锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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. f3 ^" B/ {/ h% F- o- \& n　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

0 Q3 x- f+ D: q' n- r0 j　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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+ P; A* o- V% d& u& @3 r　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

' }7 J# [% [' I7 H! f& ?+ T9 h: W　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

: e) l+ A4 b% e' S3 O, g　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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1 H2 i5 }( ^2 c　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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0 E* x- a# w3 U8 r" A( c% o" s　　改进: They are still immature.

( N1 @" t6 b) c- }　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

' m" j* ]7 G) M; ?2 q) E  E　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

3 d$ @9 e3 e3 {0 T( g" ?  Z' x2 `& s　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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  M3 q3 |3 v4 G+ I　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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% u* C2 ~  }1 P* A2 \/ O　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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  q& h$ M( x& W5 z. h$ c  z4 e1 ~4 |　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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! `" }: U2 H8 ^' `5 M7 q* P　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

7 Q* R9 }+ a8 h6 g! X; V6 G　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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5 R. g" s8 ?: r* o  y; `% Q* g  m　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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5 F# H- `% T( x  f, U( Y　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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! Q* d6 w4 T: ]1 @" C; `  p　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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  F+ f" ~% e; I# G  `- e6 D; {　　改进: They cannot think straight.

" j# z$ d+ F& K( q　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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! d% s& C+ @) P+ j4 {　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

3 K4 I1 D0 Y1 @/ B1 b5 T+ v　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

$ S' @" F. ~' M; ?, N　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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9 T1 J+ G& M8 o& s　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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. k9 I3 m& O3 r　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

9 ~- C- d  y; D5 g  S# v8 w- h　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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: ?) S- `- Z- e- q　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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" |& v/ {! t* t+ J4 _- s2 S2 Z  W　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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) e/ r$ R1 B7 t8 {! t　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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+ T# A/ ]# o; U! P; N& ]　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

4 `% @  J) S9 B4 |4 f6 N* {　　38. No one knows all the things.
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1 p: P8 Q3 j2 _9 v& l　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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8 [3 f2 [5 }) n8 s. B' Q　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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9 V  B2 M* @  b8 F: o- S　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

  A5 ]5 C9 ^' U2 s　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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: ]9 p% m, i, |* G　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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5 _! }% M* M, }2 n. ?: S; U　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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% O9 l# s* ]3 U" {' ~9 h5 r　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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3 z' r6 r5 t! }! O9 p$ r2 I* p3 P　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

. _. t* |- x) Q( \" ~　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

7 K  F- A) N8 j- B　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

( l2 |: g5 Y9 N' T% }　　50. I felt alone.
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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka