TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


TWE作文模板汇粹
# |1 z' G9 ]; V1 X6 |$ W(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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3 U" i; C0 F+ K: n(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
9 a7 k6 x2 y1 e8 bThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
" u8 _& S( i8 J' v; KWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
) I" Q0 F! g4 s, U# h: ]/ M3 ^# q; T$ HA is superior in another way, this is…
' _. Z6 x( G# h+ e5 i2 \2 [It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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+ J, h4 Q( {+ C, j, p2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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, d# q& ?; N5 ~" B7 mTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; w9 B2 W$ k9 EFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
" s7 _' Y) B. {7 ]6 I/ s, }+ don the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
- X; r2 `0 A8 u  L( nmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.




(二)单一观点式
9 X* j% z0 {( F7 _1 i1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
) ~2 ^9 a8 y; a& E1 v( yAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
+ e6 V+ u1 A7 X7 t3 vThere is no denying that…
+ X' U: s; b6 G6 fAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
0 b7 a7 K7 ]  K- p0 QFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
) @' a" y0 I& d/ a% wA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



/ `" C! a* a' B) M* aThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
2 B6 C# j6 q9 y. J9 U; O8 L# J$ JThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
' I6 c: c* m4 c7 y4 G' _From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
! H; K- Z4 W4 S$ yAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
+ N* e; R5 V, T" W… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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- T' d6 k( H3 @1 B, t" }, R2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
# C7 D, `/ C5 e0 s4 W. l8 z. J9 Q; MThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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" b+ j, D; P8 c# T' T  yOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
+ f0 D5 T% }5 t! K/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
4 H% {% n0 [2 }2 u) [/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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$ ~9 A6 X' z. |8 r0 K4 Za more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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4 B3 x0 J6 o: O再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

( Y, {9 @: e+ K, M2 T9 b8 x[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]