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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, / _0 r( b* ^- f) C. v. h
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  % |0 L( y# G' g, h, o
Dreamers
/ F4 l( ^+ q$ L8 ]7 i7 M; TSavages! ?4 b2 P* x) o& s
Poets
- C0 X+ _: ^4 a7 Z+ XBuilders of canoes,
2 I- R; @1 E8 T4 m% F5 ~  q7 PBlack smiths
0 J% C, D( g) U$ b$ l2 SMurderers,
, e0 U$ y: \  s; O( m& o4 f. LRisk takers,3 O* _' N5 ^/ H, x1 `
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
* ]9 o. p2 X$ l- D) D$ L8 l; u- aAs I think of what could be.
# v4 T  j: u4 q# {1 g  [7 l( H! bThe world is so big to me
+ [2 z* H, c- q4 }. S9 sI wonder what it means to be
2 F5 h4 K# _2 |/ W0 @I looked up at the star and smiled
% M" {: ~. T9 y, hThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 8 ]3 v7 B1 F( y" u5 W' }: E% i; s
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; n0 C: w; u  a8 x$ l' P
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
: l! z0 t: Z; b2 i顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,9 q& z9 z, y7 G: D; {7 D
A poor old Guy;1 E! N- C3 m) D3 T
Legs in a bonfire,
- K4 g* D) B: E: v3 s$ QHead in the sky
. W3 o+ s$ M  `0 F  V6 y% [$ `Lonely, with the feel of betray
  g; i- y( s' a* jHeart empty and hollow( A( x3 p4 L, M, ~$ `9 F
Alone I stand
4 P3 s( B7 Z9 x* TI am useless to all ! }% n' M) z3 ?: j
But I wish I were a dove 1 Q: A" m) b! ]9 {0 f
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
. K# }, X  }/ A. {2 ^5 j' d* wI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind* M- j0 y8 T, |( K6 }$ x
I sent prayers to my god
$ H" u% o) {9 C6 ]: S9 YThough he does not answer* a( r& T3 g  T9 z, S1 ~" W
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。& o0 w* J# V5 v$ L* }! h
加油加油,经常写写!
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