锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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5 L3 c  S* a: F! r# F　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

& }. F* N5 A, @: d, p　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

1 N  D* c! W5 G: k' u; r　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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1 m, F& O2 l% r# A　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

9 d4 e% p! S# b; K8 A　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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3 n- `: X! O4 G　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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  o) H+ K5 i3 g- \　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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' O+ }/ t8 x& E! p　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

  `5 k$ @- |8 O4 G8 ]　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

9 M3 h- n7 F* D( b# n# w　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

( }3 Q/ n! D: R2 x　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

5 N9 i& M* H+ X4 c" N4 w　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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  y; E# c* C3 j8 o$ q5 x2 _/ b　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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$ w9 k2 _0 J- g2 X5 B& m$ x　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

, g+ G! h: S4 w( R1 Y  P　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

8 O' c: ~9 Z) v1 _  L- L0 b　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

+ d& V. f2 V# `- m3 f$ \) Z　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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: R% ~# V2 D% C) j　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

; u" G: y3 X, `$ X* ?, X0 ?: ?　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

/ r1 Y, R' T8 c+ g7 c　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

& t1 c/ D5 Q' d) S& d- e　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

, `- W+ X, R6 X2 J) J　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

  Z- U) p5 {7 f　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

& @/ L: C) F) R- f+ u+ w　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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( c3 [0 v* |- a: O　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

, m/ C! N% u6 ?( Z: p# H) v8 p　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

2 N5 m' f: D: T3 d7 n+ a8 w1 O. c　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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# b( W5 |0 K. \　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

/ W& e! g2 I1 n( v9 I9 Y' \　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

4 f6 c/ w" G2 e: ~7 x　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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+ W/ p0 v& G8 g; B　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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5 M/ _$ H* W* g  U+ f　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

! s; T) h$ ^  e; J& T' s( c　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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8 ^. F/ ^  y6 H: J2 c( c3 I; c( s　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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5 i2 {9 n, w1 Z( b& V" m9 u　　38. No one knows all the things.

$ b! z/ T. T% W) N" D　　改进: No one knows everything.
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% E$ V/ x$ S* j$ [　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

6 \& {6 [3 T, c　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

( p7 t! {; C! m; y% J　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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3 k# t5 [, }- c　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

& G) Q: u' S$ n　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

# z8 x9 O+ g- J. o) X# L8 N　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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: |, U3 w( M- }( K( D( E　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

. a' ?7 c$ u% T' k　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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' }2 a  B. y, z$ U0 v　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

7 h' }" d. ]& I3 P3 Q: _; N　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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$ Z8 i& |* Z. C9 K% }　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.
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" G, w7 B1 `7 y: w　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka