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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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7 k, f$ A0 x- T0 Q9 [/ q  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was/ a! v6 s- p  a2 U/ ~+ ^- g7 Q

% F  Y' k- i& pexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my1 R3 j$ \* V) b

  b3 I3 Z9 N% I& C- S9 K; a* R9 G* K little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,9 o5 e' `6 P4 |
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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, M% h9 V8 }$ G# _; O% Itrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 0 e& p- W/ ?; S# f/ F6 t$ b2 H  z) C) G

$ \9 i# V1 F" P8 J4 f! Bfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ; O0 u8 k9 {5 @" ]" b: P
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deaest daughter.2 _4 E( V9 v' h

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; B7 n4 P+ H8 @$ nAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.0 j7 a6 U2 E" w6 x* \: B
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!& |% U  D. d6 e; a  C! g
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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