我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
2 v2 M, U2 P& K/ l( ~; \是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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& |0 [( O6 Q1 O: h6 E8 v8 Y9 eFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
" e0 O/ M) w( FFrom the colorful nature
" |( [. P4 Y0 W, v0 y5 d$ VTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
0 ~1 S% |) F" [7 O* wLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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6 b5 h# k! u( D( e+ lGood-bye, my happy spring;
' T' |* @% v* F# uGood-bye, my childish dream.
2 P; X9 }  v$ r1 p- p9 ~+ lI can prepare nothing;
# f& r( n4 l3 K  o1 F! AMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
3 H9 {6 M5 D) L0 H* KIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

: V/ \4 r3 O. l; i/ }[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
5 T- x: z) ]2 \  ^* F, Zbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
* K( R: U  ]' l) w! G夏天来了