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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
2 `4 e8 B6 {" w2 {* X' V3 AI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
# f* A$ Y' s1 t5 }" x8 eDreamers
& K2 H5 u6 r6 s( k% c! E; }7 mSavages
9 L: j# H! q2 A* hPoets
3 z& U. c$ `- A# X9 G3 y$ B" qBuilders of canoes,
) r! e/ i7 G& ?- uBlack smiths
) r  E( o& i& r" _1 a5 CMurderers,
& l4 o7 ^& ?! v8 ?+ s% kRisk takers,: {( f, r3 O+ o/ Z
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
* W  `5 x( Y0 u  u: c' }As I think of what could be.
8 {: A9 }" q" M' |( T- gThe world is so big to me
1 x* Y- _( _* D7 q# f+ }8 _& PI wonder what it means to be
* x( V4 r% e& U0 ]I looked up at the star and smiled 7 ]7 q% {8 }" p! O) x0 d1 V
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。6 I! j* ^' B' t. }1 o7 [, P
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。! ^0 _+ q: P- ?, e
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,  _# \* {. N1 H" q8 p
A poor old Guy;
/ A$ y9 n$ D- s! J- e' wLegs in a bonfire,( i$ a, _( B, R$ Y- j. y5 A
Head in the sky
0 Q: |7 q) K+ g, |8 B* c$ [Lonely, with the feel of betray3 r. v( r& ~& I
Heart empty and hollow/ r0 X+ U) p# p. D
Alone I stand
( S& J  M  W/ {( y0 h8 lI am useless to all
2 Q& y' A" @: IBut I wish I were a dove
/ t/ `/ _  b" eGiving myself to the world, to the fire" q' {" s& x. `" u( B/ x
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind( W( Q6 b2 R3 [% V# R
I sent prayers to my god, ^; Z4 t; E+ W9 ~! r
Though he does not answer
1 G, ]& V; C" H* i) |: xHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。7 [; k7 Y0 n3 ?$ Q* ?
加油加油,经常写写!
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