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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, # _1 v& n/ `) X+ v
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
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Poets) @4 t% b6 A( J: l; r( I6 j+ e- N
Builders of canoes,+ b( O# o: U% G) R
Black smiths0 E" f% G) S- }6 A9 a. ~' V8 U
Murderers,
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My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 w5 K- c. ^& }# O8 M' x3 s  w7 U
As I think of what could be. 1 J5 o' B2 O9 _$ h! i8 V( }, [
The world is so big to me
* ?" C( y4 _' e, aI wonder what it means to be4 _# e# o1 W0 n
I looked up at the star and smiled
. \$ Y  D+ m) x9 ]/ ~2 |They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 1 U0 S7 C8 q; w# H: z  k0 G' Q2 O

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
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顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,) ]1 g9 s% `8 W3 l8 }
A poor old Guy;
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Head in the sky
. o( A  u- H7 N3 jLonely, with the feel of betray% y$ T: Y  ]9 f
Heart empty and hollow
/ u# [6 x! B0 v1 p3 x) _Alone I stand1 @$ Z7 I0 ]1 f* x0 H5 ~& J2 C
I am useless to all
/ G3 u9 e  X1 x* a. g. hBut I wish I were a dove 6 W. g1 K/ e. Z8 u) _1 W$ ^* o
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
' k9 s8 U& |$ c" @0 e. qI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
5 C+ d. j0 l, RI sent prayers to my god
9 k* Q& x9 O% C" K" V. D+ oThough he does not answer
& }9 }3 E  u' ~/ x( WHe bless me with the gift of hope 9 K- y. g- d. D8 H9 m& y# j

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。1 A! }5 X/ A: R9 G( E! s
加油加油,经常写写!
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