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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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( v; _" k: v+ r     One day I always remember5 H6 e% c' d9 I2 N1 m

* P8 Q# y# M1 R# W/ W; m+ O+ P  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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& a( A5 i' X( rexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my1 j6 K! \, U- o6 y1 s, c

: b+ ~, v0 }6 ~! I little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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+ a8 v7 }/ N0 N: J& p0 k; O- c every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since - f3 I! T0 D+ V. n  v
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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6 s: y. \. t  w* J; l6 k on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard * i* j0 m7 _! {& s

7 ~0 ~6 F. M* a, L; dfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my . @$ N+ C3 g8 I9 T% U2 b- M! V% b8 ]

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will8 r0 c% I' d; `, p! j! P
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.4 i% f, Z, H. X3 g

. I! Y8 ^) u* u3 L9 c) f[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!8 E4 ?+ u# z% E0 v' j( M# U
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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