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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 ; f5 W( [# L# a7 H- _0 ?
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 2 c' q- x) w# b3 m; J. F1 r3 w6 k
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
+ m: D, e, {: J; P. R) a3 {/ b% z- q% WThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
; l6 _/ L8 V1 O- JWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
; @( c3 q9 a4 s& T  V: g7 b0 C2 FA is superior in another way, this is… + \! L+ w2 ]# Q+ n" U, c
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 8 D# t* `# J$ G
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... , @: j& a0 r# |+ K9 ]6 A

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) % j. q4 q% Z. g# N6 Q! d$ C. i  U
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$ V1 l& i2 z! O: s. R" e9 QTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
$ M) g% V7 I! ^' J( iFor A, A 的一个优势 ' u: a- s4 {5 u. K, m3 b
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
1 W; `7 u+ n' V) {+ L- ]Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
" L7 t! y0 w' ?on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 0 ?1 i  _% R3 p2 R- D0 b: Z  W
moreover, B的优点2,for example… / m' E! t8 \) m  f9 S( G
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 8 m1 n* w" [8 @8 S8 _& @

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- l' a0 o! {# {6 [4 t, ]4 d(二)单一观点式
, x* i# W% x* _4 b5 j" W+ R2 a1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) , Q6 U+ E7 i1 ^5 z
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
; r5 t4 \* k7 a+ g% v, H1 eAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
+ ^- Q7 F8 @5 x' m7 c( DThere is no denying that… * y( w% E% c0 C: A2 x6 p2 w6 w  f
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
  N+ k) m$ C5 x1 P; f# ^7 iFinally,…
0 C# E+ h! i. U( TBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ) y2 X8 E9 E6 Y: I6 h+ V5 s
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: X$ A9 ?+ b( A0 ^2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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" y4 r6 T+ f# q+ l# g# c' z, B/ W: h(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. # f! s! \: `( f, |& M
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! B5 T% U# V0 A& p4 r
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 L; ~& H$ R8 H: c) Z) B! }: gA is superior in another way, this is…
0 Q% I. P2 G' W: TIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 3 d- X  |3 v/ g! C+ V3 f7 a& a* g
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 0 C6 m. T  m; g! Y6 V5 @  E& R+ Z2 u

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$ _3 q  q2 J2 f- LThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ I1 u; ^$ ]$ {  k1 d6 @" x7 fWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
; U7 j8 ~1 v8 n5 O4 V- B9 t0 WThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… # Q' S3 `1 ]* }0 W1 w! y
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
" b) W: O5 P3 cC is superior in another way, this is… . Q8 H4 I2 R" q
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, N8 V* {  N: O' T; k+ pFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
! `4 i& L" c' r0 u( i(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
: V5 l) s  r0 a2 j& x% @4 H1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
. @: ?* U* y9 w4 i% i4 tAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. / T& ~1 n. B& M" q$ a! Z0 G
One of the primary causes is that… 2 S, B3 t$ q% N0 C* G% L
XXX also results from…
0 `- d2 ?$ t8 k, n1 d! F6 |/ F… is responsible for xxx, as well.
- N% }5 |9 }: k7 HTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. % T  ]: g! @% I* e  e& q2 D+ |

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
, t6 u( z/ P7 o2 K1 ~0 f, O/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
7 e( Q: m9 p( S+ ^: T7 D7 j/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… # o) ?  v, e8 ~0 U* A$ m
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?( ]+ ~* E/ N9 A- R3 m
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架., a8 B2 ?( |3 @3 D
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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