我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
( o$ I% i5 ?7 L是十多年前的作品了——
! Y/ o6 C9 E# u8 A/ \Summer's Coming
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) |/ r5 a5 r8 X; i* f, nFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
$ ]" ]8 I' K  ]+ T2 {/ tFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
) m  S) Q6 Q' I5 D+ y. QLet myself go ---
9 V, u6 E3 B6 b  I) |) Q  IGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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& A+ h* x2 f) L  |& W# h/ O; u" \. `Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
+ M, d8 n- G2 v' W' K; G" O4 bMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

/ w0 J1 q; K6 Q0 T) e) ?[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
6 k7 c0 t( y3 g# Lbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了