TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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0 s; p- r/ S6 ^7 b' P. P' P* r(一) 对立观点式
4 O8 z2 K$ I( K8 ?' E3 f1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 Z5 j* Q) i6 N' E1 rWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
1 i: S* }9 M% Y6 U3 z# n3 Q! TIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
; B2 n* O$ b* j; {! mFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
0 L" [! g% D7 rFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
6 u0 w3 I4 X& \4 Y0 M1 y  d2 Von the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
1 N- ?% V$ w' t9 n, {8 q$ K6 mmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
# u. b6 i2 |! ]+ ?/ P1 u+ k: B5 Y& sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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& B& V/ x9 X6 {首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
; Z' k. E, W9 h9 F) l* F7 {After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
/ e: ^$ z; k/ hAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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3 I% j3 P+ L" C9 H; C２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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  j& F# d, D9 P' X(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
* b" ^0 I3 j7 {' N" C/ x0 jThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
6 O0 N" d. y0 A! K2 b! O2 LIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 |/ P& @2 P! C' g, KFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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+ B; y3 T2 {$ o(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



, \* U8 b1 f9 w$ o9 Q5 b$ fThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
1 G# H& G( J% S. qThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  V! G0 k2 R  bC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
! R4 u" K& E/ ~: ~% U7 {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
# w5 [2 h1 c+ @( z7 Y' v; z(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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. M/ f4 \. N2 _(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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4 C6 q5 Y3 }% @. E0 i, E8 y陈述这个事实
6 s3 x! \# b4 Y; S  Q9 ?- T, GAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
4 O0 T1 A& R' g+ _One of the primary causes is that…
6 n$ f- k1 C4 WXXX also results from…
- J! {. Q7 Q# M( P% u8 r, a… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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  f( P/ L8 A' W" I+ ~- ]5 I2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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) X' W& w8 ?7 X. t/ ]1 I& [a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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9 N/ m. Z5 r' t/ OIn addition/ furthermore

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/ b. D0 i3 a4 T, A1 Q) IIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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