }/ o" D6 E　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

4 W2 f7 O5 K& E/ g) w: m　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.
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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka