I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
7 p& T: Q, V6 V7 v3 a: b风也急风也劲
( j/ \% i% N; {0 B4 |# l* ^% Z9 Q白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
% [; m0 X7 ^# C: C% H水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
% q3 @" V) [1 s" }+ k万水千山总是情
: P# |; i- W# f, S5 m# @( o  [聚散也有天注定
2 `- v* k' B6 _1 s  \1 a不怨天不怨命
但求有山水共作证
! S- Y3 b6 e/ ]8 gThere is love everywhere
Option1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
" O4 L8 o% |5 W& T8 c5 L, tThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
+ R9 M5 n% |7 O" B- OLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
- ?; a4 z' b* ]: G4 UMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
" v; E: B9 g) ]  @However, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
0 {( z" Z2 z8 PLet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
6 R3 k* W' v; S0 O人生路上甜苦和喜忧
$ [! z5 f' D4 m% J. m" K: l  T  h愿与你分担所有
1 u3 g  L6 g0 @5 a" l难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
1 ~& p. V) W5 \) ?8 {, T2 |谁愿常躲在避风的港口
4 `$ p8 J, e* M( @" j宁有波涛汹涌的自由
愿是你心中灯塔的守候
0 J3 l0 y- Y* e! s在迷雾中让你看透
8 z; Q: w8 }; H- c' h$ d阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
+ v2 l0 @8 V! ~5 a, r: j( f珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
. q% I2 b. i2 X- ~# V; b3 o' Q阳光总在风雨后
请相信有彩虹
5 d* G' s) d3 r# q8 x风风雨雨都接受
我一直会在你的左右
# C6 A+ @, r9 ?  Y5 F% S  y( S) \2 i' }There is always sunshine after raining
% {1 V+ i. n. [4 p2 O2 p8 K" F$ M' DThere are happiness and sadness in life.
I will share with you everything.
* p. y# t$ H- y) j, XIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
& b+ }% q, F: r6 m% U/ ~* XWe get together and bravely face them.
2 F% k9 U  [- Y' e/ \6 [( C% DEveryone does not want to have a common life,
1 x0 x9 N/ Q% n; k2 ^9 ~9 Z  U" Q8 fWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
+ k+ @7 {! S2 m) YI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
0 @8 @3 J: R( W3 ?9 j, OThere is always sunshine after raining.
There is sun above the black cloud.
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
7 [$ l4 G8 l+ m/ }& MI will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
/ J# G, c$ K3 S/ p; o
9 T* j  [) A/ ]) M轻轻地捧着你的脸
为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
1 z/ @0 Y9 ^+ O- ^1 U深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
5 Q! x% o, r" I7 z3 d紧紧地握着你的手
- p2 u3 c( f0 W' ]" E6 G7 Y这温暖依旧未改变
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
: H& }. d! B  i8 {& {我们同风雨我们共追求
" l0 t* w$ o6 S1 e5 d我们珍存同一样的爱
  O0 c' V2 n% U5 |) q! D- L无论你我可曾相识
  `$ p) w1 F# o* _+ S无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安
6 W* |- i, n' l! W) ^
Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
; q  L2 R; F( W! z. _/ L+ {My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
5 C, q9 K+ I; P2 ^; Z: |4 q& XStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
% k9 H, B7 {4 f. G- yTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
We treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
6 c9 n% h9 w% M2 I% P, ?: D, P  kI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
8 `; a' y- L- F2 d5 M+ x1 x看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
% L3 W2 V. o( R春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
+ _6 o4 D3 g# H/ j让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
5 S7 \% T& z- W; s抬头寻找天空的翅膀
候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
2 ]; r7 P% z; _, D燃烧少年的心
! n& S, c" i0 I/ d使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
# y! H) z. K+ K9 H8 _# Y唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
$ H2 _% M0 E8 Z# V让我拥抱着你的梦
" x4 c6 v  f' m# V让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
0 G. X6 }+ q4 f" `! [1 Y充满着青春的骄傲
$ i/ i1 @+ m8 P% \& C为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
" ]5 `, U) {" {: `谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
: `7 Y. Q1 v6 e# q- l带走我们的笑容
* j3 ^! v" q& e6 b+ k( k1 a5 c5 y青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
让久违不见的泪水
  U6 F& b$ e- [/ j: Z滋润了你的面容
唱出你的热情
# c7 p/ o. l, E0 V伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
6 O; f" ~$ B7 B+ i为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
( j$ s8 S' ]5 Y! U轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
. a, f! r0 x' @9 J0 y( l) L9 L; Y: _慢慢张开你的眼睛
6 ]- J, x' q# L: T0 b- i7 h看看忙碌的世界
& Z, R* z" U% F3 }是否依然孤独的转个不停
$ I, L: {" D# w. I# L日出唤醒清晨
3 H+ p: K' w6 I4 c& T* A  D8 Y  q. S大地光彩重生
让和风拂出的音响
. Y% E& K2 {) J3 e, ?( ?4 t5 T谱成生命的乐章
唱出你的热情
& x; K5 j$ G; g: c% o% P/ @伸出你双手
" D. D0 i+ o* {7 F: J让我拥抱着你的梦
6 G  S. X+ P! w9 w! o让我拥有你真心的面孔
( a1 @! t1 X0 ^- z0 {让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
, }2 \  k; B7 d2 W+ c6 {6 y让我们期待明天会更好
& D9 x+ ~5 \, C% P: n! x# jFuture will be better
/ [; Q; U. h( ~. L, u7 BI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
, ~5 q9 e5 W8 I/ @I cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
( D# E( O, g4 \; t# X7 N+ XIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
  {9 F1 U0 \1 _& QI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
9 c' F$ f7 ]0 F& |5 t5 a8 i0 V0 XLet’s sing with burning passions.
/ s% _( @/ V6 f, k9 h- m! ~Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
3 J* a; W! e% J, ^& {2 cEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
- e5 r5 |) d$ K# J4 BWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
, r' Y, }6 |4 p6 XLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
* Y( h; @* W3 H7 CLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
: l' D- J9 d" FLet’s have the same dream
, V& ?) m- n: v/ c! `$ ^) rLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
2 w8 q5 L. F0 y) [I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
# d. u4 K$ a- v8 L$ y And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
& x  s' A3 o3 T3 O6 eEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.