TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
' i  l, i6 D; p6 L/ c3 W7 W; HThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
& t+ f. m5 u  n4 }2 PWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
  @/ T3 V# P' l. K8 xA is superior in another way, this is…
( j0 o; m5 d; X. I3 L  k. lIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
9 S/ J  S4 H/ u, O! NFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
0 m9 r' V* B9 w4 z; c$ I# {Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
3 y; B* U/ F$ v1 M) r0 o) \- aon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
& ]* F- ^  Q7 _& a4 ?" s3 |: hFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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- c) m1 [$ f1 p* N; D(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
6 _1 ~. T3 B* W( G+ C* YThere is no denying that…
4 k, M& e9 X) Q) @Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: \* V4 a$ P8 I3 x7 qWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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' p- ^, }+ V, d0 ~5 NThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ U8 i+ _% A4 f5 m7 ]When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
* B4 l+ t6 C7 e5 @. R3 h7 A/ W& d0 KThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
0 t% L! Y& N$ b& vWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 x" Y; n$ t. |4 b7 V& D' mC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
, w% Z; k% D* O( v5 F( W(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
5 A4 x' [& h$ C! `One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
8 V" f9 _9 {% A( O5 C1 ^… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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3 H) P0 y7 z0 f$ d2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
, D7 m* i) U% [/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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& K3 D3 Y8 \3 ~a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

: J  a/ h0 {8 T3 ^& g再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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