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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
% c  r1 P, v# ]2 ~4 U1 x1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) . A& B2 z% G, S7 I$ N
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 9 R9 g: l' p  D3 p
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… . Q2 p2 f8 H' \" x1 E
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 6 F& N4 P3 W- b5 j
A is superior in another way, this is…
7 H2 x# G6 w$ j9 Y0 L  ?- @It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 1 B6 G; B2 o; b9 c# r
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)   T/ M" w, {) Z% i" W

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 3 A5 Z6 o% l9 ~8 p- B
For A, A 的一个优势 & ]* c0 G4 v. O' q- ^
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, . {. G9 c" V3 z
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
0 w0 i7 W/ C. T! J' z! Z5 ]% Oon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… # t' r; U5 S/ J9 Z# o/ j' S% @
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
3 W) e5 d! [% M: f- D  J* yFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. * ]# J+ a2 k0 D, A' ?

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(二)单一观点式
* @$ s1 v% T7 y" k! r1 u1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 7 G! k0 h" T8 Z+ u6 `
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. / X+ ?# ^( ]4 f$ K8 k
There is no denying that… $ O6 `) Z8 F* q" U0 S2 @$ k
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
* g! n  y# e2 L4 _5 yFinally,…
( @; v0 O, ?" @Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… $ t% a; L: O" z

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9 x# \! w( I# r9 j2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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: a# L3 w+ w! U2 h' x(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
- n! \- y) ]7 {; W1 P- mThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
$ r/ X* ?5 {# Y! Z2 aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 5 ~  X/ N* E3 U  b
A is superior in another way, this is…
5 g9 i: |; M# f& s7 cIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ ~+ e4 ~2 V, c. YFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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( @( ?2 F5 m+ c: F+ ~(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. / b! S2 d7 f0 L6 f( w& Z. R/ U
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
/ h! f- _" T  t& JThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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( ~, s- }- n( eC is superior in another way, this is… & J) ]+ @6 p) J9 d
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 4 U. F4 a* }, s3 k5 w2 L! x
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 2 K3 D" ~$ H  F
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
: j( ]9 A# @- p. y; l) {2 o1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
; }3 {3 B3 b) ]2 L5 g( e  d1 A, `) dOne of the primary causes is that… . c/ T0 V1 `, c  U) ^( F7 W
XXX also results from…
$ g( h- c" U! H! X… is responsible for xxx, as well. / c  T# h0 J: ~1 v4 N; z
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX   G3 S& m6 }( r9 F
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
% ?/ m" ^  q: H: \There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 4 u* @; K  V( O$ _2 q

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7 M$ p( R( e/ q0 IOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
. {( w, @9 Z3 M# g6 C" h/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… ' }7 [% X/ z9 z! M8 q( q4 \
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 8 t* \2 p# w* ~' t

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) R6 J/ n8 c" @% ?$ M) Qa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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7 X+ G  O4 m+ M- e6 Y1 rIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?* {7 R% }* H9 d8 b( V. n% u

# E+ G. ]* x# E1 A6 _再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.9 [) b, f: n( z0 P* S. p

8 E$ r( Q+ r  k# n- o[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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