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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember* V% Z( U( \! B1 E

# M$ i5 |- i+ N. f, o  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 d" m! I9 ]5 j9 C7 u" Z) R9 F0 v

1 u/ v1 x1 f9 T( f$ V# E* [6 W: Uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,# l4 E6 _- a; Y/ n. w/ X, |2 R: |

' T2 s, z9 U' V* O" s2 I every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid  n1 S/ K9 s8 p  j# |7 t/ W

4 i% `$ r- z9 o. ]' [5 s was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since , n1 Z) O$ ^6 I; K. V
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing: Q* h" J6 t: i- `8 O
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 5 l# O5 J/ ^# l$ _8 f' E
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
4 u! P/ h' n1 q0 _/ }we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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