天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
* f) I: [3 |/ f- Q/ C% jTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

- G' ^* Y2 M$ [$ I4 I6 `5 c! l4 ]' N鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
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珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
6 k& x9 r6 z3 N8 ^) Y# wI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.