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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)9 ]6 U- {, Q9 h- T: I

) a3 j. h/ T7 [/ t  `5 F     One day I always remember
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) v7 j, t9 y9 ?1 Z& X7 v0 v  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was, S/ A4 X2 d) F7 |. E7 H$ M

: o9 s# k, z( c& k% r& w! ?: S& ~4 Mexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to3 Y1 ]$ k% ?9 X# L: o+ n) d' r

/ ], U0 l* f+ [6 d' l( ^put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my' S9 U/ s) W' W9 _! ]- b, C8 k
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) ^$ L! K- _1 P$ j3 A: h

) D/ B, f5 E: ^+ U" I2 v every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely , g; T$ @2 h0 e3 X7 c  z( W: H

/ W, A" X9 I8 ^* M7 _trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 K6 Y% D3 O! m' K4 Q
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 0 d8 [& ~; ~1 Q  J) r! F) @, o
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will% {! i( w* u! I% f# u$ }8 v# ]- g
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.+ @9 F+ f9 Z% v' W

* a2 C* }, S- O1 @6 s& T  k[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
, {8 X0 W. H) c/ ]* D8 nwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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