TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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# F1 t* U0 r& L9 F; S(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
3 w& U* Z( Z$ q, |# |! NThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( Z3 |& c: `, |( U8 [What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
* q. x3 s- ]5 a# B7 a( ]/ a5 SIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
( B: s& C9 \3 j/ V% eFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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% J% l  B4 `) R' o2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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; M, _. c( w! kTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 P; f8 r$ U' Z3 z! ^; y1 IFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
: o7 Q! z5 [& ]6 d3 q0 c2 s. s; Y& zFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
9 Q1 J* l. B% M+ d9 G. s' I6 `5 t* Oon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
. F5 l  G' q+ W) u% u* c  t& H- J% zAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
$ X" @5 ^# A5 E. U2 k# i# \4 WThere is no denying that…
! W+ O. }  ~. F8 P1 U" @Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
! E6 {+ q( r0 u5 X- CFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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: n0 f0 v, W! N& V: x２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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# d- H1 c" _1 k8 D(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
# @+ m4 }. Q  `1 I2 ?A is superior in another way, this is…
# y# ^# v6 n8 I0 R1 i) hIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
& ^" i+ g6 q7 C0 z8 Q* w$ iWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is…
# A& d% {  K: M6 y! D( pFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( u& [3 `' }/ K4 N(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
( Q' y; A; f  L0 P# u  D) gAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
2 O% H/ U! D" S2 P! ]0 X, U& ]One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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* m2 z. D: D9 `( [% o2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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3 H- Y/ q5 n; ROne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
) g2 \& t! F' y7 ], j+ `0 }/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
% D  G/ K4 ?4 t8 T) p. ]/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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& M& I, K5 S; @# F9 N6 Z( M: Sa more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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+ l6 c5 W+ O: F5 {, ^再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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