TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
. ~% M3 C. Q/ o" s* s( F(一) 对立观点式
; {5 X! n/ ]$ }: v+ D2 a1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
: C3 ^5 L. O! h+ n' Z6 z' `The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 E' _! B) X) MWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ \) }" l4 M# ^% \( b5 W7 I4 MIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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  I, W( X1 U$ i: H+ J- W2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 C0 ~0 b" }) {0 v7 Q2 r. gFor A, A 的一个优势
) @% e+ g2 z+ i' NWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
1 G: P: X6 y* \' P/ f+ ron the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
3 D7 q3 K7 Z" C4 Z  w! Xmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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) U+ \2 H5 ~6 b* O! W(二)单一观点式
! z; \2 [: ]+ w0 v# ^& D1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
1 B( l( c+ e8 [4 M1 ]1 }After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
; Z. n, Y+ I! U% [! oThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
4 L% K9 M1 P% U  a! y1 N2 ~5 RBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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2 a- Y( p4 P; [  X9 j5 D7 w２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
  z4 O5 j3 y$ j3 n/ |/ DThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
# r% z7 d3 C* C1 o+ NWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
2 s' K9 b4 j; u! P2 w( C* J4 wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 ^. ?* Z( Z5 Y" }1 J9 p7 J0 aC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
' Z, A3 W9 ]# G% n; b(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
3 p) ]7 `0 I7 s; V& }6 F$ YAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
# o6 s3 g. t4 Y! N5 pOne of the primary causes is that…
3 L3 c, u' u( W4 UXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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% `0 ~# c' L  i$ @There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/ d( P" Q5 m( R4 x/ u* y/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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' S0 v+ z7 |1 t  yIn addition/ furthermore

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) g; H' s$ J& ]  v0 V5 pIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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- |8 [  f7 U2 Y0 J/ a, }再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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