我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
; `( [. _7 l5 o( x& J, m是十多年前的作品了——
# [, B5 z. G0 }' kSummer's Coming
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" C* [$ ^2 T" @2 L; P! ?Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
8 _* s- e  g9 B. K' LTo my life and dream.

* r, ~* t% N7 X# r( V8 uFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
! ]& g( H, b: DGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
' E' _' L8 \: r1 xGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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$ \) d, B( B$ d一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
! k8 P! H8 b! n2 D! g% \3 P2 `夏天来了