我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

2 O1 k- A5 |/ [4 R/ C4 O& J" mFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
6 M4 b- @0 Z4 ^* s0 \4 b4 gTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
7 p7 m; [4 @7 O. r5 b; }Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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  `) w/ b) L1 r4 r6 QGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
0 }8 u2 F& Z$ s& G! }My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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# x- H$ D$ ]# k一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
' i4 b( F" g% e: IIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
0 _' B8 @# O" d/ h, n0 W- a' {# t+ Ubut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了