TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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- z$ Y. C0 Y, l% q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
  C7 K& g+ {3 _9 |) P/ E0 YIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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$ t+ [+ H7 l  \# u* R7 `- D2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
- }: a4 A2 `4 T6 l+ @For A, A 的一个优势
" J' T' Y3 v0 I  W' e& i+ u. fWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
. V7 Q+ P' y* E" M+ q; D7 U' ~Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
2 P6 v# l9 ]4 aon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ [( M7 o5 L, Z* Y, WFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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' O# _! c  p& j0 D(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
7 Y3 R! v' c* a! wAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
8 |' D" f. O& d% JAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
1 I; `& Y7 V7 O# IFinally,…
0 }4 w# j9 F: a  E4 |2 pBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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: h2 |3 U& r0 v/ i7 ?* v; W(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
/ p# |3 C8 S5 w) OThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
# @+ G+ x. D/ s0 l$ sWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
8 O# n6 g/ F7 {( ?: r6 F8 Q3 k! ?It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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# Y; g* K- ^; O4 D(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
- `) I' Q6 l; j. h' @: cWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 y* E9 Q- k1 |: HC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
4 p/ R7 c3 J4 YFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
4 Q; n# Y- d+ w& ^% T! ]- d! R' x(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
* c0 G& F% c# HAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
  l+ H2 o5 @% w9 M  M+ p) w- ~2 ]; ?… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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4 p+ m+ n6 N+ c% X) u4 dThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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+ l6 R) c: m; I: \, aOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
" @0 G) T( C7 z3 r. a- |( D/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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& U; m! I% }; F7 R5 C: n5 Ja more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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