TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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7 y% Y. B2 q$ k; [(一) 对立观点式
" U7 R( }, M9 \/ ]5 e, q4 p5 ^( Y1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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) i+ ?( Q4 m) l! b. m(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
: E1 P& z) ^' H7 r, b4 ]3 H5 {The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
6 A$ q: r/ Z2 S* ]# QFor A, A 的一个优势
, W% |  r4 _& x6 l' a5 \Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
4 G7 U( |. e4 M$ X( _0 g/ sFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
1 C. x( p- {8 S/ ron the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
* W6 x" k- s$ z4 M' @9 s2 \moreover, B的优点2,for example…
" m, ?1 O& f6 ]From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
4 m( w. l. }& s, F0 r1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
: W/ ?" U/ N# o# B6 HAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
( A5 A! K6 u7 P# l+ b6 BThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 ?# U# Y, W1 m/ eWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
% Z+ w# ~" f. b. b7 AA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 g& \8 S* s7 [From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
, f, F2 ], W+ U7 U/ E1 v4 R8 GWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
, P; b  @& h) G" P$ a8 _4 hC is superior in another way, this is…
+ ~& }6 y" S# O& y% P9 m  y9 bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
: x1 i4 ~0 E7 ~$ }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
  ?7 G0 k1 e& q7 R  P& t% O(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
) W% H3 i" ]/ |! A6 {+ K9 Z7 VAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
! T' L0 p# C3 I: U! w2 A- eXXX also results from…
3 O: O6 P) t8 w3 L… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* d0 y* h7 R2 g- b1 Y" ?To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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  H4 R( R$ v2 a* K$ sThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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$ t& u& {- K) o0 j/ R3 {One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- u( g8 L( B0 x6 J/ @/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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2 n* l: @$ }0 a; oa more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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( F8 L- `: z- U% j6 K, NIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]