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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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2 M; |6 l3 t# p+ W* F' N+ ~(一) 对立观点式
6 F; s; B) \: M& i- g1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
3 n. q% x- O. o! ]" M1 [; G9 b7 sThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… " c( ^" c7 ]; H% a" D7 R0 \$ a
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 m7 S, \7 q" q/ iA is superior in another way, this is… & b" l# e" M% Q9 Z
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
2 ?6 E. M: x( c8 U! R4 v" HFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) / A8 M5 r" ]* e' e- f7 K
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
* `; y& M2 X0 a+ z: yFor A, A 的一个优势
0 [, {3 v* y; ~' `, Q/ Z! l1 ^Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
8 A: S$ \9 x5 Y# |, WFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
) |+ p3 D: D7 z, q7 p1 @, `" M1 fon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… ; D! x+ v# v5 s! n# ~
moreover, B的优点2,for example… $ l$ b( c& a" ^3 O; Y$ L2 C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 0 f5 h1 D8 Z* W: n3 {$ M
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" Y' A( D9 G6 Z2 t0 ^(二)单一观点式
4 ?0 }! n6 \- y6 O$ `$ D( l: ^8 t1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. 8 z; t, L1 o8 i4 s) k$ C
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
3 C& h( K; T/ j0 ?There is no denying that… " M* W# z/ E" {! \! g2 M
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… & {# o+ i+ N  _) G4 _) A
Finally,…
& T0 W5 r+ P( [* J2 \( T3 U( e: cBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ) [: D4 s6 S; k/ x5 R9 i3 Q" h

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9 ]# E% m: }$ ~" {+ v! h4 Y2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) . M5 k3 `( |# B4 ^2 r5 v, B
(本类型只agree) ( T; `' P2 j8 g1 r7 p

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1 ]9 W& o3 R- |(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 0 }) C( D6 p6 H+ \) P5 u
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… $ I! ^  P) X" g! P. d
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 7 D  P' \* ~; O8 i/ |
A is superior in another way, this is… 6 B% k* p" |9 ?( h) T
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… : z% v& t, k7 u* H
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 9 t8 \2 v# H0 e( I8 @! r
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
" `. z& A" A% P: ?When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
6 Y# L0 n6 u/ j( D! @; _) mThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ! J' f! n; A, G% H
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 J* Z( b) E, AC is superior in another way, this is… ; G: @5 x/ C, Q2 _. `- z
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C ' @" ?9 q& w9 e# M
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
8 j, g- `, \* X( ~(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) % X) G4 X4 B0 g  d  ?: e

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(四)原因解释型
3 i% Z; ?  P2 W5 H' o0 C: G1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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0 T. g; ?9 L) E7 o陈述这个事实
4 R) Z1 x+ J0 q; l: x& u2 i1 k: RAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
  `2 M! l0 j+ G9 fOne of the primary causes is that… 4 Q0 I( }9 c! b- Z6 D8 ?9 g  ]
XXX also results from… 2 M$ d* y/ }& n/ U
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
$ d$ Y) Q4 Y! BTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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背景描述
& W6 S8 ~3 X0 g5 J, U( VThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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. }& n0 K; v$ e9 yOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
+ C2 J! C/ u- I1 S/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
1 |) ]: z* ^. V) T2 N/ d! Z0 M/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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8 G! s( a( I+ g6 U; L5 G3 oa more subtle point which we must consider is that… ) x% O" W/ Q  a- D
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?7 I* y1 t9 i: G* o, b5 ]

$ f1 ~+ b3 \1 K1 X! [' K再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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" ?5 g9 S% J- @" L[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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