天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
2 J1 _1 s6 ?6 P  C% E/ b8 ~% pTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
, g1 x3 w, [; q8 STouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
2 O4 b) b) n. O8 w3 aSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
& f; V, Q. Q+ x% N2 SI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.