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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
! m4 `9 H7 [4 m$ x% C* W2 mI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
! R: ^) n+ ^) w. v# w: T$ o' IDreamers5 R/ w: Q0 m% Q; ~+ u6 J! S
Savages
9 X  i( E! D+ s- g/ T' ?: RPoets+ E3 _( G0 W& p
Builders of canoes,
' A6 D' L5 |/ S8 N! uBlack smiths
0 A+ @0 p" l0 A/ Q. Z3 }" O" JMurderers,
# {* ~+ p3 e; V# N# }Risk takers,3 `/ T- Z1 {! x7 ^$ ?
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
4 b! b, `: ]5 m8 ]- T6 V& F7 v  w9 nAs I think of what could be. / p& M1 I; P, R8 ^% [/ S9 ]
The world is so big to me ! a: ]' K1 F8 ?. f' S, y0 `7 d0 Z
I wonder what it means to be# L, W- S2 e0 q8 b  J& F; \# c
I looked up at the star and smiled
% X7 I6 H3 ~. v4 B* B, ]5 aThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
5 _: i' }. |; \, B5 P6 Z9 }评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。/ Z. V& _2 O; k/ n
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,$ G; H; f# |% k0 P0 {+ ~8 h2 W
A poor old Guy;
+ f2 Z- x6 [, {( q+ Q" z6 r% PLegs in a bonfire,
3 }/ [( W* L. V1 q% J+ SHead in the sky4 |% e1 J2 _( S: G! M$ U" N
Lonely, with the feel of betray7 S7 s7 R8 N' v) t4 w9 O2 b
Heart empty and hollow, n$ \" D+ K3 d( F
Alone I stand- C# A4 r0 t% o6 U
I am useless to all
1 v0 q* f, T: H: P3 G* gBut I wish I were a dove 4 k( G$ L4 ~) _4 ]
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
: g1 z5 c! I$ x" O1 _4 u, \5 GI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
+ K# ]: n' V5 RI sent prayers to my god$ b7 z5 e' v( o7 S8 e' R! a
Though he does not answer: m6 e# z, G6 M. u
He bless me with the gift of hope 6 }. j2 \+ Q! R! [
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
1 K" Y7 J! q. g0 a加油加油,经常写写!
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