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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)" b) l* X4 L+ T: R
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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2 N% U6 ?% O. e& P  U2 jexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my6 |8 q4 D& k3 k, y

! M2 X" Q4 p( d: S) z7 s little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,1 ~1 c) o; p% \! A' C; U

1 j& t- S: u' c' K/ k7 b6 B, G0 E6 p every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid: b  `% e1 {' _

5 c( X* f% `* P1 ]* j) ` was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 5 X: ^3 p) V, V) l! m0 {0 x; Z2 |9 D

4 f+ E1 a  N) V. Q7 ?' x* D/ ithat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing# d  R0 y8 Q  S3 F8 g, p4 a
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 0 w( U" D" b: i

8 p. ~- I( \! N, d+ R( x# b! J$ ndeaest daughter.
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2 z' M* M" \8 l' u& rAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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3 c. q/ p% `# [" m never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!1 |2 O, G- F, H* r! U
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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