TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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+ p, B; X) ~1 `$ t$ ~) Y(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 y8 u- K# O) G, dA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
7 r2 O: r9 C; b% qFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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6 k# y9 l7 J9 Y- `. I3 q2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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1 w! K' }3 m( X$ j4 _2 }" uWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; \$ _8 A4 V, B! U" @8 R- _Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
% A4 y& P1 H5 T( Q( {+ Tmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
" C! |6 T8 J# E7 mFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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- \1 H5 w. D. s2 K) F7 r8 R(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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3 [2 r5 _% V1 J8 x* o首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
: G" s4 [: R$ @( `4 v1 EThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
& e: l7 z+ D3 b  zBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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9 j9 L2 C3 Z8 A5 _6 L２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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5 a+ o+ Q7 @" U2 g* z: {8 [It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
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C is superior in another way, this is…
+ P+ C  K( h1 X7 k) z3 i+ ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
+ `$ N8 e3 c3 q  ~6 b6 y(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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  F4 L  O, D. g(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
; K& t2 s1 O! U1 @' @  ^' n1 |One of the primary causes is that…
( B/ _7 E0 @6 }! Y3 YXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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* t5 W. X8 p7 j: @6 a$ `2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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" S# m% @- M8 rThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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0 G9 [! g- y6 V+ ^4 AOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
6 D3 z$ _' b9 ]" M% I3 e/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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3 C, V  |/ a- s- C! e: p+ G! bIn addition/ furthermore

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/ q' ?0 Y! n% m/ e0 f- `" W4 VIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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: Q- d: T0 `2 w[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]