TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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* ]8 ~/ s8 V: f, G/ N" \% K(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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7 F" E0 F0 n, c& Y3 m5 n(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 @* v1 u8 _9 ~" uA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
5 }( j! ]: B/ L  qFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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) B7 {4 g) r  q4 ]3 }3 ]7 b2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
; Z$ C+ y, F! x! _, rFor A, A 的一个优势
- K/ i/ y0 w1 z( `; XWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
8 l8 y0 R6 G) Z* {3 {/ {Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 G! N  q$ n5 X. Vmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
( i2 s3 b* @3 }( @, HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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: B6 M1 x8 T, P(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
9 x7 a+ Y$ B9 l' o7 V* wAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
2 ^5 f+ o2 q$ C. dThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 J! k) s1 }. s& A1 X7 A- ^" r2 {A is superior in another way, this is…
0 A4 i9 t3 A! f7 l2 \& zIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; `1 m+ i, `* Z# u) ^From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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: _! q( v1 a% e0 NThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
8 x$ j# S7 j/ r1 P5 l3 m; AThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
- ~. x* S- ?) p# z2 IFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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6 |7 K' C8 z) j/ S' l: |(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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3 ~, z, ?; p& J8 D陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
8 D4 s  I! z" E6 L) _& @5 }One of the primary causes is that…
& J, q6 z5 Y8 }/ C0 P% rXXX also results from…
- A8 D( L" g3 P* i- J! y6 D3 ~+ v… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* d- w8 z4 W: Z* M  p; wTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



* F. T3 C# R7 f4 f$ z2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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8 x6 Q# f# q  n, U" J. v背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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2 _, R+ @- m+ {2 a# a4 ROne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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9 r7 h5 D; N; E2 a  T- Y: o9 l9 wIn addition/ furthermore

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- q1 T, P6 b; m( s6 [1 GIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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* r* v5 j6 E# Q& L( a, R[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]