我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
- e* S: C4 g; N" |, T! B$ k5 JSummer's Coming
& f, ^3 i* X+ p; J6 O* Y
Faster, hotter and sweater,
: n, X* M0 s% QSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
9 ?% o% Q2 S8 x( e0 jFrom the colorful nature
& H6 R3 s. t7 @3 R4 \To my life and dream.

& a$ e: a' x: w6 F% p) ?: |- X8 dFollowing the summer's step,
- q+ T* k$ h# h9 S  A3 ]4 kLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
& _6 U. v  Z6 lWashing my heart and soul.

6 }4 R0 o" C$ }! F3 W& ?; z0 Z7 EGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
& o* j( X7 Z7 w0 q" K5 _8 W+ [) }I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
; ]9 u' c& {3 sIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

6 y: r, l( a. `[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了