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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem2 y: Q( q; W( W6 q
Thanks a lot!!!! n8 [! M. D2 f* u- K2 i
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" p' `+ b$ m6 `( wFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
& M! {' `1 D- @7 }9 H4 _ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
, [# I# i! M: ~8 N! }7 g- Z S8 n Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 8 L1 I# F# _5 G7 T' p4 W
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; x+ I! E; g, T" @ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
* z5 j5 b8 U1 O" W1 E( D Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 1 z5 a3 p- Z( V& Q' F: F
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
( |4 S/ R, e2 @- U somehow I realized you were still in my heart 1 a2 _' f. ~2 P$ E! h
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
% O# p; O! v u9 }' B$ c4 D somehow I lost myself inside again 6 _6 @6 N, E4 N3 M- G
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog % R e8 ]7 f) @" {
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( g9 c' f4 r6 H& {5 d
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................2 h$ O: \3 Y, K; x- m
Basically, I almost finish this poem
+ X6 x5 X7 K4 e, E9 w' D I am 一个人de精彩, y; p, `- u5 n. h# F
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- b, ~$ x2 j! Z1 G$ L4 Z: ?
But........ 6 L6 K# B( j1 Y# s0 L6 e* }( F5 ]
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