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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
, L7 k7 o/ b6 CI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
; \, |5 ~: j0 ?Dreamers
1 u" ]) ]$ ~6 T, i7 z/ I  \Savages0 q: I, t! \. }
Poets
& s2 {) X. k. b1 i- d- VBuilders of canoes,7 K0 A+ P! \& \% s6 [# L% }
Black smiths+ D' h: k% m1 e
Murderers,6 o+ [- l- Y6 {, Y7 ^% o
Risk takers,4 F$ u; R6 }; _! X
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
+ F0 U$ w" O! X- J# F' ]/ d; _As I think of what could be.
! ?& o3 }- S! [  E  F4 u+ R6 a4 cThe world is so big to me ' P0 R& Y; a+ ~) R9 T- n
I wonder what it means to be& e' O1 R% `, c
I looked up at the star and smiled $ P  i3 O, P' T9 S3 _0 d
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. , C+ x/ Y4 ]# j; ]  N
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
, X1 L- e- X8 a  k7 ^2 B评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。+ m; a( G: V, @7 R' O3 m$ i! [5 C* X
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
5 b- l3 p. u/ l; z5 y5 qA poor old Guy;5 N# u7 z% z% f* r$ Y
Legs in a bonfire,
$ C0 a8 r; ~9 B1 J& x8 F4 L' sHead in the sky. Y1 J4 _; [. W6 Z/ f1 C- u" d
Lonely, with the feel of betray
# K% Z0 i# G9 ~1 ?1 g, GHeart empty and hollow
8 s! g% |8 C8 v. T6 oAlone I stand" ?) \1 J; p4 H. f/ O0 O% E. f
I am useless to all
1 A7 E& {; V$ H) I% s% B. E% DBut I wish I were a dove
+ i5 h, s9 P1 @$ C: NGiving myself to the world, to the fire
. _$ A0 i) z$ p0 o  ]& eI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
# C& R' u% F4 M4 xI sent prayers to my god, i( r2 d. u# ]2 K; M
Though he does not answer
! o' [0 {9 x: R* wHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; T7 A. l! r5 B& N0 R$ T+ j" m7 |
加油加油,经常写写!
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