TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)




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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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, W! G* w! p" v4 a& gTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
) x8 W' R7 E  a/ T; tFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
  U$ J. i# J) UFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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. V  j6 @; ?1 D% O" H# R, j* F首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
" |2 f2 l* n4 l, i0 v# eThere is no denying that…
3 M4 G( y( f& m$ h: D8 h8 SAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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7 f1 A( \2 k- B' u% U$ J, `! zIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
9 F: K$ n0 D3 KWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
$ A+ J9 ?8 K& G0 @What is also worth noticing fact is that……
! _% i% i7 S# C9 }# E: H6 u: z& y& b9 IC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
/ B4 M/ s1 d# Y/ o" D1 eFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
& J5 k, L1 v6 K2 K/ v(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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+ e- i7 q. h: _3 R/ ?(四)原因解释型
. U4 q3 ~; @0 k) i/ ~& [) }: O1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
% {( J5 `4 f7 ]* C' t2 T! qAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% z6 S- F- V/ i, E8 dOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
" E( ^3 v: `6 q8 S5 n: H8 n- o: NTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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7 q- N6 h$ {8 [7 m4 S6 x' q2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
' C9 Y0 ^3 |: i$ s( F& GThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
) }& l$ W5 l3 S" m8 A/ p2 N1 l2 }1 X/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
" U6 L; z0 h" h/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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6 w, r* y* a; s4 `, `& rIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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. }3 [' r9 K; F6 M) \再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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/ _0 ]. M! ~4 n$ `# S* f[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]