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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,0 p, ?- R' ^0 _$ `/ s
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 5 i1 t' q6 M" ]
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
) s% V0 V- t+ i现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
- O$ r1 E" f: J梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking." L, r1 R% K# ?8 `
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
* F' A8 x5 V8 c4 s7 v- X夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.8 F* R( S1 I& a/ C9 t
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.: x4 a& o, I& |* G3 s0 ]8 r
就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.: q4 P7 g2 I( J4 S( i( t
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
* T7 D: k3 r" t那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
5 }6 l6 d# K5 ]0 D% ?0 N世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
: M) {& I# M9 N8 A/ x, d* g昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
, l1 L+ n! e+ t; l想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.1 n' I( R, n. u3 |: @% P
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
1 t( m; |, A9 T J. u+ y, R3 j6 i% {寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?7 K/ p, i& A8 c
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.- d3 G( p7 R7 @6 @
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
, l- L/ _2 T0 X8 V' e最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
( M7 s1 Y6 e8 n% y" M多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
8 b9 J. J- v9 s+ j! t8 k" pWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
/ N% P$ G% o3 z+ g多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
+ G. O6 w( q6 p4 d不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
$ `& V+ B8 N) ]% y+ r5 J多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, , J/ `! `3 }5 c3 ]' R( X5 ?0 u
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 @: S3 Y3 f) _0 k" a9 t$ w多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!4 r/ w( O8 y0 `
永难平息的泪* J$ ^( p E8 W' S$ o
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
; P4 Y1 b* o3 S1 h+ L~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.- M0 d4 S5 F6 _ l8 u9 G6 [
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.& B1 o4 b. F# p: l' u) k
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
( q7 c- d$ e! z2 R3 R, W你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
* d5 s/ D8 o0 ^3 u- p, S' |一抹微笑；
0 P$ B- v( X; i8 |& u一个手势；
0 C% i, d0 F/ I, z" b一片话语，
$ T) l t, u& [0 ^: V& k愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
7 k' G2 V* Z: p! T q明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
- u& z( c$ G" E; Q6 \; M心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.4 s7 k3 V* K' w- i- w5 D: r
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling. Q5 {: E% L8 z4 ]& x
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
7 x8 R5 T5 X. q3 s( G起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,' e4 e+ F# f- z2 J( c9 V$ o, _
我并不以为然。
$ d% y) {# \9 v% i; d: n. L可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed ( |0 k5 [% J2 Z; H2 {. N9 P
慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
: G; }- p5 n1 x" h; G8 W8 N被一种情绪所左右，" s, o g4 ]0 U" j5 K: G$ U
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
4 c7 ?6 T4 v) L. N6 F即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
3 X6 d8 N4 j" |0 J# A也不问我是否喜欢你，6 d- V9 H# s( ^4 T) R, j/ y
对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.) \- u6 m' ]( h, z* s0 Q
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you, z' a/ }$ I5 ^8 X
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
- T# i7 c0 f. g% B心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
4 j+ o% i6 Z/ Z O* T% W$ v然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 3 p) Y+ u8 ^; d: ^0 h' k
你的身影已化成一种氛围，! E; V: y3 l: J/ o; W
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.( L9 J" x0 q! f, B
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
; C, w% I; p9 T1 ?. y1 L. Z随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字. r+ q \ z0 h9 O
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
i9 E3 c0 g$ q一种声音，and your voice; X9 }! ]; \+ d0 P, |
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
- X7 j8 |: [5 V5 Y5 y7 ~掺杂著幸福的感觉。: Z+ e$ D! c) X" Q2 g
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
) G; m1 m3 x# z& N- }6 F象雪花般撒落在我的心田，* S2 a1 k, s* X" ?! Y: P( f
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
7 V9 ~+ v2 C" N' f. t K纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。4 }. X, [9 a! y) p7 E/ ]5 j) r y
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
1 }! s) ~5 n" X: T/ z有一个能够让思念的人，
' v- `3 O# _. B其实也是一种幸福。' i& g C9 H2 ~3 _" J ?" @
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. , i+ _& R# q) C5 {# P4 p
柔柔的海风，
) o7 T% b- h1 p& f# B0 X+ Z甜甜的夏天。
7 c) p) |. y8 N3 U# y/ `一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
$ b0 y$ S. A( D( Y u$ Q0 C- \只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.
$ L8 ^/ L/ P4 v仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
7 R, D0 M3 X+ t- G想和你有共同的情结，* x6 U2 H% ]" e
共同的心愿。
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0 ~. z7 I( _9 u/ P好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
& X4 ]; a* k5 D( v$ N- h一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together9 D6 t7 X4 K7 m8 k D5 A$ Y, s" l
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
+ ]- D! x1 k. e$ C' A8 @1 A或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.8 i1 O8 [" h# s/ f; }
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
. V5 q7 t8 t* W# v, z我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 7 _" h& ?# G: A9 C2 q# B6 X8 v
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”) U& v' ] G6 s! T/ ~
或是轻轻的一吻，$ z/ z$ b3 e. C8 T/ ^
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』9 R* k' z' q8 T9 ^
就足够了. That is enough.
% @, I9 T4 U9 Y这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
+ i* E/ Q! W8 K+ X8 y6 ~终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
) s: w# Q) _" D萌出了芽，, H$ @+ ^5 i) s9 e
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
( z" M, l2 D3 N6 L# G浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
, C" G8 g/ t# b: o0 P, Z如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
$ g, J4 Z! I2 `( Q能够牵著你的手,
$ A/ {7 p( o& @$ e% f那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.% a& Y" H$ E/ @8 B0 V+ N
让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
, V( Y6 V& `- r% ^ l* ]$ N4 Q慢慢地细读，; F* v- f) G4 Q3 k, e$ Q1 r
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 7 H7 G8 }+ T8 x- C
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me 3 j/ d4 ^* @0 _/ g* v& ~& a P
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
- U4 {8 x0 `6 |; U0 W) x就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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