TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
+ G+ M( N/ Y' M7 P3 D! X% ~/ h1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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; R+ l) C9 Y; b" j. c6 t# J+ z(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
/ _, d9 u$ E; [6 U/ \! r* zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
4 k  w1 o1 F% w% k, W6 ~1 DIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 O' ]  M- Z* S0 fFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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8 [" J- Z- y  [7 `- i+ A2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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% T0 P7 N0 q; JWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
$ W3 P5 _9 k0 Z( G( ?2 e! ~# Lon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
$ U: T/ ?: S' o& }1 K# y% A3 a& mmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
: Z) A7 D1 ]& r7 Z" [- m7 @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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6 [/ o4 R2 @- E, I5 Z' HAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
2 A& D) K9 I7 x0 v: D' HThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
3 p% j: m$ o* RFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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8 [" _7 w9 o4 |3 F! \# B; [(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
1 v* k  Y" D& N7 [7 b( \7 hThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 s- N: k6 K# H; L5 T: {8 _& |+ zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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6 c! U7 j: _1 L6 r& x3 p  ]There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
* |* x. ?* M* J2 ~4 pThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
9 l% R: R2 n$ O7 M& Q% W/ O& KC is superior in another way, this is…
2 f6 c6 |8 r+ c6 F  h+ Z+ |$ \From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
# G& x% d' |3 o  f& a, ?Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
1 h0 V8 F% Z" B. Z# JOne of the primary causes is that…
, C9 B. a6 T2 TXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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" f6 X- Q# i" g  Q6 I8 c! I; m# ~There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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1 g, C0 j4 d; b& m2 b& iOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) a" D5 q; I" Q6 \/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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; ~! {" L9 N  wa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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2 m" _0 E& v( p- F& y% U7 |In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]