TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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) s9 q1 P/ A) q3 f" E( _(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
; s3 L" s" y) ^$ a2 M* E6 BThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
' A8 w- w* f- |A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 `4 Q: B* B& M- \3 J! ], iFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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' M* M- K. X2 P+ U# DTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
  [/ y2 @9 l6 q' X1 SFor A, A 的一个优势
* [" ?5 D. I3 f( u- KWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
* @0 f5 \1 K/ |Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
: {+ R6 X+ y# ^From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
+ {7 e' i  p8 G' \: iAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
4 |4 o& H) @! q' N8 ]! |$ u- VAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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8 e0 E+ C9 V; v# B２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
- g* v7 M9 V; y$ AThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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/ {8 _5 ]! T6 x3 F8 ~. E(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
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What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
7 m5 c( ?/ m- k3 G! Z, DFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
5 e6 r% j6 |+ \* `; Y(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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(四)原因解释型
# u( g6 h* g4 K$ A* v; r" `" c1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
/ b4 M/ P% m" }: RAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
6 i# s2 [3 T$ [( t2 F. b0 h4 T+ x… is responsible for xxx, as well.
4 @( B! K& z3 y+ b: ~5 gTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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1 S" P3 l" P$ v, k1 {2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
) X4 p! K$ O( j8 P3 x& p+ uThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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5 a+ H7 [. ?8 V. @# Oa more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

# m7 F- k; C9 P0 b6 O, _# E" i再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]