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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)' _- H" M, D/ C
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     One day I always remember
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to# V; D/ R) z0 U. v
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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8 Y9 @  p' Q! ?' X- V8 l4 t every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid. d4 A) c; `1 d
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since : z6 `/ T# o: S7 i$ a0 i( s
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, a8 S1 m  x% r: u
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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" H. B3 N( {- S' |% vAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.0 C% d7 ]0 S* ~
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!9 N! ?/ R4 Z5 B0 N' b7 g6 l& N2 h
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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