锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

$ X8 ?( s9 V# u　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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6 |! W6 ~5 ]1 j3 \　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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' R! J9 k9 z5 g  }$ {* R9 @　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

: U1 ^$ B5 r' ?& j% t  i　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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% i& p* R! o; c% n8 t　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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$ O4 Q  |2 ^/ g) \% @3 H　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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: I6 h7 i: V7 H( l2 n" L& w　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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2 a' ^! }; U' S# e+ F　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

" W/ O4 q, Q0 f% O　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

6 I- r7 n% Y  U6 k. _　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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/ F3 X, |& q$ T) M　　改进: Money can improve their life.

9 J! E3 V7 Q. a3 F2 F! k　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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8 U/ H9 }8 ?. i- l6 ?1 ~/ [- N　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

9 V& R! `) o# y# I; t　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

" p- B8 n- i  S　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

3 l1 P3 z/ b/ }, p6 C　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

* l+ t1 Q' R: I　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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- v8 g7 G! X0 l$ G% D$ f　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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( N+ T/ y! L4 ~, d2 B( o) q　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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1 h5 V) a8 Y% m　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

5 ~5 y1 g' M2 ]  O% y5 Y; u　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

( C% _' I* K  e0 o* ~* w　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

. A9 `5 i* h4 P1 M　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

% q$ i- ^; U  S3 ^　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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! R. X3 a8 i* b/ t. H+ n9 Y% Z  f- ?% W　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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! n1 z4 D& \- }8 b$ r& l　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

. C# q& |9 D$ n　　34. I agree the latter idea.

" U- Z0 Z- t- V) e0 I0 _, m　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

( X8 \0 V5 Z+ ~2 O1 Z　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

& w. @% r# ]- I" C: D* m　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

8 Q8 [" Z: h. i0 r　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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. \7 ~  y5 B, ^( h6 h4 u　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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) {8 i+ a& K: R0 q- D8 y　　38. No one knows all the things.
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1 p9 o2 c$ L# n) I4 E" E" J　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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. O9 ?, y; y4 p! b5 O　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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7 g# f( L6 v2 ]2 _　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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0 J! `, B( m; k' O( y　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

, {2 N4 g: u% F* F9 f# f8 h: S! b* C9 @　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

$ E4 D7 g# L! E  q　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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' r% W$ C* S5 N! V  ~" ^　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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, r8 C" X7 x% ]6 b　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

, R4 A+ {9 a$ A9 o7 {　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

' ^3 N& [0 ~" A- ]　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

. J! D" a! y* d5 y! S7 C　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

3 d9 d/ V: f; Y# I　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

! _7 J% ?$ |$ W/ h" A. H2 P5 J　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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- g! T+ {& d; e! i1 p" Z　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka