锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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: \- Z! j3 h. P( v$ T* F! i　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

/ S! U, j$ ^- A0 I8 K5 ~! N　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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. z! F5 ~$ P. ^" E　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

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2 i) @5 b. t  V9 @+ F0 u6 y　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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& p5 i2 _5 ?/ x: B4 J( i　　改进: They are still immature.
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! i" w- [9 i7 V) Z0 ^  ^　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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; C8 m- [2 G( @　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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2 f; n2 `' _: ?/ q7 B+ T$ W+ ^- M　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

1 v5 g4 d% y* z/ Q% P  c　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

6 a  A8 P& j, I& c# J　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

& U1 Y: d$ @" l4 A, y　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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8 r. Q3 ~8 ^8 d　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

  l' l! E0 F: }- K9 V　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

8 ^5 K6 Q8 \: y　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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. @0 L: j2 L) g  P  B5 s　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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( L+ Y& B. h& D3 J2 T) ^　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

( K- _- ]* P5 H0 H# ]5 i7 z　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

' ^/ p; b8 A$ T2 j& o　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

. u" t5 ]# [" h7 l; `" j+ j) @8 k　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

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6 [5 ^7 p. R* J% |* ^* Z　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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/ r# R" i' F; V" l' F+ e　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

* P3 M  A6 X: e0 R0 B　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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! m4 d' e" q  ~- y　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

5 Y4 l. Y' ?4 t　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

" v( p( x: C. }　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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* ]9 Q, @  T' G: o9 ?5 H　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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) a# f7 J9 a' H2 s1 B6 N　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

9 I6 n: h! |% }9 D5 @6 a　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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9 A# y% K4 T! A4 m9 }* P/ \　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

* ~, R0 I6 D( Q2 W! t) Y　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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; J+ U; T0 {* x  @: h　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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. B1 Y9 ]4 e  E+ v　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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) Y5 f6 L! Y# `9 c: F1 W　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

, z( k& F" f5 p% K　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

# a' g: X/ x1 G% W" @- F1 `　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

# N$ o4 B" I5 K1 l& p- Y) }　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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+ K3 ^9 ], N; I" ?9 z' W/ C　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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0 x5 _0 c" u. Y　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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% [7 M# Y+ A1 l. L. G　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

. e7 Q9 q$ T( z, s　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka