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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)0 I& Z/ S& y" j% [) R8 A
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     One day I always remember' `# B0 V/ C/ q/ ^0 k

- m) Z$ R0 M# U- e  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 X6 }, J* W* n. u
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to) M5 z, [+ H* Z; I- G3 L* G

! C- G' B8 J2 I4 zput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my. \/ e+ D$ f) ^: p- H& c( D, A

# d0 |! V3 o2 k' v, Q little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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# H8 {$ y  d9 {# Q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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* N" [* D1 Z; M' u) J was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 0 R; K% V2 L1 y6 d: Q$ y
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 4 Z! B* }' B; x$ r/ Z8 H/ P
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing# L5 l1 @$ w" X* E, j

- w3 D" n2 ?6 Q) A1 H  V; k on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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3 W6 ^2 i3 h3 a+ w$ wfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.( e8 R1 Z5 P( N, m. L0 n3 q) G

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9 \/ [: @- z9 `' F' gAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.* {( D" D- [/ W

  m, [  g7 i$ Q" t2 r2 @[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!; V8 F, S4 ^; i3 Z. X
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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