我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
9 p1 a# ?# b& ~" ]3 B3 P是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
9 T" e* v% G: tSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
2 L9 l3 d3 f' R$ aGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

( a2 E- e/ Q, KGood-bye, my happy spring;
/ ~3 T9 W* b; {Good-bye, my childish dream.
; ~8 @2 ?3 W1 Y  n3 c. W0 q5 \9 lI can prepare nothing;
0 P4 ~- p3 G6 EMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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6 R# t  x. L8 K- R一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
# _3 @/ w  i6 b8 xIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
' r3 C5 V1 @6 y0 q6 hbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
0 A% B( t' b! n夏天来了