TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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2 ?, W$ Z" R" ^% Q% e(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)



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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
7 T- D! s; Z% B) b+ m) S9 ~The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
& l5 h) O  P+ j8 ?$ jA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) u. u" ?0 }! q# `  E! M7 yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' k% m$ J/ K1 Q# ?$ d1 m/ _2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
% q2 a( H# n: N3 H: F5 IFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
; k: ~7 G/ c% L2 @% ~moreover, B的优点2,for example…
& |3 ~4 K! J/ ~& b- BFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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$ _' P6 L- }; W/ t2 E& N1 t$ }(二)单一观点式
; F' o; \3 i! U1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
" D( P! B2 y" F+ E. Y3 }2 oThere is no denying that…
9 f4 T+ w0 I* MAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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& i9 J+ s3 w3 Y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
" @' B) C# a' y! nThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 ?: |5 T' I; t! F& [A is superior in another way, this is…
  v; `& G" q( o$ l2 c+ TIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
9 v7 U1 ]3 F/ O/ H+ v/ e/ D# f2 KFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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" z1 B$ J4 ^- u% G0 X. J(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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7 o+ X1 r0 d, W: Z% I0 \There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
! @0 S/ D4 y0 N& V, h" L; ~When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
4 j6 N) X% J1 T/ lThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
# ?3 M7 X: \8 J( t- C9 JWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
8 }& B) _6 T+ k& SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
9 o* K; v. ]' Z/ ]4 I9 s2 hFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
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: `7 r) x4 [8 VXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
, p, H4 L8 r% `; l6 TTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 w, J$ [# ]- n" l  k/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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, [, O( a/ ^8 E2 Q( s& L) C+ la more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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+ _6 [  L# n. I9 B' `% T. \- |In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]