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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)9 E& F) I: {( _0 u! H" T, g" R! s
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     One day I always remember5 J1 \8 X+ O6 z! V: y1 C/ \4 v

6 Z' o# x" z# `6 Q9 l; ?  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was. ]  K* q& m7 I

+ @# I8 y2 i8 mexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to$ s" E: d! R3 k3 W- {( B/ I

* h8 h+ G" W3 ]) J6 s$ t3 i* Yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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% v/ ]: C$ N: D' c+ Q. O+ L$ q little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) R7 |" ]0 S; S6 a8 i* z, q( s6 M

2 Q* F2 j. U3 Q8 S# `) d every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid4 J* ~) ?' @& O1 {+ A- G" O
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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: D! j: Z8 }5 y; T3 [0 G8 ltrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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9 `7 J0 K7 L* `- ?1 l: w on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my * s: w' T2 K4 W6 O$ c. |

( Y* I+ ?4 `) [' C: Adeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!, w& g+ j9 G9 b) o( k$ ]
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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