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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. % `/ \) X2 u7 E; {
3 j1 f3 a; w! B 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. # l: ]0 M) x% n- G6 h. I+ a0 j
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2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. + B+ }: B7 b- O) L; n
: o+ a7 A0 A+ X# R- B M2 z4 J6 I 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. , \5 F& |) J% ~* j2 W! p3 a
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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5 Z" F9 u7 C( z) o* Q4 w# w6 Z 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. : W6 [* s( y2 c+ }* z% m
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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5 ]9 M q$ W2 Z 6. Their brain is still very young.
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改进: They are still immature.
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. $ i* Q7 R: t5 [& H9 t0 m
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. 1 T! }" E6 h( y: I& o/ I* p$ H
0 V; z6 P( W( \$ N9 _ 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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/ C3 b/ A2 m6 C% t% b; Z 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. , C# y4 C; g+ v# N
P A6 G1 U# G) U* @0 h! \! r 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. E2 {, R" ]$ W$ b j2 N
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. / v; h' Z; l5 l0 M$ N! ^& y
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. / Y, ^& J, c/ F/ W9 `: A1 K
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. / K0 C# y7 R |+ F9 P9 N/ v
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. ' f7 a! [2 E3 q6 `4 ?0 J6 ~0 O
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改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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" Q! a4 R3 }, p: f; L8 t/ O 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 3 @+ B3 J9 b( N* q% A# u; r% p! p
) u. U0 @; q' Q1 } 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 7 |7 n, H% n% d- [. R8 x8 u
. i' ^5 o2 x& ]/ l) o6 G/ S 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. , e3 `$ p$ a" m& \6 Z4 x. D. p# b4 y
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. , g- ~( }$ O J* Q, d0 ]* n
9 h8 ~6 A) y# ~( c- r8 P9 O8 ` 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 3 v5 ^" q% |, }& i
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. / r! f6 n4 E( F9 o
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改进: This knowledge will become part of you. / ]) `* f' H3 X- ]
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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# y2 Y% Z+ @( ]$ c }( ` C 改进: They cannot think straight. * _6 A+ m' h2 {( u( M t }
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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改进: Money can improve their life.
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 9 s i0 Z" u* L; d& I0 b3 P
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. * E/ X4 ?/ p; q6 t# W
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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5 k" S2 y; v4 u% Y3 I. @ S% V 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. + x! ~: B- D( V
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. ( W7 {2 [$ l9 }) [) ?$ u$ j
/ `, R6 ^ r9 n: T+ H& F 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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+ y" D" _3 `% z6 h: S4 p. x 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 7 _4 k% x5 ?$ d% P
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. ' Z$ |' ?6 c }5 X( f
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. ' @8 T- P" K( O0 D0 z! F. O
4 r9 y- X( q1 @: B 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. 7 b0 k4 ]. a( e5 P" U$ z0 p9 _
( r r" n9 G$ c r 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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28. What's about nonsmokers?
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4 l/ ~0 r* X" |$ p2 U' f 改进: What about nonsmokers? ' Y3 s) J# d6 ~, i# ?7 ^- f' X# w
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life. ! ? c1 _; u W/ a2 ?( [* | c3 m
1 y2 [" p$ g) l, }7 \4 ^5 g8 a: I9 n 31. I am not good at maths, but English
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 5 q5 g. x; a! |% Z4 l. J4 G) f) ^
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. / h! M. R4 A- {% u
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34. I agree the latter idea. ! @5 f: U7 |' j7 n$ Y1 V
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改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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9 i5 a |, {$ V 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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5 r4 A+ R- t( K% |8 d' O 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. ' ]) ]. o9 u* A9 I3 O
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. 3 X) m+ F; ?. r- I$ K
" p6 D! a$ P0 W8 Q& K G6 c7 B 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. . Z' V( {& K5 s r1 z, {
* Q' I2 I6 ^5 _# P6 v3 m! |4 S 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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+ b9 G h+ D- V2 _; V1 G' S 38. No one knows all the things. ! t% K# L, R8 S) G3 {. Q' f. E
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改进: No one knows everything. 0 h b. |$ b6 A
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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9 D* w9 ^# a% d- e% v `1 R- F4 Q: U 改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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5 t0 p/ d, }- l8 b" A 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages 1 B) J8 u2 _7 G) \7 P, m
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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% |; c* H6 p3 o; q9 ]: v 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. * P7 v3 }) _) v5 _$ o
& p9 Q* } e5 r: o2 Q' U9 y 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. 7 R" }) r3 b8 ~8 \, K
D2 ]* y/ \- O7 w& p 43. They will learn the bad habits.
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改进: They will develop bad habits. + L) \& f. q" n1 _* p* X4 _$ v
; G) J g& ]' Y 44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress. / F- I) Y, M2 S( S8 m e$ `
4 M. G' T8 m% ~8 Z" X' ` 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. L6 [$ T1 D4 [% q/ Y; r
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. 6 U$ M+ R0 X) Q4 A
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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, j6 O; L) y& ~/ _" M/ M 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. " p- r4 z' l2 p# A% F
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. - r S) p+ F/ `& e' c8 }/ H
; H8 [% w* s8 M 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. $ l7 i7 u) e. n% A$ o
7 B' ^; m6 m, E: z- B7 |+ T 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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0 q* O: ?8 R% c) m9 w 改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. # T. S6 b% X* k. G& T }
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. 4 T' c! n7 S. M! W, ~
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50. I felt alone.
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