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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, : O. f" ~3 \) u) y- ]# L
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  3 C5 A: m6 p3 F; }
Dreamers
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- c. G# @9 w" ~" `+ c2 p. @Poets2 t4 V) R3 V# f9 M' F
Builders of canoes,& B2 v0 _( Y$ ^4 ]- B: z
Black smiths9 B6 r, |! D4 m# E7 O
Murderers,/ y2 S; ]0 n% u: Y" |  H0 S
Risk takers,
4 R& E9 ^. A  F2 ~My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
5 K" _# n4 w. w3 E. tAs I think of what could be.
/ J/ u) s$ r& D2 fThe world is so big to me
( G- E1 n6 ^. LI wonder what it means to be
$ u6 B' v# i! j  ]% R2 I* e& EI looked up at the star and smiled
: y6 A! a& G, R3 M* xThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. ) K1 b  u- t/ X' T* R. j
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
$ |# V) F: c5 w( Q4 a; l0 T评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
$ t. \% ?+ o  {5 H& E. Y" h4 S顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
* b: T5 F4 v! p* \% a- n0 D' G: `A poor old Guy;" O: |" {; o& ^( i2 i/ ^$ |1 w3 Y% _
Legs in a bonfire,# g& g8 l5 p1 B5 z
Head in the sky2 x1 T5 z5 I: h  j7 a
Lonely, with the feel of betray
8 Y* H- O* y% {# `) \0 `, Z/ cHeart empty and hollow* V3 D) C' Z9 A8 u! U' o
Alone I stand
- _: X3 n: H9 h0 K6 c$ O; q" ~I am useless to all : F9 F2 u- F0 ~* N2 O
But I wish I were a dove
5 i6 l: R7 u; jGiving myself to the world, to the fire  m9 F" g: l; U6 Z. w; C
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
; k3 `# P! C1 E& c! H8 G8 zI sent prayers to my god+ S- i& y1 Z9 T; K+ |
Though he does not answer
% i0 G0 g" K7 \% RHe bless me with the gift of hope 4 U3 A" I+ b+ b) K2 h
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。9 E) I) n; h) V  E6 m8 G! H
加油加油,经常写写!
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