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I just wrote a poem
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; x1 o8 g$ i( sHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem2 b0 ^8 v& i2 \, {$ ~+ j2 a% l3 m2 E
Thanks a lot!!!
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8 [% m1 M3 X3 V9 G; {Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
- h! G5 W0 ^* i5 U7 ]5 y2 ~- m Somehow I'd found something wrong with us : v- G; A g9 {2 J& z
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( x6 {9 L5 d2 _8 r) b+ p) C
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me + {' H! E! g5 _8 m
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
; B" H9 ^1 L" W7 v$ A Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 z; t+ c. }: R. Q0 W/ W% e( i' x' u$ I% V
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
- H5 A' D! H6 O4 J1 r somehow I realized you were still in my heart . x# y6 v2 R p2 C
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
6 p2 o8 A' D9 w2 u7 ~' j somehow I lost myself inside again 0 w9 `8 T6 y6 U% f+ w$ k! C& a
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' P. l8 o. F C2 h. n' m9 [ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
+ e1 ?9 u }! D; i1 K2 FFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
3 ]. I4 W* `/ W1 c' JBasically, I almost finish this poem/ m0 b+ R2 p! d2 T
I am 一个人de精彩, J$ \% R# K( F) ~5 P% G
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.5 F9 X3 M. F+ E# x) m) D% r2 r o
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42