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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, * S1 K! Z. Q# L3 H6 T; J$ M2 H
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
' t0 J" Q2 [; R' iDreamers
8 A1 w8 R+ {+ b4 mSavages* m# S& I5 ]/ a8 y
Poets
# c* q* P, D5 T. E% Z4 kBuilders of canoes,
; E0 m4 e8 h. |  LBlack smiths5 i% N0 s* w; F
Murderers,6 k. [% M# g# J8 S0 d, ^) t
Risk takers,
. \* Q+ ?' n+ _; U) zMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
' `, z' z% [# R; XAs I think of what could be.
& w/ E. C5 \3 y& Z2 v3 V8 a/ B0 PThe world is so big to me
; [% [% V7 R4 O/ `( |) QI wonder what it means to be
" W+ F  a) L2 G+ _I looked up at the star and smiled " A( `1 f: j# p: o9 v
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; v& o8 M/ E1 w
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。* x* P$ h4 O  G& L* r* m1 H
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,1 T$ e0 f% H3 V2 b' o- [
A poor old Guy;
, ~$ X7 N3 s( y, B7 T" `8 f0 R$ ULegs in a bonfire,. f  f) M9 I7 l
Head in the sky
; U7 r2 m9 \" J; W$ ]Lonely, with the feel of betray
% C" q% m% y5 u6 S2 xHeart empty and hollow
; h0 z+ e  [, s+ v8 vAlone I stand, E/ f5 L6 L  w. l- s- p; z
I am useless to all
( p7 _! m- W) f* }/ EBut I wish I were a dove
1 j, J' u" _4 E% QGiving myself to the world, to the fire& j+ G' l9 \; F
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind- u9 g4 l- I- R8 j: W, i
I sent prayers to my god
% v% c& D0 d: X1 d& H1 k7 m& R/ {* HThough he does not answer; @  [' E/ H, l% f2 Z! p( J
He bless me with the gift of hope ' H" B; S3 E, g- n0 W8 J

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。! N0 b5 h$ F- U; Y7 P
加油加油,经常写写!
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