作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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- M4 j: n8 c+ S8 [　　　　　One day I always remember

- f( F) w- e( u5 h( u7 U, c　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

0 G+ m" W' m; v0 z( z little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

, X0 F! k. l/ ~ every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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% `7 E6 g1 ]) U was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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' K3 \8 I* ?1 L- y8 otrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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( W1 T8 e, a3 H& B; n4 Qfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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. o: u8 z2 A) T: Edeaest daughter.
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9 j. W; B& h7 nAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！