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I just wrote a poem
3 V* N2 R; L% i( e t' eBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.. S+ _/ ]7 Y9 v; R) S5 t) p
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem- x+ T5 Y; N4 o
Thanks a lot!!!* ]5 t4 }. H- c1 ^
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 X3 R2 b! _- x4 [7 b( H Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
" M0 a, g$ e6 ~6 ^ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
* f* [0 }4 O+ ?4 ]0 G- F Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
, w7 \+ t d2 {4 F d1 u. u( Q1 H Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 K0 U& `* l4 D" X) ]& d+ | Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
7 F, D! O0 ?5 s2 A1 W- iHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
* s/ y. n) g7 p* D2 _ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
8 @ b* P! J- P/ J. l somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness7 O* k2 D& }4 L, F9 Y" t
somehow I lost myself inside again 6 e. L2 W- \2 P$ A
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog : g0 ~0 e# s5 O. i( r1 y
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
3 |. g" u! Q) ^& I; a/ @Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................% J2 e! }5 \, H5 E* l, C
Basically, I almost finish this poem5 Q/ ]9 e6 V3 T/ K+ q
I am 一个人de精彩# g. ?3 j, o( u! p2 h! c
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.7 m% L' u. P% a' }& i+ F
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
